The Legacy of Immortality

I watched it a long, long time ago. The setting is novel and there are many wonderful ideas, but it is too long, too long. I saw that it was abandoned in the middle. I opened it a while ago and saw that it was still being updated. I really admire the author for his great perseverance. I would like to give my own opinion. The world is huge and there are many pitfalls. Can the author fill it in faster? Also, the heroine feels like she is constantly changing the map, and the people around her change again and again, and it feels like she can't remember it. This kind of writing will make people lose motivation if they are not careful, just like playing a game, upgrading and killing monsters becomes a daily routine, and it becomes boring. In fact, what I have always wanted to know is when the dimpled boy at the beginning will reunite with the heroine, and the background of the organization. If you change the map to fight monsters, it is best to fix the team members, then write out the characteristics of the team members and create a good group image. Will you open it sometimes to see the author's updates? Let me admire you. The author has stopped recently. Is there something wrong or does he not plan to write anymore? I think it's a pity. The beginning is really great, and many of the ideas are wonderful. If I change the way I write it, I might be able to become a god. As I write this, I suddenly think of another book, Senbon Junyang. That one also changes the map to fight monsters, but there are not so many hidden clues and mysteries, and the male protagonist's presence is not high, but there will always be several appearances in the middle. That book also has many shortcomings, but I have to say that the ideas about each world are wonderful. When I read it, I felt that I could take out some of the worlds in it and write a separate fairy tale novel. I can't tell what the difference is, but that one attracted me and I finished reading it. I didn't have enough motivation to abandon this book. I hope the author can improve himself even more. I think you are an author with the potential to become a god.

I read it in one sitting. I admire my wife for being able to write such a long book, and it gets better and better as it goes on. Many people said that the prequel was not good to watch and was driving away customers. But I think the prequel is also good, but it may feel disconnected from the later chapters due to the heroine's amnesia, and it's a bit long. But I think the author's decision to make the heroine lose her memory is a big deal, because after the amnesia, the heroine who is not disturbed by the memory of her past life becomes more pure, and I like her character more o(*////▽////*)q But to be fair, the prequel is not as good as the later one. I personally feel that the following chapters are getting more and more exciting. The series of plots after entering the Ming Dynasty are full of ups and downs and are super attractive! I really admire my wife for being able to conceive such a complete, interesting and whimsical world. And I feel that this article is very unique, because it is not an orthodox monster-killing and upgrading process, but has suspense and decryption elements, which makes this article more interesting. It's really satisfying to watch the heroine peel off her cocoon and discover that the bad guy has reversed the situation. In addition, the characters described by my wife also have their own characteristics. I especially like watching Shuixin and her friends go on adventures, help each other, and solve problems. It makes everyone happy. I also like Shuixin's character. She is brave, kind, and has bottom lines and principles. She is also as beautiful as a flower⁄(⁄⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄⁄)⁄ This article has so many advantages, I will like it no matter how I read it. I just don't know why my wife wanted to set up a male protagonist (should it be?) In the prequel. I always feel that he is redundant (x), and I feel that he and the female protagonist have no sense of camaraderie, and their falling in love was very sudden. But he didn't have much of a role anyway, so I ignored him (cough). There are no emotional scenes in this article so far. I hope it can be maintained in the future. QwQ. The plot is so exciting, but if the emotional scenes are not written well, it will cause damage. Shui Xin found it more interesting to take risks with her friends. I don't know why not many people read such a beautiful article, but I really support my wife! What you wrote is really beautiful! The plot has progressed so far, and I feel like there is still a lot to write about. I look forward to the world you describe in your writing. I hope you can come on, ma'am! Calling for you!

