The Return of the Witch of the Apocalypse

I have read part of The Return of the Witch, and it is indeed different from other apocalyptic novels. It gives people a sense of a super epic epic. I am looking forward to the full unfolding of this world, but I am worried about whether you can control it. I feel like if you write a post-apocalyptic article, it will be easier to achieve your goal. The grand epic feeling will be your selling point. It depends on how you combine it with the white text. For example, "Zhe Tian", although it is a short story, the descriptions of the great emperors during the dark and turbulent times are very shocking. So if you want to make money, I think it should be in line with the public's taste, but also have its own characteristics that people can remember, so that it can accumulate popularity. Well, having said all that, I just want to see you write a complete apocalyptic novel for me to refer to and study. Just take it as encouragement from a pseudo-reader. May your works sell well

Subtle and elegant, yet vivid and vivid in depiction, with extraordinary skills

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I don't know what to say but I still feel good. I just downloaded it and didn't finish it (*^▽^*)

I feel that the author has a lot of potential in psychological portrayal. The characters are written very deeply. I am quite optimistic about this article...

I feel that the characters in this novel all have their own characteristics, rather than being stereotyped or stereotyped. The writing is quite brilliant!

It's very different from the apocalyptic novels I've read before!

Have you noticed that Jingcai's grades are very good...

🌹Your apocalyptic writing is great! Don't abandon the article!

I am also a fan of apocalyptic literature like you, but I haven't started writing yet. I have read your four apocalyptic literature reviews and learned a lot. I would like to ask if there are no new strategies to read recently? Recommendation votes are sent, please write!

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After reading a few chapters, I feel like I need to watch Crayon Shin-chan...

It's very literary and connotative. It's really good. I appreciate it. I wish you a good harvest in both creative writing and academic studies.

Well written, I really love Xin Ziyue

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I first saw this book on my mobile phone, and the science fiction page of the main website actually has a purely female protagonist, which is really rare. This aroused a lot of interest in me. After reading it, I really felt that it was complicated. Although it relieved my hunger for a while, it also lost a lot of sanity. Let me first talk about what I think are shortcomings. I can feel that the author wants to create a cruel doomsday era, but it is also an extremely exciting era with turbulent heroes emerging in large numbers. In the doomsday, people struggle, people fight hard, and even the so-called strong ones who laugh in the end just laugh and cry. But the author, you have many things that you are not sure about. At the beginning, the writing style changed several times. I don't know if you did it on purpose, but overall it really affected the reading experience. In the first chapter, you used that gothic and gorgeous description technique, and then in the second and third chapters, the reborn heroine did all kinds of, how to say, "cute" actions. After reading it, I felt cute all over. The tone of a novel is very important. As the author, if you want to create a witch who has experienced the apocalypse and is reborn with painful memories, and if you want to make readers feel something, you must pay attention to the tone of the article. Although I can understand that you want to use the protagonist's various performances to show that this is just the heroine's forced smile, and her heart is still scarred, but the effect is really not very good. If you want to write a serious drama, including too many complaints, jokes, or anime jokes of this kind in the article will seriously affect the reading experience. In addition, the author, you have a problem. The thing in front of the dividing line of each chapter is like a setting, the so-called historical record of later generations in early online articles, or a memory killing. This thing has actually become a taboo in Internet literature, and it is rare to find such a thing even in light novels. In essence, a novel is the author telling a story to the reader, so "baggage" is very important. A fascinating story needs to constantly arouse the curiosity of the readers. You reveal a few clues, and then the readers are eager to know the follow-up of the story. The hateful thing about such historical prefixes is that they are really like forced spoilers. If I know the development of the story in advance, then what appeal does this story have to me? The author, you said in the chapter "About the Female Protagonist" your conception of this article. Since you want to describe a girl who has experienced pain and "came out of the mud, she is more fragile than white paper but stronger than a rock." So I have to distinguish Xin Ziyue's story from the monster-fighting and upgrading articles on the starting point that are read as "apocalyptic" writing and "games". If it is a monster-fighting and upgrading article, you can put aside the core theme of the so-called apocalypse - struggle. But what you want is a real apocalypse, a real heroine with a soul, so the struggle in the apocalypse is an unavoidable topic. But it's a pity that I read sixty-six chapters and couldn't find the struggle that touched my heart. I think you, the author, may have noticed this problem. You also said in the book that because the heroine was reborn with her past experiences and memories, she mastered resources and power from the beginning, and therefore became superior in the end. The best apocalyptic novel I have ever read is "Wasted" written by Sui Feng Piao Xuan. The cruelty of the apocalypse actually does not require the loss of millions of troops or over-exaggerated blood and violence. The cruelty of the apocalypse is cold and absolute. The author mentioned in those "memory killings" that you defeated the lords, stopped the demons, etc. These are not cruel at all. Isn't it the greatest honor for the strong to die on the battlefield? The tragedy of the doomsday is that death is meaningless, neither glorious nor correct. Another problem is that the author, you have too many settings in your article. I am also a semi-setting person. I can understand the feeling that I have built an extremely majestic world in my mind and can't wait to take it out and share it with others. But good settings are always invisible. Readers can slowly peek into the world you describe from the plot and between the lines, instead of just giving us the settings all at once. Basically, the author will tell you something about energy in every chapter.

Most of these people are encountered after the end of the world. At that time, would you tell others your detailed address? It makes no sense at all. When it comes to things before the end, most people talk about the people in that city. Unless you're a chatty person, you might mention this meaningless address when chatting with best friends. Why don't you mention that you still remember your mobile phone number? Just chat on the phone.

I hope that the new book you are revising now will try your best to write a wonderful and balanced book, and don't overly appear too Mary Sue or Long Aotian.

I was surprised to learn that I had received another recommendation - a new trend on the homepage. Unfortunately, I am revising the newly written Dream Song at this time. I have already reached the seventh chapter. The eighth chapter has just been divided into paragraphs and the content has not been revised yet. Therefore, the current chapter names will have a break in Chapter 8, but the content is still intact.

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Call 110 quickly. There is a corpse here.

Why didn't I notice any suffering?