Martial Arts Overlord

Come on, author! I have done something very sorry to you, because I am also a student, and I will never do such a thing from now on! I have been following your book for three years, you are really amazing!

The setting is uncreative, too watery, and has too much nonsense. There are too many fighting scenes. On the way to do something. There must be someone in trouble. [Then there are many chapters, and you can almost know that the plot to be written seems to have no meaning.] The description of the character's strength has conflict bugs and inconsistencies. The supporting characters' fights are described too much, (Water) The protagonist is particularly a virgin, saving everyone every time, and then writing a lot of nonsense. The supporting characters have no obvious character and no personality. The ones written before Canglan Dynasty were quite acceptable and can barely be read. It collapsed all the way to the back. Emotional Line Bing Ruolan, the relationship makes sense. After all, they often mix together. Yue Haitang, this one came after the dynasty, which is outrageous. I remember it was mentioned in the book before that she was regarded as a younger brother. (Others can see that she is a woman disguised as a man, but why the protagonist cannot see it. It is explained in the book that she has doubts, but quickly denies it, because everyone regards "her" as a man in front of the protagonist. Is this explanation too forced?) I went to the Sword Tomb and looked at the memory. Yue Haitang missed the protagonist in the palace, and then, just. Accepted that Yue Haitang liked her. This is all about nothing. The relationship between the two was exhausted before. They can be regarded as better friends. They fell in love for no reason Is that right? Bing Ruolan, Bing Ruolan. You are still in the Ice Palace, and the engagement with the Nangong family has not been terminated yet. You are doing this outside. It is really yours, before leaving the dynasty. The foreshadowing is pretty good, except for the emotional line, except for the protagonist Yang Wan'er. It's a bit forced to reduce intelligence but it's not a big problem. I am still looking forward to how it will be written. That's it, a good hand of cards was played to pieces. I have only read 1,700 or 800 photos so far, and I will add more if I find any problems later. I've seen so many of them, it's a pity to abandon them. Take a hard look.

Come on, this book has a lot to write about, it's a very good book

Hurry up and write, it's better not to keep interrupting

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The protagonist's emotional intelligence is not low anymore, it's simply stupid. A time traveler has been influenced by the information explosion. The protagonist is obviously not stupid. There are always people beside him. Yang Wan'er's help and care for him are obviously better than the treatment of others. As a result, the protagonist can actually think that she is acting. It has been delayed for more than a thousand chapters without realizing it. This is impossible to be unreasonable. The author is really too deliberate.

To be honest, I will always support this book. I read this book from high school to college. Although the plot is a bit cliche, I just want to see the protagonist show off in the end. Come on ＾0＾~ Keep writing (I remember the author seems to be a college student, I was still a freshman in high school). Although I stopped updating in the middle, didn't I come over?

The writing is disgusting. Please plan your combat power first when writing a novel next time.

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Make the pattern too big! I can't grasp it anymore! It sucks! ! ! ! ! ! !

Shouldn't the most important thing for a time traveler be the brain? There is absolutely no protagonist!

It's a shame that I watched it until the end, but there was no result.

When I read him, he had only written more than 600 chapters. I saw more than 2,000 chapters and stopped. It was not that I didn't want to read it, but that I wanted to save more to read again. There are too many touching plots in the book. We are all living people, so we naturally understand what is touching in it. So far, Luo Feng's sentence "Isn't it better to bend your heart than steel?" Always in my mind He is a conscientious author with good writing skills and extremely responsible writing content. I remember that for a period of time, he was also confused. He didn't know whether he was on the right path. The saturation of the Internet era is due to too many authors with good writing skills and good content who have not really developed. Among those who have developed, some use their own names to write nonsense, make mistakes, and deceive fans. But Chinese people always have such feelings, oh, why did I go off topic while talking? How to say it? This is a good book, a really good book. When you read more than 100 chapters, you will definitely fall in love with it. Believe me, crazy people are no longer crazy, but books must always be written. Come on😄

There are too many levels in the physical training realm. The first level of advancement can be divided into 6 small realms, the first level of initial small achievement, the first level of early great achievement, the first level of early peak, the first level of mid-level small achievement, the first level of mid-level great achievement, the first level of mid-level peak, the first level of peak small achievement, the first level of peak great achievement, the first level of ultimate, and then the second level. The author has divided this realm into too many. I divided this realm based on the feeling of the realm in the book. The main reason is that the realm in the book is a bit unclear.

