Rebirth 2003

The writing is almost like a running account. What are you writing? What kind of novel is this? It's so bad. It's so bad. I feel so tired after reading it.

The emotional scenes in this book are so fucking frustrating for a girl like me, I'm about to explode. If you write that the male protagonist is all about the kidneys and not the heart, forget it. He's tempted by whatever you call it. Can you please stop insulting love like this? It's really disgusting and I'm about to vomit. A girl with a normal outlook under modern upbringing wouldn't be so mean, right?

The author shouldn't be so slutty. Every book stresses that he doesn't believe in love. As a result, he often starts to fall in love within a few chapters of the book. Every time he is reborn, he starts by writing a novel and then starts with not believing in love, and then follows him with all kinds of follow-ups and lickings. An old author like you has completely fixed his routines. The plot basically has nothing new and he is still living in the era of writing novels in the past few years.

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, it can be seen that the author is very immature, chauvinistic, extremely egoistic, and has a serious lack of social experience. It seems that he has never worked in the society after graduation. He is a full-time writer and an otaku, and he does not know how to think in other people's shoes. Before, there is no need to dwell on the handling of the girlfriend in the previous life so much. I repeatedly emphasized that she would be whipped to death. As for not talking to her, I understand that she is a money-worshiping realist girl. It is right not to talk about it, but there is really no need to mention it again and again in the article. Later, I got interested in talking about Cao Xue, but I was unwilling to come back. How old are you, the author? Have you ever seen love? If you haven't seen it, don't make assumptions. That's all. I won't read it again. I wish the author will make progress.

Alas, I originally thought it was very heartwarming, but suddenly I finished it with a confused look on my face.

Emotional scenes are completely poisonous. To put it simply, a girlfriend from the previous life who had been in love with another person had no relationship with her in this life, but she still had to be emotionally entangled in this life. As a result, she masked herself and broke the limbs of her boyfriend who had broken up with her (he was also his girlfriend and boyfriend in the previous life, but they were not separated). The reason was that the obstacles in the previous life had not been overcome. Then I found a satisfactory girlfriend in my life. Because my girlfriend wanted to be a singer, we had a long-distance relationship for half a year. During my college internship, I decisively found a mistress who was also my girlfriend's roommate. By the way, when I wasn't doing my internship, I hired a waiter who was basically just responsible for warming the bed. I found a mistress while filming a movie, and now I'm starting to have feelings for him. In the middle, I had sex with a divorced young woman (the two had no relationship). Two years later, the young woman came to me with her child in her arms. The protagonist had feelings for the child at the first sight! *·#? Now that I have seen this, I can't hold on any longer. Let's continue.

It's like being addicted to special codes, smoking anytime and anywhere. I'm afraid the protagonist is a smoker, and the protagonist is also small-minded. Haha, I'm afraid it's like what I wrote in the previous article. He is a gloomy character. He lived for thirty years in his previous life and didn't understand it. This will be the case in this life.

This book is very poor in terms of characters, writing style, and refreshing points. In terms of character design, the protagonist is a scumbag. His first love girlfriend stayed with him for four years in college and then broke up with him because she thought he was useless. As a result, after he was reborn as a freshman, he completely hurt his first love girlfriend who was still passionately in love with him. He turned around and chased another beautiful woman, telling himself not to get emotional but just for fun. Writing is a running account. A new book is released, a new book is put on the shelf, and a new book is completed. It's basically no fun. There are many poisonous points. Since the theme is writing a book, I copy songs for a while, open an Internet cafe for a while, and register domain names to wait for the future to make a fortune. In short, the rebirth was written very poorly.

Seeing that I am so angry, can't Cao Xue be the only woman? Still forced to break it apart. The protagonist is really a scumbag! I was still defending the protagonist dozens of chapters ago, and it's all the author's fault.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was smoking in the classroom. I felt that there was something wrong with the quality of the protagonist, so I gave up on it decisively.

This book is actually well written, but the protagonist gives up a beautiful girl who likes him and gives him away, which is simply unacceptable to me. The protagonist died suddenly in the finale, and the property he acquired was used to benefit others. It was so sadistic. The author who likes to be abused and the protagonist who is both responsible and independent are both bull-headed green knights. It's not suitable for people who love harems and I don't want to watch it.

I think it's normal to smoke in the street. I really feel disgusted when I see smoking. Can college students smoke in the classroom? Are you afraid it's not a garbage pheasant school? At least I've never seen anyone do that. Don't have any qualities and want to show your uniqueness? Alternative!

It feels good, Captain of Time and Space. I think it's very nice to write.

I always write so much when I smoke, but I can't hold on until chapter 28. Is the author reincarnated as a smoker or something? I can't do it without writing about smoking, right?

