Laughing Proudly into the Sky

Come on, Lao Wang! 🌹🌹🌹

When I first saw the title of your book, I felt domineering and awe-inspiring. Is this a book written by Lao Wang? I doubted it. As I continued to read, I felt that what you wrote, Lao Wang, completely subverted my understanding. You are no longer the Lao Wang who splashes and loses hair. You are the king of writing books, you are amazing, I support you. To be honest, the purpose of my ww is to get a long flat. It's just a long flat, it's not that difficult. Now it is one hundred and forty. If we continue a little longer, will we still be far away from two hundred? It shouldn't happen anymore, right? I believe I can reach 200. Of course, if I cannot reach 200, it proves that I am not good enough. Let me go, it's already two hundred and ten now, I didn't expect that I can be quite fast! I originally thought I couldn't type two hundred words! But two hundred words were suddenly completed, and I felt quite proud, because what? Because I insist on giving you Changping. Two hundred has passed unknowingly, can three hundred be far behind? Not anymore? I looked at it and now it's over 300. Haha, isn't it just a 500-word Changping? I'll pull out all the fucking shit for you. Of course, although I want to complain about Lao Wang, you splash a lot, but forget it in this public place! I'll give you some face, but the most important thing about writing a book is persistence... Just like I am writing Changping for you now, five hundred words, easily, Lao Wang, you wasted a few minutes of my time. You know, you will cum for me later, or I will rub you to death. Haha, 500-word Changping, what do you think is going on now? It's almost 500 words, hehe, it's finished.

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[Uid=188094009] My humble work #GalaxyHiggsTrunk# is on the shelves today, and I am here to inform Lao Wang. I beg for the first order, and I hope you will be rewarded with a favor. Thank you, Lone Goose! If you have enough money to vote monthly, I hope you can vote for one!

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Crabs worship the mountain! Wish you all the best of ideas! Put pen to paper and bloom!

Guyan came and gave five chapters of likes. I thought there would be one or two first likes, but the group leader took the lead!

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After communicating with the author Cong Ye, I decided to come over and read his book "The Smiling Sky", so the title was "First Reading". Gu Yan is not good at fairy tale novels in the fantasy and cultivation genre. So instead of evaluating it based on its setting, I will just look at this book from the perspective of the most common reader. First of all, I have to say that the opening chapter is very well written. From "'I am dead, why am I still alive...' Yue Xuanxiao's eyelids trembled slightly, and he slowly opened them, revealing a sad expression, but under this expression, there was a little more confusion and hesitation." These short fifty words revealed four aspects of information to the reader: One: Dead, yet alive. It brings readers unlimited imagination, and at the same time explains that the protagonist's future road will be completely different from the previous road. This is the road to rebirth, but the author cleverly avoids the word "rebirth". It does not use the stark description of "and then was reborn" that is used in most Internet articles, and has a softer feel. Second: Yue Xuanxiao's eyelids trembled slightly. Needless to say, the name of the protagonist of the entire text is revealed at the beginning. And according to Chinese custom, this name belongs to a male protagonist. There is no more effective introduction than the direct positioning of the name - the protagonist first, the male second. You don't have to start with tens of thousands of words and you still can't find the main character or you don't know whether it's a boy or a girl. Third: Open it slowly. It pointed out that something happened to the protagonist that he could not expect not long ago, maybe a second or a day. So he could only "show a sad look" and further explained that he might have encountered something bad or had a bad life before. Fourth: A little more confused and hesitant. Undoubtedly, a person who encounters this kind of "dead yet alive" situation will feel "confused and hesitant" about the present moment. The author Cong Ye considers it from the perspective of realistic human nature, which adds a sense of reality. Although novels are literary works, they always carry certain emotions and shadows of the author, which can be seen from this. After reading the first few chapters, I generally feel that the writing is concise and the story plot is well set (although I said I would not write about the setting, I still wrote it. Guyan specifically stated here that I wrote the setting of the subtle plot, not the setting of the overall story). The story is very readable and easy to accept and digest. The above are the outstanding features of "The Smiling Sky" that Guyan saw as a reader. However, Lone Goose is also the author's friend, so the evaluation must be fair, so that it can live up to the meaning of the word "friend". There are some minor shortcomings (of course, this is Guyan's opinion, maybe the author has his own ideas): The first one: "I am dead, why am I still alive..." Appears a lot, so it has a prose style. This is a mistake that most authors like to make (Gu Yan's previous version is almost entirely written in prose style, so it is not suitable for the expression of the novel genre). Beauty is beautiful, but after all, what readers want more is novels. Second: Sentences like "..." Cannot appear? Let readers guess? They don't put much thought into what it means. "The Smiling Sky" is not a suspenseful mystery novel, so it would be better to have this happen as little as possible, what do you think? Third:…………. . Is there anything wrong with this format? The page is clean and tidy, making it easier for readers to browse. Moreover, the appearance of such symbols does not help the author's word count. It looks like a long string, but it is actually only six characters. Okay, that's all for today. When I have time later, I will read the masterpieces and learn from each other's strengths to make progress. I hope the author Cong Ye will write "The Smiling Sky" into a classic so that readers can feel the exquisiteness every time. There are ups and downs, because we are good friends and we speak from the bottom of our hearts! If you are not used to it, feel free to skip it.

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