It's not a traditional story about fighting monsters and upgrading. It doesn't feel exciting, nor is it very unpleasant. It doesn't have a very interesting plot, nor is it very boring. The characters are not very good, but they are not bad either. The writing is quite good, but it is very cumbersome. The setting is very cumbersome, and the plot development is also very cumbersome. Things that can be explained clearly in one or two hundred words have to be written in one or two chapters. Overall, it is very mediocre. What I don't like the most is the amnesia joke. From the comments, it seems that the heroine has always been in a state of amnesia. Anyway, I don't like it very much. She is like a fool and doesn't understand anything. She has to form a team and rely on her teammates to make up for common sense. Personally, I prefer the protagonist to play by herself, but currently, it seems that the heroine brings her teammates with her no matter what she does. It is estimated that all the subsequent experiences will be in a team. And it seems that the whole story is only in the small world of Fuyue Realm. I am a little confused. How can the world of cultivating immortals, which is only at the Nascent Soul stage, write more than 6 million words. Originally, I was looking forward to the heroine going to all the worlds. . . How to describe it, it feels like writing some trivial things in a large world view, but the writing is very good, so I always feel that it is a pity to discard it if it is tasteless.

I think a big reason why this book is not popular is that it is placed in the wrong section. Obviously the style is not the same as other novels in fantasy romance, okay? Obviously it should be in the classical fairy tale! How can people who like to read similar articles about cultivating immortals find it?

It's hard for the author to come up with such a good plot and work so hard to update the article every day. I sincerely thank the author!

Wow, please create a character column. Other books have character columns where people can vote, but this one doesn't even have a chance to vote 😭 It's a waste of more than 20,000 of my fan points.

I have read 600 chapters. Here are my thoughts: The first part (the first 80 chapters) is really painful to read. The language is awkward, the characters are not fleshed out, there are too many settings for cultivating immortality, and the plot is boring. I really forced myself to endure and read on. But starting from Chapter 81, when the heroine leaves the underground and enters the mainstream world, the story has a strong plot, reasonable design, and correct views. After Chapter 200, the writing gradually becomes smoother. All in all, it's still worth seeing. Among all the novels written by Qidian about female protagonists cultivating immortality, these should be considered some of the best ones. Five-star praise!

The writing is quite good, and the writing style and IQ are also online, but it's not quite like a fairy tale. It doesn't have any cultivation upgrades. Even if there are secret treasures, the heroine can't use them. It's more like a detective suspense novel, always reasoning. It's a million words and the heroine is still losing her memory. It is estimated that the entire article revolves around that mysterious organization. Therefore, it may not be in line with the taste of readers who are accustomed to reading fairy tales about upgrading, treasure hunting, and map replacement.

The plot of this book was set up in such a way that it was difficult for me to figure it out. The sense of plausibility was really refreshing!

There is no male protagonist, right? I don't like fairy tales with male protagonists, because they are all here to torture the female protagonist, and then the female protagonist is a masochist who likes to warm up to the man's butt.

It feels like the heroine is just an eye, an essential cog. What the author wants to write about is a world that is gradually collapsing, and countries and people acting for their own goals. This part is particularly exciting! Readers who like those super cool upgrade streams may be disappointed. This book does not read 5 years later... 2 Years later... This book just tells us that sometimes cultivating immortals is not about meditating in a cave, and improving cultivation is not about gaining treasures by upgrading and fighting monsters. The heroine is truly growing up, experiencing the world and making choices. What's very nice is that this book doesn't make the heroine feel aggrieved. The character and identity of the heroine make the tone much more relaxed! Sure enough, "saving" the world and "breaking" the prison of the world are still different. I miss the mage 🤫🤫🤫

I was irritated by what I was watching earlier and couldn't stand it anymore, it was too long-winded.

It can be seen that the author has made full preparations to write this novel. The road to becoming a god must be very difficult. I support the author greatly!

If you keep reading, it will be no worse than "Slowly Journey to Immortality", "I Will Not Become an Immortal", and "Sister Xiuzhen's Sword", and it will even get better the more you write it. It is a real novel about a heroine cultivating immortality. The heroine discovers the world, understands the world, and saves the world step by step. It is a thoughtful article. It's not comparable to those mindless romance novels that think about fighting and snatching men every day. It is even more difficult to get more than 1,200 chapters. Only the person suspected of being the male protagonist left midway, and so far, there is no male protagonist. For a good novel, the world view is very important. "The Misfortune of the Immortal Path" is undoubtedly well written, and the world view is unconventional and novel. Like it very much.

Since there isn't much emotional drama, there shouldn't be any. I don't like boys, so I don't like this book either.

