Break Through the Immortal Palace

The writing is okay, but should the author pay attention to the tastes and needs of market readers? Instead of writing according to your own ideas, I think it would be much better if that were the case!

The story is very twists and turns, quite touching, overall it's good.

When writing characters, you can describe them in many aspects and don't need to be limited to one description, so that the characters will become fuller.

A good novel, twists and turns and evocative. The writing is well controlled. It would be better to strengthen the psychological description of the characters. There are some imperfections in the writing style, but the plot is attractive and the characters have their own characteristics. It can be seen from this that the author has carefully laid out the direction of the book before writing. It is a masterpiece that enriches the soul. It is worth reading, tasting, and thinking deeply. It is indeed good. I appreciate and look forward to it!!!!! Brother, I support you!

Author, are you lonely? It means that I feel lonely after reading your book! I bet you won't reply to me, please reply to me~

Keep up the good work, don't be a jerk, write according to your own ideas, you can do it

This book gave me the feeling of re-reading previous non-internet novels, and it really has a traditional beauty to it.

The plot of this book was set up in such a way that it was difficult for me to figure it out. The sense of plausibility was really refreshing!

The author's writing style is very good. You can't tell that this is his first novel. It doesn't have a sense of youthfulness. It is really a masterpiece. Keep up the good work!

I'm ashamed that I didn't even think of voting for you until now when I was reading the book. I looked at the wall and thought about it, hehe!

I read your book and it's really good. Come on, I've also written one and I've already made an appointment. Please recommend it to your collection. I'm your fan. I hope all readers who read it will support it and give it to your collection. Thank you for the newcomers! [Url=buQNveaa]

Sometimes appropriate description of the environment can make the characters express their emotions more fully, so I hope the author can improve in this aspect.

Anyone who writes code knows that the thoughts of the novel are the thoughts of the author. There are many things that we may not be able to experience personally in our lifetime, but because of words and language, we have room for imagination.

The language of the novel is very interesting. Some words may seem to be ridiculing, but in fact they contain profound truths. I believe the later chapters will be even more exciting, support me!

1. Pay attention to the coherence of the plot, try not to make logical errors, and don't make readers feel that they are inconsistent! 2. Pay attention to practicing your writing skills. It doesn't mean that the scene is grand, but the description is exquisite. To practice ordinary language to reveal extraordinary artistic conception is the highest state of language control! 3. Please try not to make typos. This will make readers question the author's level. Moreover, readers are enjoying reading and suddenly a typo appears, which is really off-putting! 4. Increase the connotation and artistic conception of the novel. For old readers who have read too many books, all the gorgeous clothes are not as attractive as the resonant connotation!

It's a really good book. I hope to become a great god soon and be worshiped by thousands of people! 🌹🌹

The beginning is very grand, and the pits dug are not bad, but the later stages must be controlled well, otherwise it will be easy to mess up.

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Qingqingzi chants, lingering in my heart. Your figure lingers deeply in my heart. I am grateful for your support, grateful for your messages, and grateful for the precious insights you give me every time. Before dawn, the morning mist fills the eyes with longing, but it will always disperse, just like your works and your character, one day the clouds will clear and the moon will shine!