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I have some ideas, but the details are difficult to write down, so I hope you can work hard.

I don't have much to say. Just one sentence! Very good! Praise! ! ! I hope the author keeps writing! Stop being a eunuch! ! ! Support!!!

The author's writing style is very good. You can't tell that this is his first novel. It doesn't have a sense of youthfulness. It is really a masterpiece. Keep up the good work!

After reading more than ten chapters in one go, I felt that the author was a little slow, the plot was dragging, and the boring trivial matters were a bit unbearable for my impatient mind. I hope to set up more suspense, speed up the development of the plot, and reduce the number of words.

It's not easy to write a novel that doesn't fall into clichés. When you encounter something like this, you must save it decisively and read it slowly!

After reading and updating, why do I have the urge to read this book again? Author, please update quickly, I can't help it anymore!

The novel is remarkable both in terms of plot and writing style. I would like to make a suggestion. It is good to have delicate writing style, but too much emphasis on psychology will slow down the progress of the plot.

When the previous Yuanyuan died, the police autopsy said there were no traces of sexual assault. Later chapters said that the manager raped her the day before her death. That's probably because the author doesn't know much about criminal trace inspection. Not to mention it only takes 2 days. If the penis is violated, it can be detected in a month. It's a bit picky, don't blame me.

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