Can I say that I like the prequels? The later ones are not as good as the prequel. I personally feel that Shui Xin lost her memory and it is not good to watch. It doesn't have that feeling 🤤🤤

The text is concise, lively and lively; with a few lines of dialogue and a few strokes of description, the characters' personalities are vividly displayed on the page, with every move and every move, they come alive!

The novel is very well written, but I always feel like it's not updated enough. It's so painful to keep up with updates every day. I look forward to more updates from the author!

The first paragraph of text seems very attractive, the plot is clear and the characters are clear, but the second chapter starts to become confusing. I can't understand it. It's a mess and I don't know what the heroine is thinking. I've been reading novels for ten years and I still don't know what the heroine is thinking. It means that my brain can't keep up with the author's thinking, okay ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ! There is one

Now does this book have a male protagonist? If there is a male protagonist, I will leave.

I've been watching the first part of Lightning Protection for so long that I don't even know what it's talking about. It's too confusing and out of touch. The long psychological descriptions are painful to watch

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Writing Festival Wishing Season"} With a novel and interesting world view, a unique and lovable heroine, and a unique cultivation system setting, the author persisted in writing nearly 7 million words despite extremely low popularity and extremely poor data. It is really amazing! But the story suddenly ends at dawn, and the point where everything is waiting for something to be done really makes me confused. T-T Others want to get rich overnight for RV tickets or something like that, but I think the reason for being exposed overnight is to fill the hole with money. .

This beginning makes me wonder if I'm reading a fantasy novel. I can't stand it. The setting of this group feels like modern mercenaries and not like fantasy cultivators.

Overall it was pretty good, but the main character was too talkative. There are more and more psychological activities, and a large part of them are suspected of being superfluous.

I was confused at the beginning, but I didn't embarrass myself 😄😄

The setting is really novel. Although it is obscure in the early stage, it is an indispensable experience before Shuixin starts the main story. Unfortunately, in the later stage, Little Leaf only appears near the end. It's still hard to get over the rush of the ending.

Why do you want the heroine to lose her memory? It's so depressing to watch.

When I read the first part, I felt it was difficult to understand, mainly because of the author's way of expression - it was very Western, or it felt a bit like it was not a local novel. (Like when I read a Japanese novel translated into Chinese some time ago...) The setting of the book is actually not difficult to understand, mainly because the author's writing is terrible... But I endured it, mainly because the "three noes" of the heroine in the early stage attracted me, and I like to watch calm and smart heroines (after seeing it, I found that it has nothing to do with the protagonist of this article, and can even be said to be completely different) I thought that it should be better in the future, but the result is even worse. In fact, many of the ideas are pretty good, but the main reason is that the author is really good at talking, and it's a bunch of nonsense that made me jump like crazy. My finger slipped for a long time and I found that it was still on the BB. I broke my defense. In fact, you can really reduce some unnecessary words. Also, can we avoid OOC? Some character settings do not originally have expressions such as "jawed" or "dumbfounded", but the author has used these two words countless times... Regardless of the role (this is enough, in the short term, I am annoyed by these two idioms). What I admire the most is the heroine's mouth, my own mother, she really can say anything. Even though my emotional intelligence is worrying, I am not ashamed of it. (It may be a bit exaggerated, but I really feel that there are some things that don't need to be said. It is very disrespectful to say it. The explanation given in the article is that the heroine has a strong ability to commit suicide... Sister, you are quite self-aware...) The most important point is also the point that runs through the entire article. If the writing is not good, this is a hard requirement. Even if your plot is crap, if the writing is good, I can still watch it. If the writing is not good, no matter how good the plot is, I will not watch it. .

Seeing that the heroine came out and lost her memory, the heroine Wei Sheng's bad light appeared, which was very different from her performance in the underground, even though she said she had lost her memory. It is to give human beings who don't want the Holy Mother but cannot grasp the degree of kindness and love. Then amnesia is very complicated here. It is a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless.

I watched a lot of it for free, the plot was very good, and the characters were all great, but the plot felt a bit draggy. . . It took Chapter 1000 to reach the golden elixir. Moreover, every scene in the plot is very long, and I feel like there are a lot of things that can be skipped. Overall, good luck, author~