
Addicted to Nature
嗜天行
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 341k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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44Fans
125Chapters
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[Comment] The collection is finished, I can only express my feelings in 1P
Keep up the good work, friends! 🌹
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[Comment] Come visit my friends again and wish you all the best in the new week.
Your works become more interesting as you write them.
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[Comment] The goddess is here
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[Comment] Well, let's comment.
Kindness. In fact, I saw many comments in the book review section saying please give me some advice. But in fact, people who post book reviews say this about every book, and I don't dare to be rude in other people's book review sections. But for Tanhua's book, it doesn't matter if I'm a little abrupt, right? Back to business. Regarding your work, aside from the plot and literary talent, there is one thing I think should be mentioned. I clicked on many chapters, and the character dialogues were all in double quotation marks, followed by one sentence, and then another quotation mark, and another sentence below. This way of writing is "storytelling style". If there were just two people in the scene, the reader would probably still understand, 'Oh, this is one sentence per person. ' But if there are more than two people in the scene, the reader will get confused. After all, not every reader has such a good sense of empathy. Therefore, I suggest Tanhua to add the name of the speaker before each sentence of dialogue. You can add expressions and actions to him. For example, 'Chen Moumou's face turned pale and he said with a trembling voice' or 'Zhao Moumou's eyes flashed and he said in a cold voice', or 'Xu Moumou rolled his eyes and said with a chuckle'. Writing this way can make it more expressive and clear. Secondly, there are more words. Well, there is another point. When writing articles nowadays, the dialogue is usually just one paragraph. You just double-digit, one sentence. Many times not even one line is occupied. If you talk a lot, one article will be eloquent and eloquent, and it will look like there is no typesetting, and it will be visually uncomfortable. Well, you can go back and click on your own chapter to take a look and you will understand. Well, my words may not be pleasant to the ears, but Tanhua was very kind to me, and I went out of my way to say it. If I offended you, I apologize, I apologize. Deep blue greetings
[Comment] Comment on the first three chapters, a very good book, hold on, hold on! ! !
Doesn't Leng Xue have water-attribute spiritual roots? Why can't he practice? Here it is best to explain a reason why it is impossible to practice. The language is simple and unpretentious, and the characters are well controlled. It just needs to be more compact, and there can be some foreshadowing, but the first three chapters must at least have a small *~*. All the words are written around the pig's feet in the end, so that there is a sense of substitution. Feel free to say it randomly. If you don't like it, you can delete it! 🤝