Midfield Dominator

Manchester United didn't want you. They insisted on sending you up there like a cheapskate! 2. The doctor who cured your illness is also a bug! You might as well just kill him off! 3. You have mind-reading abilities and you still go around telling everyone. Are you afraid others won't know? Aren't you afraid of being dissected? 4. You keep saying scores like 13-0 or 10-0. Why don't you go write about basketball? This book has too many flaws...

I skimmed through a few chapters, and they made me cringe so badly I immediately gave up. They're just too awful! My advice to you is to just scroll past them. If you manage to finish, I'll kneel down and call you my godfather!

Winning a cup in the third tier of English football is practically a myth. Do you know the level of competition in English leagues? Do you know what bench depth is? Anyone who reads football novels is at least a casual fan; you need some professional knowledge, otherwise, no matter how many books you write, they'll all flop.

Why write the protagonist as so "naive" and "unworldly"? I really wonder how he, as an orphan, managed to survive in this world "untainted by its filth." Also, is this some kind of animal documentary? The constant howling gave me goosebumps.

This book is for students below the first year of junior high school, right?

You've lost your mind! You insist on talking about Manchester United! The problem is, they don't want you! Just give up.

Speechless. Two internal training matches and you've written this much? 200,000 Words for just two matches! A larger plot isn't a problem, as long as updates are fast. At the very least, a transitional plot shouldn't take several days to update. If updates are slow and the plot isn't tight, I can only leave it to accumulate, but I often forget about it.

The comment section has so few comments, it's obvious everyone's criticizing you for having your posts deleted, right? The most important thing for an author is to control their self-indulgent antics! I'm not commenting and I don't want to read any more!

The author probably thought writing a Korean-American Guardian reporter specifically to smear the protagonist was a brilliant touch, but the plot is terrible. It seems the author only included this supporting character to pad the story. And that billionaire uncle who suddenly appeared, claiming his company was invested in by the protagonist's father—that plot point was even worse.

This is such a terrible inheritance plot. Suddenly, a billionaire uncle appears claiming his company was an investment his father made. Seriously? You might as well have made the protagonist a reincarnated person who also invests in some promising businesses; that would have been much smoother.