King of Thousands

Brother Gambling came over today to say a few words. I read my brother's book this morning. My first impression was that the writing was clean and neat, the technique was not procrastinating, and it went straight to the heart. This is an important selling point that is refreshing. Second glance: The writing style is meticulous, the technique is sophisticated, and the writing power is profound. You can imagine how many times the brother went through tempering when he started writing to get the essence of this article. Third Eye: I am well versed in various writing techniques, but the traditional writing makes people feel suspense again and again. The scenes described are as invisible as water and as powerless as mountains, but without losing a sense of majesty and grandeur. The fourth eye: The paragraph has ups and downs, and the frustration in the previous part turns around in this place, presenting itself in front of the reader in a dark and bright way. Fifth Eye: What a good way to use the terms you, me, and him. The subject is used very appropriately. It will not make people feel chatty after reading it. It will only make people feel as if they are immersed in the situation, as if they are dominating the progress of the matter. Sixth Eye: When describing the opponent, brother, you described the opponent as worrying about gains and losses, short-sighted, indecisive, strong as he is afraid of offending the protagonist, and weak as not having the courage to face the protagonist. I really like such an opponent who has no pressure. Seventh Eye: Brother's book is like playing chess. If you read it without paying attention, you will think it is just a boring fight. You come and I have fun, but how can ordinary readers see the profoundness contained in it at a glance? For everything, you must watch the book go further and further with a patient look, instead of rejecting it directly at the beginning. But it doesn't matter, brother, you have a lot of perseverance, at least you have me with you. Eighth Eye: There may be thorns and traps on the way forward when describing the protagonist, and there may also be dangerous shoals and reefs, but in the writing of the brothers, the writing is full of flowers, so that the protagonist can escape from danger perfectly every time, and is not arrogant and domineering when he is proud, and is not discouraged when he is frustrated. Ninth Eye: Looking at the Internet articles for many years, I can tell at a glance that my brother is definitely a person who is not afraid of honor or disgrace. Data in front of you is not a wall that Gore cannot reach, but a stepping stone on your road to success. Tenth glance: After seeing so much, I should be able to leave a perfect handwriting. But for the sake of lasting friendship, I will not leave a full stop next, but leave a list of URLs. I hope we can work hard together: [url=R7Rvem]

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It's hard for the author to come up with such a good plot and work so hard to update the article every day. I sincerely thank the author!

The writing is full of talent, and the description of the characters and their style of life reflect your profound understanding of human nature and the world. This makes your novel feel authentic and credible, with a strong flavor of life. Hope to see new chapters sooner! Keep up the good work!!!

As a new writer, you need to understand one thing: when creating characters, you should show your distinctive character and extraordinary speaking background, so that the characters you create can be active on the paper. I really like the male protagonist created by the author now, and I quite admire the author's skill in creating characters.

Definitely worth watching, it made me, a grown man, burst into tears. Great book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! From now on, 5 votes will be given every day, if I come.

The novel is remarkable both in terms of plot and writing style. I would like to make a suggestion. It is good to have delicate writing style, but too much emphasis on psychology will slow down the progress of the plot.

The writing is okay, but should the author pay attention to the tastes and needs of market readers? Instead of writing according to your own ideas, I think it would be much better if that were the case!

It's really hard to find a book that I can read these days. This book really suits my taste. I'll give you a lot of rewards and subscribe once it's on the shelves. Thank you for your hard work.

This book gave me a completely different feeling than any other book on the same subject. It's really great! Give it another silent thumbs up~

My wish is not big, just give me a passerby from A, B and C. Although I can't be the protagonist's buddy, I can be a passerby in a certain chapter. Don't let me die early, at least live for a few chapters. Just simplify the character's name from my nickname. I would like to thank the Football Association in advance and fulfill my little wish. It is not easy to become a character in a novel.

Some detailed descriptions can often portray characters very vividly, so detailed things are really the most indispensable in novels.

Very well written, I just wish you could update it faster

It is rare to see such detailed characterization, and the character's personality is deeply rooted in people's hearts. It is a very good novel.

The novel is very interesting, I must support this novel!

After contacting customer service, the ban was finally lifted. 😅 was finally able to speak. Even if I talked too much, I would cry. Support is provided, friends come on! ❤️❤️❤️

I have been following this book for a while. The author is very attentive and the writing is generally good. It is in line with my favorite style. Let's write a short review today. If you think what I said is right, give it a thumbs up! The first chapter explains that the Thousand Poison Girl Lin Yutong came to Qianxun City in order to kill the city lord, and the city lord invited people from the world and immortal sects to wait for her. Thousand Poison Girl came to the city to stamp out news [I think], and the protagonist Tong Fei also came, but he came to buy medicine. Explain that Tong Fei has a close relationship with Qian Du Nu, [I will later explain that he is a child whose spiritual roots have been destroyed] Chapter 2 explains that Tong Fei went into the store to buy medicine and took out the prescription he prescribed. When the clerk saw the poisonous weed in it, he didn't give it to him. The two got into an argument. The owner of the pharmacy came and gave him not only the medicine but also the book. [I guess it's a secret book?] After that, he said: This child has the aura of another world. [I guess Tong Fei is a time traveler, and this old man is not simple, or he is the pioneer of time travellers. This is my hope, I like to watch time travel. Chapter 3 explains that Tong Fei gave a lot of spirit beads to buy medicine, but he was suspected of being spotted by two robbers. [Why did Tong Fei discover this special talent? The author did not explain clearly. This seems a bit far-fetched, is it divine calculation? Sixth sense? Anyway, Tong Fei discovered it] and made mental preparations. Qiandu Nu asked Tong Fei to wait for him at the mountain temple. Tong Fei left the city. Chapter 4 explains that Tong Fei designed to kill two robbers. Returning to the mountain temple, he drank the medicine made from poisonous herbs and baked cakes for Qian Du Nu. Chapter 5 explains that Qian Dunu went to kill the city lord, but instead she was poisoned by the unique poison of the master of the immortal sect who had been ambushed by the other party. Dying. Chapter 6 explains that Tong Fei begged heaven for help and met Ji Rong, who took him back to Lingxu Sect. However, Qiandu Langjun came here in search of traces to obtain the poison seed inheritance. Generally speaking, at the beginning of the book, the story is smooth, the plot is ups and downs, and the characters are accurately grasped. It is still a good beginning. It's just that some of the explanations in the first chapter are unclear, rather procrastinating, and miss the point. It is recommended that it be deleted. After all, the beginning is very important, otherwise it will not attract people to read. Okay, that's all, the author needs to give me some points!