A Middle School Cartoonist

Those losers who don't have even a hint of chuuni in their hearts and have been eroded by reality should not read this novel.

Why do you have to arrange so many inner struggles of the protagonist, and write about how the protagonist is confused and awakened again and again, and then becomes confused and awakened after a few chapters? This is boring. It's not a deep subject in the first place, so don't be so deliberate about making something deep. Now that you have passed the second grade, please go to the second grade, continue to the second grade, and draw comics happily, Paulina, this is enough. It would be brilliant to write out the unexpected plot of point 2. It's enough to add a little bit of life philosophy to the highlights. The subject matter of this book is destined not to attract a lot of readers who like to read tangled content about reality, so why bother writing a lot of tangled words with such a literary youth? I really don't know if it has been greatly affected by readers' comments. Now that I have read chapter 50, I feel like I am wavering. Isn't it enough for the protagonist to realize once? After awakening to become a brave knight king, and then realizing to become a demon king, and in the middle, he also realized that he should do something about the excellent works of his previous life. Is it annoying, and the reason for awakening has always been the sequelae of time travel. How fragile is the protagonist's psychology and how delicate are his nerves? Can he be like a normal person? The main character's speech is actually very well written, the jokes are used well, and there are quite a lot of laughs. Personally, I feel that those superfluous things affected the performance of this book. I hope to see great progress in the future.

I remember I was still a virgin when this book first came out. After all these years, I am a mother of two children. Isn't this book finished yet?

This book has a lot of poisonous points for me, so I shouldn't like it~~ But it just so happened that the extreme tomboyishness hit my cute side, and I couldn't stop reading it~~~😭 I hope the author can carry forward this chuuni style~~🌹 By the way, I would like to make a suggestion. There is still room for improvement in the exciting parts of this book. Don't just focus on the second part. ~ The author can consider writing in detail the various reactions of readers when they see the comics drawn by the protagonist, as well as the sales volume, readers' comments, etc. Although these contents have nothing to do with the main plot, they are very easy to create excitement and bring more pleasure to readers~~~[It can also be used to get some water by the way, so why not~] In addition, the content is a little too thin, and months often pass by in a blink of an eye. In this regard, you can consider adding some branches to supplement the shortcomings of the main line, otherwise you may not be able to write much content by the time you finish the book~~[After all, you still need to be more watery]~~

No matter what, it is impossible to draw a four-episode animation using four-episode comics. . Considering the smoothness of the plot and so on, for weekly comics, it usually takes 2-3 chapters to completely restore it to a 1-chapter animation. . For example, Fullmetal Alchemist is a monthly serial, and each episode is basically 40-50 pages long. When it is about to end, each episode is 60-70 pages, and the last episode, Chapter 108, is more than 100 pages. Although the FA version of the animation is somewhat compressed, it is basically completed in 64 episodes, so the progress of the manga and animation will not be the same. . . Moreover, after the weekly series is serialized, even if it is cut in half, the author will still be allowed to serialize the last 10 chapters. .

I came across this novel in 2018, but I abandoned it after reading it. I felt that the plot of Ogata Demon King forcing the male protagonist to leave Rina was a bit cliche. And I am worried that the intrusion of various anime characters will cause the plot to collapse. But I read this book again the day before yesterday, and I couldn't stop reading it again. I've read a lot of novels, watched a lot of dramas, and experienced a lot of setbacks in life. When I read this novel again, I felt quite complicated.       ，，""                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           since the male protagonist's physical condition after the robbery incident was quite surprising; 4. The relationship between the male protagonist and the other male supporting characters is very loving. Be it Shizuru, Little Sea Otter, the Dream Eater friend, or the new wife Eiji. These characters compete with each other, work together, grow together, and realize their own dreams respectively. It feels very warm. Although there are some surprises in the process of watching, it is that the characters in the anime suddenly create comics in the real world. Even if there are explanations and supplements later, there will be a sense of abruptness. But it's still acceptable. The theme has unknowingly changed from "a slap in the face" to "growth and competition", which is both refreshing and warm. At the end, I was still a little bit reluctant to let go, because it was obviously the end, but a new character came in. Even though I knew that this was the work of the male protagonist "Phoenix Academy Fierce", I still looked forward to the author's sequel. Long live the author!

It seems the author has abandoned us.

