A Fortuitous Scheme

Why am I the only one who thinks it looks good?

As I watched it, I realized that the contradictions and inconsistencies were simply disappointing. The author could not control such a story.

I was really convinced. One moment he said that the father knew that his daughter was protecting the family and had done all those things. She had the ability to protect herself and was not just ignorant. The next moment she said that the father knew that his daughter was simple-minded and not defensive. There were too many contradictions.

The male protagonist has a particularly unpleasant personality, while the female protagonist, who is usually a very smart and strategic person, has a negative IQ and gets all kinds of blushes when she meets the male protagonist. Hey, I'm running out of books, so I'll just keep reading.

Passing by recommendation 👍

The author's writing style is fluent, and the plots are interlocking and fascinating. Ancient Chinese proverbs are difficult to write. This is one of the best among ancient Chinese writers. It is definitely worth reading. I would like to make a small suggestion. The author should be careful to use the title "young man" for the male protagonist and male supporting character in the article. They are all generals and high officials in the court. It feels a bit inconsistent to call them this way , but in any case, this article is definitely not a brainless article and belongs to the top grade of ancient Chinese.

I thought it was a good house-fighting book in the first few chapters, but once the third aunt came out, the style of painting changed, and the inner monologue was annoying as hell. Is it necessary to explain so much? Readers are not stupid. Every movement or look can annoy me for a page or two. It's been over a hundred chapters and there's no progress at all. My sister and my second aunt are jumping around every day. It's so boring.

The pace is too slow. I checked it but didn't check it completely. I saw more than 300 chapters and no one has solved it yet. What are you doing! ! !

I really admire all the little boys and girls under the age of ten who show "extraordinary wisdom", ruthlessness, intrigues, and are not inferior to the reborn heroine. What is the point of a reborn heroine? It can only show that she was too stupid in her previous life. She can't live without rebirth. Moreover, even if the heroine is reborn, she does not take the initiative or acts passively. The description of the characters is also very boring, and she looks like "an evil ghost from hell" at every turn. Have you seen the evil ghosts in hell? All the descriptions are really inconsistent when placed on an eight or nine-year-old child. The heroine originally described should be a strategic person, but I didn't see the specific strategy, only the demeanor of the heroine. Can a person prove that she is smart just by having a calm and quiet demeanor?

There are inconsistencies. The author has a memory like a fish. There are quite a lot of small loopholes. The plot is generally good, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too bluntly portrayed and lacks empathy. I feel like the heroine doesn't particularly like the hero. The relationship between the two develops inexplicably.