Reborn: Ascending to Immortality Step by Step

The book is riddled with typos, to the point that the sentences are incomprehensible. The female protagonist, even after her rebirth, lacks intelligence and always treats people based on her past life's impressions. It's just a book; if it had a realistic opening, it would be ruined.

There are quite a few typos, and some sentences are completely confusing. Could you please fix them? They're affecting my reading experience.

I suggest the author go back and fix the bugs. There are so many flaws, and some of them are incoherent and inconsistent. I hope the author will go back and check them again.

It's well-written, but the language is too verbose. For example, instead of saying "I've been out for five days, it's time to go back," you have to add "myself," making it just "I've been out for five days, it's time to go back."

The plot is good, but the writing is somewhat lacking.

In the final chapter, Ye Tianbao and Ye Tianbei call Ye Tianling "aunt"? Aren't they siblings?

What a load of rubbish! It's full of typos and even includes a 3P scene, and the main character is always beautiful and loved.

The beginning was so-so, but it got better and better as it went on. It's a shame it ended so early. I was planning to follow the story and give it a reward, but it's already finished! *Sobs*

The section about the green liquid remains unchanged and is directly copied from "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality".

It's well-written, and the plot is very tight. However, there are a few typos. The author should keep writing.