A Fortuitous Scheme

Why am I the only one who thinks it looks pretty good?

As I read on, I noticed contradictions and inconsistencies, which was quite disappointing. The author clearly couldn't handle this kind of story.

I'm truly impressed. One minute she says her father knows what his daughter has done to protect the family and that she's capable of protecting herself, not just someone who's naive; the next minute she says her father knows his daughter is simple-minded and doesn't trust others. There are just too many contradictions.

The male lead has a really unlikable personality, and the female lead, who is usually very smart and resourceful, becomes completely clueless and blushes constantly when she's around him. Ugh, I'm out of books to read, I guess I'll just have to force myself to keep going.

Recommended by passerby 👍

The author's writing is fluent, and the plot is intricately woven and captivating. Ancient romance novels are difficult to write, and this author is one of the best in the genre; it's definitely worth reading. One small suggestion: the author should be careful with the use of the term "young man" for the male lead and supporting characters.

I thought the first few chapters would be a good domestic drama novel, but the style completely changed after the third aunt appeared. The inner monologues are incredibly annoying; is it really necessary to explain so much? Readers aren't stupid; a single action or glance can annoy them for a page or two. It's been over a hundred chapters with absolutely no progress. The younger sister and second aunt are constantly bouncing around; it's so boring!

This pace is too slow. They've investigated, but not thoroughly. We've read over 300 chapters, and not a single person has been resolved. What are they doing?!

I'm truly speechless at how all the boys and girls under ten years old display "extraordinary wisdom," ruthlessness, and cunning, easily rivaling the reborn female protagonist. What's the point of the female protagonist being reborn like this? It only shows how incredibly stupid she was in her previous life; she wouldn't have survived without being reborn.

The author's memory is like a fish's—full of small plot holes and inconsistencies. The overall plot is decent, but the relationship between the male and female leads is portrayed too awkwardly and lacks emotional resonance. It seems the female lead doesn't particularly like the male lead, and the development of their relationship is inexplicable.