Battle of the Pure Spirit

1. Why are there so few people? Feel a little unfair and sad! 2. The paragraph is too long, it is recommended to change it. 3. There is a somewhat grand feeling in the beginning, but it is too straightforward. Did you fail to describe it well? Apart from the life-and-death relationship between a few people, the rest is very flat and unattractive. 4. I feel sorry for those children. Finally, pay attention to the characterization of the characters! I feel a little bit worse, such as appearance, heart, language, etc. Come on ٩( 'ω' )و

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Check in, cheers up, welcome back, let's do it together, thank you

The writing is good, and it can be seen that it is very carefully written. I recommend it and hope that we can encourage each other.

Well written! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Just updated this a year ago. . You probably have no motivation yourself. .