This ending is too hasty and sloppy. It's just a rush to get it on the shelves. The author probably didn't have the patience to write it or there will be a second one, otherwise it will be completely unfinished. There are too many things that have not been explained clearly before the end. Let's not talk about other things, let's talk about Luo Feng's confidante, at least Canglan Yue, Yue Haitang, Hongyue Fairy and Ling Yue Xianji will definitely become the wife of the protagonist and get married to the protagonist. Lin Hongyi and Yang Wan'er are also very likely, but these heroines are not even mentioned at the end. The most important thing is that the ending does not even allow them to complete their wedding to Bing Ruolan. I really cannot accept this ending and I am so disappointed with the author!

To be honest, it was a bit of a collapse later on. There were so many people who were crowned kings, and the holy masters of the holy land were only earth-level kings.

Pig's Knuckle is simply stupid. Every time he gets promoted, he talks about how powerful he is, but when he encounters someone 0.001 Level higher than him, he still can't beat him. He also boasts that he has a high level of understanding. Monster, genius is like this. The more I read this book, the more useless it becomes.

Is it just that simple? Why the hell does this feel so unfinished, so many things haven't been explained clearly!

The content is very exciting, but it is too tedious. After writing more than 3,000 chapters, the protagonist has not yet become a saint. If the content can be streamlined and condensed, it will not be a complete eunuch.

It's coming to an end all of a sudden. I'm really a little bit sad. After all, it's estimated that I have to write at least 3500 to 4000 chapters before the end. The Martial Saint is not the end of martial arts, nor is the God of Martial Arts. The gate of heaven and earth is the door to a new world. "The Nine Transformations of the Dragon" should be that the skills from outside the territory may not be complete. They ended up in the world of true martial arts for some reason. True martial arts are only acquired by chance. True martial arts are most likely due to practicing the ninth transformation. Before he could reach perfection, he was besieged and killed by strong men from other realms until he fell. Finally, he used the power of his origin to bury and seal the "Nine Transformations of the Divine Dragon" in the Chilong Mountains, and turned it into an ordinary light-body martial art, the "Soaring Dragon Steps", waiting for the arrival of those who were destined to come. I don't know how many years later, Zi Hongyuan, the dean of Ziyang College, went out to practice in the Chilong Mountains, accidentally obtained the "Soaring Dragon Steps", and then brought it back to the academy, so there is a subsequent story...

I hope the author can finish the rest of the foreshadowing and subsequent stories. Come on, author, I will always support you.

To be honest, I have read so many novels, and there are not many novels in which the protagonist is still a virgin at the end of the book. The key is that there are so many confidantes who are enamored of him, and I also like them, but there is no substantial progress. There seem to be only two sex scenes between the protagonist and the heroine in the book, and they all happened with Cang Lanyue. But what makes people speechless is that they took off their clothes but put away their guns at the critical moment. I don't know if it's the author's bad taste or something wrong with him!

Shouldn't the most important thing for a time traveler be the brain? There is absolutely no protagonist!

Thank you to the author. I started reading this book in junior high school and I feel it is getting better and better until now. Keep reading.

I accidentally came across this book on Daily Recommendation, and I hope writers can write more books like this. Already rewarded

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I really vomited when the author wrote descriptions. I touched my nose every day. Anyway, you have to touch your nose when writing your words and reactions. What do you want to do? It's so disgusting.