Reborn: Ascending to Immortality Step by Step

There are so many typos that the sentences are unreadable. After the heroine was reborn, her intelligence was not enough. Always treat people with the impression of past lives. That is, a book would end if it had a true beginning.

There are a lot of typos, and some sentences are confusing to read. Can you fix them? Will it affect your reading mood?

I suggest the author go back and catch bugs. There are so many loopholes, and some of them are inconsistent with the preface and the follower. I hope the author can go back and check.

The writing is not bad, but the words are too cumbersome, such as "I have been out for five days, and it is time to go back." If I insist on adding "self", the result is "I have been out for five days, and it is time to go back."

The plot is good, but the writing is a bit lacking

In the ending chapter, Ye Tianbao and Ye Tianbei called Aunt Ye Tianling? Aren't they siblings?

What a crappy thing to write, with a lot of typos and a threesome. The main character must be beautiful and must be liked by others.

The writing in the front is average, and the writing becomes better as you go to the back. It's a pity that it ended too early. I originally wanted to reward the book while chasing it, but you ended it, eh eh eh

The part where the green liquid appears has not been changed and is directly copied from "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality"

It's well written and the plot is very compact. But there is a typo. The author should keep writing later.