Hey, how should I put it, after reading the free chapter, I subscribed to the latest chapter. All I can say is that you, the author, are very perseverant! In short, this book is the author's personal pleasure. As far as the content is concerned, it would be better to say that the author is enjoying himself in a carnival, completely ignoring whether the readers can understand and accept it. I have been involved in acg for many years, and I know a lot of various memes, but when I followed them, most of the meaningless ones were just skipping, without the fun of touching the memes at all. It was really interesting at the beginning, but then it was full of these routines, mixed with extremely shameful vocabulary, and it quickly became boring. After reading it, apart from letting me reflect on the content of the comic, it was gone and I didn't feel anything at all. The author, I would like to give you a suggestion, finish it as soon as possible and start a new book. If you take the normal route, your grades will definitely not be bad based on your perseverance. There are too few acg works. If there are more acg books, I will order them all. The premise is to take care of the readers. Don't be too self-indulgent.

Another failed heroine, forget it and just watch the pretense, I can still watch it Second comment: The description of the protagonist is very annoying, I am not talking about the middle school disease, the career line and the emotional line are both, there is no pretense, the heroine is holding back... In addition to the second grade or the second grade, it should be said that the whole story is only the second grade. Reading it gave me a feeling that it was like a year, it was boring ヽ(ー_ー)ノ

Imagine the author reading this book ten years later... It's so embarrassing Imagine the author's son or daughter reading this book twenty years later 👍, the author may be so embarrassed that he wants to die on the spot! This book is really a hit, I couldn't stand it if it wasn't for the second degree...

Oh my god, this novel is too chuunier. After reading a few chapters, I felt weird for no reason. Could it be that the chuunier soul hidden in my body resonates? !

You liar, when I asked you in the group the year before last, you told me that you would release a new book after the new year, but now, you don't even have any news, I'm so sorry!

I am inexplicably attracted to the radio wave. I saw this book five years ago and read it in one sitting. It was so boring but so damn satisfying. Now that the five-year period has come and I, the Dragon King, have returned, this book is still to my liking. Ah, this is a bit refreshing.

I can hardly stand it anymore after reading Chapter 39. The protagonist has been confused and confused and doesn't know anything. The article keeps emphasizing that he is afraid of being reborn in this world and is confused. There is also the emotional scene with the heroine. If you like it, you will like it. Are you confused about this one? Can his brother still imprison the heroine 24 hours a day?

Reminds me of this middle school book again. The author has come out to write a new book.

Super middle school, I like it very much. The protagonist did what I never dared to do in middle school, and said things I never dared to say.

It's a masterpiece, why doesn't anyone watch it?

This novel is not suitable for normal people, nor for abnormal people. It is only suitable for fools. It is so embarrassing. The author is really challenging the physiological limits of human beings by being able to write 2 million words.

The male protagonist is well portrayed and I like it very much, but the female protagonist is too bad, useless and only creates obstacles for the male protagonist. It makes me feel the same as some previous mentally retarded novels.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, this feeling of shame has really been a long time coming

This is not a novel that you need to pay to read. The author is too unrestrained and it is not worth the money to read it.

For the sake of getting into second place, I was extremely speechless and heartbroken.

Damn it, it's on the airwaves, nya れわ is so fierce

I really don't see why the protagonist likes the heroine, so I'll confess, it's the same

The character of the second protagonist is Gilgamesh

There is no description of the plot of the comic production, no description of the shining points, insufficient or no response from readers and fans, and the overall feeling is that it keeps jumping back and forth in time. What is seen is that there is only a second grader standing out in the front, a similar background to the cartoonist, an irrelevant profession, etc. It is recommended to refer to entertainment articles. Some descriptions of works should be included. The shining points in the works that are exciting and shocking to readers and make people feel compelled to benefit are also indispensable. The most important thing is the surprise, shock and emotion of those readers who read it. The materials of the works are average. I would like to see more like Ghost Blade, Hunter, Steel, Fate, etc. Lelouch is too old.

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Writing Hole Filling Festival Wishing Season"} I hope to write a new book or an extra chapter

Whether you are in the second grade of middle school or confused, you can accept it. If you see someone who feels aggrieved by being looked at by a purple-haired person, he is originally a person who reads books without using his brain, but in the end he is addicted to it, so he immediately persuades him to quit.

After playing it for the second time, I finally picked up Dianbo. I really like it now, but now it's just a pity. Why did the author only write more than 2 million words? Wouldn't it be better to write more? I can accept another 10 million words as long as I keep this style

Are there any new books? Are there any new books?