Returned After Three Years of Reincarnation in the Martial Arts World

， I would like to ask, has the author not read a book for a long time? The book I am talking about is not a serious book, but a current Internet article. This book gives me the feeling that it is not like the current online literature at all. The general direction is not clear, and the small problems are always coherent. Especially the purpose of the protagonist, after leaving the early period of no household registration, I feel that the main line is missing. There is no one that is always attractive, and the behavior of the protagonist also feels a bit like it comes up one day at a time. In the front, he feels a bit like the protagonist of the early unlimited novels, but it is lost in the back. I read 60 chapters all the way. After reading it, as a reader, I didn't feel any sense of gain. I just felt, oh, the protagonist has returned to the reincarnation world and he wants to live in this world. What about the others? The others are gone. However, the fact that the protagonist returns from reincarnation and wants to live in this world is indeed a good point for me to click in. But there is a point to let people in, but there is no way to keep people? Where is the fun? Where's the fun? Where are those things you mentioned in your introduction? I didn't see it, I didn't see anything, let alone the back, I couldn't even see the back, even if it was a limited exemption. At the same time, the overall style is more everyday, but there is a lack of logic from time to time. Also, with so many female characters and so many people appearing, what have they done to the protagonist and accomplished anything? There are so many characters, which gives me the feeling of chaos. I was told that there was such a person, and then he disappeared. Pale, too pale, completely without the texture of a reincarnator coming back, nor the texture of a kung fu master. This is how I feel now when I see him.

How many chapters should I write after each game? The subsequent impact

The overall setting is pretty good. Is fame and making movies a good way to save your own life? This circuit in your head, think about it carefully

After viewing ninety-six photos, I feel unimpressed. It's too watery and too bland.

The author lacks imagination, so don't write about the year 3000. Do you know what the concept of 3000 is? There are actually cement roads and minibuses. If you write about 30 years, or not 300 years, I will bear it and read it. It has been 3000 years and there is no technological progress at all? Just teaching a group of orangutans is more than just these technologies, right?

Etthin 21 Century, but I don't understand the future world. You said it's a future world, why are some settings applied to ancient dynasties? Why is there still a court? Not a kingdom or an empire? Patrol horse? It's just a motorcycle, why is it called a horse? Not calling a taxi? Does the shelter you dig have no seeds of civilization? There are already shelters. There will definitely be some seeds of civilization or some well-preserved documents. Don't have a computer? What about the storage hard drive? Technology is so advanced, why can't it be cracked? The author's settings feel like they are all different, pieced together haphazardly. The plot is the same. I have experienced more than a dozen martial arts worlds, and I still look like a petty person. A pistol can threaten you. I don't know how you survived in the main god's space. You can also take out antique gold in your own space. Is it useful to kill people and steal goods? Wouldn't you make money by selling antique gold? Why did you kill someone? For money? Acting chivalrously? Did you encounter injustice when you acted chivalrously? You just read some rumors on the Internet and start killing people. It feels like child's play. The protagonists are all written like murderers, killing everyone they see. This is not a chivalrous act. And why do you become an actor? For money? There are so many treasures in your system space, and any one you pick out is antique-grade, including antiques and gold, and you still say you have no money. Or for fame and fortune? Why are you so low-key? There are so many martial arts around him, and if he shows any of them, he will turn red and purple. In short, there are too many flaws in this book. It feels like the author didn't even write a good outline and just pieced it together haphazardly.

The book fell apart from the moment the main character committed murder and robbed money. It doesn't make sense that a person who has traveled through all the worlds would make money by killing people and robbing wealth in a way that has endless consequences. He has lived through so many worlds in vain, without even learning a legal way to survive and make a living. This is ridiculous. How did he survive in those worlds? And this is not in line with contemporary values.

Can you not only say that all the women are in a state of shame, but also all the women who are related to the plot are so beautiful, I really hate it.

After traveling through the world of martial arts for three years, I came back and discovered that there is a supernatural being. What is the meaning of your time travel? And then the world of martial arts is even better than the extraordinary. It is really profitable to write novels. Anyone who writes this will read it.

The protagonist is a reincarnation in the future. There is no serious information collection and simple layout to make one's life comfortable. It is outrageous to make money without gold in the space backpack. If you don't know the level of the world, you can't keep a low profile. You can't make a shadow of your feet in a crowded place, and then come to the door to split bullets, and beat the police with the help of Kowloon. This world is even more outrageous. The world set in the future is no different from the present. The addition of traditional ancient weapons is not very good, and the development of science and technology is not very good. Look at how old the villain still has a pistol. You can give him a kinetic weapon. Air shock can be used as a new weapon. You've already written about the future, so don't worry about showing off the protagonist. Okay, show off your background story first, and let me see the future you write. I was attracted to read the title of the novel you wrote, which is the integration of the martial arts reincarnation protagonist and the future society. I was not reading a novel written more than ten years ago.

