Midfield Dominator

1Manchester United doesn't want you. You have to be sent there like a bitch! 2The doctor who cured you is also a bug! You might as well write him to death! 3. Even though you have the ability to read minds, you still talk nonsense. You are afraid that others will not know! Aren't you afraid of being pulled into slices? 4 It's always 13 to 0.10 To 0. Why don't you write about basketball? This book has too many flaws...

I picked a few chapters and read them. I was so embarrassed that I just asked them to quit. It was really too poisonous. I gave you some suggestions. I just deleted them. If I could persist in reading, I knelt down and called my adoptive father.

Winning the cup in the third tier of England is probably a myth. Do you know how competitive the English league is? Do you know what bench depth is? People who read football novels are at least pseudo-fans. You still need to have professional knowledge, otherwise no matter how many books you write, they will be thrown into the street.

Unless the protagonist is written to be so "innocent" and "unsophisticated", I really wonder how he, who can be considered an orphan, survives in this world "without being stained by the mire". Also, it really is the animal world. It roars at every turn, which gives me goosebumps.

This book is for students below the first grade of junior high school, right?

What a brain show! Don't talk about going back to Manchester United! The key is that people don't want you! Give up decisively

I'm speechless. I've written so much for two internal training matches. Two hundred thousand words for only two games. It's not a problem to expand the plot. Just update it quickly. At least you can't update an excessive plot for several days. If the updates are slow and the plot is not compact, I can only leave it to fatten up, but I often forget about it.

There are so few comments in the comment area because everyone is scolding you for being deleted, right? The most important thing for an author is to control his own self-pleasure! Don't comment and don't want to read it!

The author may have thought that writing a Korean Guardian reporter who specializes in black protagonists would be a good idea. The story is like a scumbag. The reason why you wrote this supporting role is entirely for the sake of the plot. There is also the 10-billionaire businessman uncle who suddenly appeared before and said that his company is invested by the protagonist's father. The plot is even more scummy. The scumbag written in it can be brushed off in one stroke. However, he is self-righteous and has a premonition that there will be many similar plots in the future. I don't read it. The originally good story has been finished by the author for his own pleasure.

It's a scumbag-like inheritance story, but halfway through, an uncle with a net worth of tens of billions suddenly appears and says that his father originally invested in his company. Is he sick? You might as well design the protagonist to be a reborn person and invest in some potential companies to make it smoother.