Good guy, smoking in a university classroom, and there is a girl you like inside. Is this the upbringing of the protagonist? Or is this the author's upbringing?

I'll go, the main character smokes in the study room and has a tailgate, why is it so obscene, I'm convinced 😅

I can't stand it any longer. I'm showing others a manuscript that no one else can understand and asking them to tell me what's wrong with you. The main character is too extreme. He started smoking when he first entered college. He can't write without smoking. The key is to keep smoking. This is obviously a death-defying rhythm. It also shows that he is excellent and feels good about himself. There are a few women who like people who smell like cigarettes. I won't read it anymore.

Let's talk about the advantages first. It's really amazing that the protagonist is reborn and writes novels instead of being a simple copywriter. Maybe I haven't read enough novels. So far, I have never seen someone who travels back and writes a novel and is not a copywriter. As for the shortcomings, first of all, the protagonist is too wretched. Secondly, the protagonist's handling of the girlfriend who kicked him in his previous life is disgusting. The emotional aspect of the protagonist is also pretty fucked up. Either he is a scumbag, or he is loyal to a female protagonist. Like the protagonist, I love this, but I can't bear to part with that, and I feel sorry for the others. Please, no one really does Qiong Yao's trick anymore. In short, I read this book in a hurry. I specially selected the protagonist to prepare for the new book, started the new book, and read which classics the new book borrowed from.

Poor Cao Xue's family was in ruins and her health was poor. She lost her husband. What could be more unlucky? Tong Yaqian, who reflects that the mistress has taken over, has a smooth family and is proud to have a husband (although he is a scumbag), can she ruin her outlook on life even more?

It feels like the male protagonist is still following the same old path emotionally and is still immature even after being reborn. Love has a shelf life. Changing people does not guarantee that the new girlfriend will not be like the old one. Be emotional when dealing with relationships and be rational when dealing with life. Take your relationship seriously, your fate will be over, and it will be easy to get together and part ways! Everyone is different. She may not have shortcomings in this area, but she will have shortcomings in that area. Love is love, and marriage is marriage. The two are different. The requirements for each other should not be the same.

When I read the old book again, I feel bad. Actually, I'm quite curious. Like those described in these rebirth articles, would a person in his thirties or forties still be willing to have a relationship with a girl when he returns to school? From my own perspective, I probably won't. You can choose girls with the eyes of a lover, but when it comes to dating, it will probably be very awkward and uncomfortable. Having been tempered by society, in terms of experience, energy, opinions and emotional thresholds, I should not be able to compare with the vast majority of girls who have not been exposed to the world. Of course, if someone keeps chasing you, that's a different matter.

The protagonist of this book focuses on one thing or another. Before the novel was finished, he started to engage in music. After doing music a few times, he didn't want to do it anymore, so he started to open an Internet cafe. As soon as the Internet cafe opened, he came up with the idea of ​​extorting domain names.

I haven't had cerebral thrombosis for ten years, and I wouldn't have been able to write such a wonderful novel. 🙈

First of all, I read it on QQ Reading, and then I subscribed to the author's 1997 and 2006 books. And then the 2003 book, compared to those two books, it is simply too disappointing. The business history is written like shit. I will make two points. The first point is, in order to buy that one. Apple stocks, and then sell stocks that you know will rise sharply, then borrow money, and then raise funds. In the end, he said that Apple stocks are listed and he can't buy them. Isn't this disgusting to you readers? And also engage in real estate. No matter how fast the profits from real estate are, can it be as fast as buying stocks directly? Which real estate property can help you grow 2,000 times in ten years? I have said it myself, Vanke's stock has quadrupled in one year, and I have to touch the real estate. To be honest, even if you have the help of your classmates who have a background in the underworld and the white world, the repayment period of real estate is quite long, and the earning power is really not as good as investing in stocks. You might as well write well, how to show off in novels, and give others commissions when you first opened an Internet cafe. To be honest, I was drunk. You have never been an author, so you can find out. Where can I get a commission?

The emotional drama was a mess, God was blackmailed, 233. Forget it after blackmailing, just poison him to death

The biggest poisonous point in this book may be the issue of smoking. And finally torture the pig's feet. But I think it's okay to torture pig's feet!

If you haven't seen Shits, you can check it out.

I remember that there was a follow-up to this book, which was rebirth, and then suddenly Lu Yang's body returned twice. I read a pirated version at the time. I don't know if anyone has any impressions. Please tell me.

It's a good book, but the ending turned into science fiction. I didn't like it. Could there be a side story about the future lives of several girls after Wen Chou died?

Well written, the ending is amazing