Let me tell you something, there is nothing wrong with the main plot of the setting, which interests me as a book-hungry person, but the basic setting simply makes you dizzy and you don't want to read on, because the author likes to write without thinking... He died from poison.

I didn't want to say anything at first, but after seeing the author's latest single chapter, I thought I should say something The character you set for the protagonist is to be the best in the world in terms of military force, and no one will take him seriously! But look at these recent chapters, what are you writing about? Is this the attitude of a man who is the most powerful in the world in dealing with others? Before accepting the prince-in-law, it can be said that you didn't understand the world's most powerful force, so be careful! So being involved in a coup as a prince-in-law, seeing that the highest level of military force recognized in the world is nothing more than this, he still has to act like "it has nothing to do with me, please don't bother me" and "I have no interest in the throne"! Realistic? No matter what the protagonist does, the existence of the prince-consort's identity is destined to be an inevitable battle for the throne! How about you show off your invincible force and make people afraid to come to you? Or just kill all the other princes and become the queen's husband! But if you don't choose either option, why are you playing "pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger"! This is no longer pretending to be a pig! This is already treating yourself like a pig! Don't talk about the "sequelae of the integration of man and knife". This is not a matter of just one sentence from you, the author! You just want to come up with a seemingly reasonable reason to continue letting the protagonist play this game of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger!

Three thousand years later, there will still be minibuses, right? I won't even say anything about history going back to the dynasty. In the age of science and technology, Bajiquan and the like are no longer there? Regarding a hard drive, do you really think it happened a thousand years ago when there were no computers? Everything can be lost

How did you survive after spending more than a dozen martial arts worlds in the main god space? 😅As innocent as a newbie (stupid)

After reading the introduction, I thought it was awesome. After reading the beginning, I experienced more than a dozen low-level worlds? ?

I have been describing that princess for the past few days, and then I revealed that I wanted to recruit the protagonist. If you are the protagonist who comes out of the reincarnation space, you will also work as a pawn for the royal family, such as guarding the courtyard, bodyguards, offering sacrifices, etc. That means the protagonist has lived as a dog. Reincarnators still care about the worldly underworld, and they still engage in intrigues, pretense, and slaps in the face. I just want to say that the protagonist's B square has lost all of his space. Then you can abandon the book. When did reincarnations ever care about the natives?

After reading more than thirty chapters, I feel like I don't quite understand some of the plot. First, let's start with the murder part. Why are you so reckless? Isn't assassination okay? Later, he showed various skills when applying for household registration, which directly raised his suspicion greatly. I don't understand how the author thought of arranging such a plot.

The crooked God of War returned to the city and found that his daughter was working in Yihongyuan and sleeping in a doghouse. The God of War gave an order and gave his daughter 3,000 to build a doghouse for her performance.

The three-year period has come and the crooked-mouthed God of War returns and sees his daughter sleeping in the doghouse. . . 🤓

I feel that the protagonist embodies the concept of martial arts and crime to the best of his ability. If he has no money, he will steal and kill. If he has no place to live, he will find an inn to live in. He will deduct 200 gold from someone else's cleaning service and feel free to do so. Anyway, it just reflects one's will. It is understandable that the previous task was to stay alive, but now that we have returned to the real world, we can pick up martial virtue.

In Chapter 19, the protagonist exchanged 100 years of internal power in the system, but when he first arrived on Earth 3000 years later, he was caught in the rain and could not use his internal power to dry his soaked clothes. And the toxic artist company that the protagonist found on the Internet has not collapsed yet? Also, the first few chapters emphasize that the protagonist is rational and calm, but the author describes the protagonist as not being rational and calm It's unreasonable anyway.

Why does the title of the book say "Three Years of Reincarnation"? The introduction says 3,000 years

In the martial arts world for 3 years, there is a trick, you can't even understand begging🙂🙂🙂

I'm really convinced that the world of martial arts is back, but I ended up going to be an actor and make a movie? Funny

What you wrote makes no sense. After three thousand years of life in the Lord God's space, even a local dog has become a barking dog. You actually only know some martial arts and compete with Hercules on the same stage.

It's too short. The author needs to mature himself, update it quickly, and add more content.

It's quite good. Don't be discouraged. It will get better. There are not many books that even a twenty-year-old bookworm like me finds good.

I feel like it's well written Support support

What did you write? 🤔🤔🤔

Just your setting will dissuade at least half of the people. You don't write about the familiar martial arts world, and you don't write about the familiar modern world. I can't think of a reason why you shouldn't attack.