Step by Step in the Alien World, a Lotus Grows

The IQ of the heroine after time travel is really not like the setting of the strong woman in the previous life. The author is not very old, right?

What does a proudly wrinkled nose look like? Have you tried it?

After reading Chapter 58, he said that he was very gay in his previous life, but when Hua Qingcheng was being played with, he had no reaction at all and instead wanted to leave. This is completely the behavior of a ruthless villain. It's like seeing a rapist and thinking it's normal. Is there any difference between a man being raped and a woman being raped? If you can save him, why do you just watch? Although she was later moved by Hua Xianxian's sincerity, the heroine's psychological activities at this time were disgusting.

The final point that I couldn't stand was the conversation between Master Qi and the heroine. For the sake of a stranger's child, he chose not to marry someone he was already engaged to and still liked? Is this foreshadowing of the heroine's life story? Master Qi was still angry at first, but when the heroine asked him if he could promise to be good to Yun Niang for the rest of his life, he answered with a serious face: "Yes?" Twists or details not written well? And before, the heroine said that she had a master and got two pieces of clothing. Yun Niang was not surprised at all and didn't even ask what master the heroine had, so she happily put on a piece of clothing that could be changed at will and had defensive power?

I have the impression that the recent books written by the author Jun are pretty good, and I thought the other works uploaded would not be too bad. However, in fact it is a huge disappointment! The details don't stand up to scrutiny, and the emotional expression is unnatural (too violent or abrupt), so the heroine is not likable! The heroine of this article assumes that in her previous life, she was a business elite who experienced ups and downs and was well-versed in human relations. Once her adopted sister was killed and her soul traveled to another world. The author wanted to portray a heroine with a cold appearance, clear inner grudges, and mature thinking and skill. However, in the actual plot, the heroine's performance was not worthy of the character at all! For example, when I first met the master's skeleton in the cave, I immediately took away the clothes from the skeleton thinking that there would be no gain. The author's expression is: when the clothes were pulled, the skeleton fell apart. The heroine then bowed to the skeleton and apologized, saying that she had not expected this to happen, then took the clothes, picked up the relics, and left! Then the master's soul appeared, interpreted what the heroine did, and said that he saw that the heroine was a person who was realistic and not hypocritical, who knew right from wrong and was not greedy. But what the readers see is that the heroine has just traveled through time. When she saw the bones of the deceased, she felt no awe in her heart. She thought that she would gain something from this trip. What clothes do people need after they are dead? To get the clothes on the skeleton, the author used "pull". After pulling, the skeleton fell apart and then he said that he didn't know it would be like this. This was really poor. I don't know whether to say that the heroine was instantly brainless or that she was a white lotus! He took the clothes and relics of the deceased and left without any help in cleaning up the bones. Reality is real reality. If not hypocritical, it would be a bit fake. In fact, he is indifferent and ungrateful! Especially later in the jungle hunting scene, he even helped dig holes and bury the corpses of the enemy. It is hard to say that people die like a light and should be buried in peace! Such as this, there are still many plot details or logic that cannot withstand scrutiny. To put it bluntly, the author's skills were limited at that time, his words were not expressive, and his thinking was not rigorous enough. He even lacked maturity and tact in dealing with others. How could he write a heroine who is smart, mature, and empathetic! Let's take a look at the author Jun's works in recent years. You can see the growth of people between the lines, which is indeed different!

The sentences in this article really describe..."A figure jumped down" and "plucked a blade of grass and put it in his mouth"...😂

After reading the first four chapters, the heroine was reborn in another world, with all her meridians unable to practice. With the desire to get a golden finger, she went to a cave to bring out the things inside. In the middle of the night, a soul-like grandfather appeared and wanted to teach the heroine how to practice and help her recover. The heroine's character... Except when the author wants her to be powerful, she doesn't look like a powerful figure in the business world at all. But maybe it will get better later. Not very toxic, but farewell.

Not stupid, not smart, with a worrying IQ. Whether in the business world or in politics, people who have reached a certain status on their own are very sensitive to the behavior of the enemy, especially if the behavior is targeted at themselves. They will never shake their heads and muddle along, and will do their best. Find out the inside story and make a response. If you can't find out the inside story, you will prepare for the worst and stay on high alert. The heroine's character is written as such, but there is no sense of behavior at all. If someone is being targeted, she will think that it is just like that. Without the halo of the heroine, she will die 800 times.

Why is there no chapter sixty-seven?

The heroine was betrayed and tortured to death by her sister who raised her in her previous life. After her rebirth, she did not become wiser and learned her lesson. All I can say is that having the halo of a heroine means being willful

Why can't you marry the seventh master if you take care of the heroine? The heroine at that time was already eleven years old and capable of taking care of herself. I don't understand the contradiction between the two things.

This book doesn't look like it was written by Meiren. Everything else written by Meiren is basically very good. Why does this book feel like the heroine is too...? If the protagonist had a halo, she would have died long ago.

Why is it so like fighting against the sky?

I recommend "Rebirth: The Daughter is a Little Bit Lazy" to everyone. It can be called the novel version of "The Temptation of Going Home". The plot is ups and downs, interlocking, and there is ~romantic~. You can search for "Rebirth: The Daughter of Gold is a Little Bit Lazy", or you can search for the author: An Zike

It's really unimaginable for a cold person to touch his nose frequently.

Why is this book always missing chapters? It's so sad🔨🔨🔨🔨

4 Recommendation votes, I like it.

I came in to take a look at Jiaohua. Com. Why do I think this cover looks so much like Gongsun Erniang from the Kensan fic drawn by Ibuki Satsuki? ? This picture is 13 years old...

People here don't need to eat, which is missing one of the great joys of life.