Hundreds of Meridians to Cultivation to Immortality

"Baimai Cultivation" new group: 2.7.5.3.4.7.2.5.1

It's good that the book doesn't throw away the setting at the beginning of the book. It's also good that the book triggers conflicts at the beginning. However, it just pursues a fast pace and loses its charm. I hope the author has more time to study novels and less time to post advertisements for book reviews! When it's time to fire, it's bound to be a fire!

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It feels good now, Old Man Mo has to bury him...

In my opinion, even if you are not an experienced reader, you have read a lot of books. The plot is very good and full of ups and downs. It makes me eager to read and have a sense of anticipation... Already collected, come on! 🤭😁🌹

[Two thousand words long review: Integration of book reviews of "Cultivation of Immortality by Hundred Meridians"] In today's impetuous Internet literature world, this book is like a clear stream in the woods on the outskirts of the city. It makes people feel refreshed and refreshing. The words are full of fairy spirit, which reminds me of the first time I read Zhu Xian. Today's fantasy works lack too much. Killing on the pretext of survival and plundering on the pretext of becoming stronger make fantasy works no longer necessary because they completely deviate from the way of heaven. When rules do not exist, people's behavior will be unconstrained, let alone humane. Reluctantly writing a book can only be done for a short time. Only by carrying the Tao through writing can we go further and further away. Most of the fairy tales are about going from weak to strong, or carrying some emotions until the end. Such plots are never cliché, especially the author's descriptions are obviously very moving, which increases his own chips! I have read a lot of articles about fairy tales, but very few have read the whole book, just because there are either too many killings or too many roughly the same plots! Generally speaking, the book "Cultivation of Immortality with Hundred Meridians" is more popular for ordinary people. Why can't the Immortal stream compare to the Mortal stream? It's not because immortals are not awesome, it's just because mortals are more down-to-earth. What's the point of cultivating immortals? Immortality? Free? Or is it detachment? I don't think so! Just because of being alive! Cultivation of immortality is just a profession. What else can you do besides cultivating immortality? In order to live, to live better, one has to innovate in cultivating immortals. The protagonist Zhou Tian is such a person, constantly struggling just to live, and in the struggle he got such luck, so he created "Cultivation of Immortality with Hundred Meridians", which is a history of blood and tears of the growth of an immortal! It is also a history of ordinary people's upward struggle! Nowadays, the protagonists in many novels are full of indifference, viciousness, selfishness, and pretentiousness, which makes people have no desire to read. When I read a novel, I have to read the protagonist first. If I don't like the protagonist, no matter how good the plot is, I don't want to read it. I like the protagonist of "Baimai Xiu Xian" very much at the moment. I hope he will not become indifferent as he grows up, always maintain an innocent heart, and not fall into the cliché! Some suggestions, that is, don't limit yourself to past thinking, don't seek a bigger picture, and seek travel between planets! The biggest advantage of such a result is to become a great god. The disadvantage is that the author's emotional description at the beginning will slowly fade away until it finally disappears in people's minds! I believe that the author's careful thought will make the relationship between the characters more attractive, interesting and interesting. Don't limit it to two or three characters, and don't put everything on the protagonist! That would get very boring! To make the conflict more vivid, an ideal conflict is the best! Don't just write about bad guys in a simple sense! Needless to say, the author's ability is very strong. However, whether it is because each chapter is too particular about perfection or because the number of words is too few, it always feels like the author has not tried his best! In the beginning, writing is like this, but it will be better if you keep it above a certain word count! In the future, when charging for chapters, it will be very troublesome if there are not enough words in each chapter! Everything has a process of getting used to! After reading the introduction of "Cultivation of Immortality with Hundred Meridians", I felt deeply moved. The introduction is clear in purpose and thoughtful, and can be read and understood. After reading the first chapter, the description is excellent in every aspect, whether it is the detailed scenery, description of actions, or the psychological activities that appear just right, which brings a strong interest in reading - not only in the writing style, but also in the emotion. If you just read the introduction, you only feel a coldness and rigidity, but there is no bright and touching color revealed in the article. Whether it is the son's reluctance to let go of his mother, the protagonist's attachment to life, Su Yue's habit of pursuing the protagonist for four years, and the protagonist's struggle between life and death, they are all beautiful. It is not only the beauty of the description, but also the beauty of the emotion. Especially the design of the girl Su Yue makes people feel that this character is both pitiful and pity. This is life, this is how life is, and this is also the trick of fate. When you want to pursue and desperately want to get it, it will always pull you far ahead. When you turn around and leave, it's often when fate turns around. Unfortunately, by that time, it was already too late. I like this beginning very much, and I also like the author's writing style, which is capable, concise and rich.

Heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs! In a place where the strong are respected and where immortality is cultivated, some people just make unremitting efforts for immortality, survival, and unblocking of meridians. This is exactly in line with the title of the book "Cultivation of Immortality with One Hundred Meridians". The opening chapter of "Baimai Cultivation" is based on the quarrel between a couple, and the plot develops. This is not unusual in cultivation novels, but after the author revealed the reason for the antagonism, it became strange. Because this child was born prematurely, why was he born prematurely? The opening chapter has already explained that this is the cause, and what are the consequences of premature birth? It was the antagonism between Mr. And Mrs. Zhou, because the stupid husband misunderstood his wife and thought she was cheating on her. If the plot arrangement of the Zhou couple's rebellion is considered qualified, then the connection between cause and effect is outstanding. The author controls this very well. This is a highlight of "Cultivation of Immortality by Hundred Meridians". Next is the second highlight, which also uses the stabbing of the wife as a point, and they are rescued separately. The woman is rescued by a big man, and it is even revealed before that that the woman is a master of cultivation. At the same time, our protagonist Zhou Tian is pitifully rescued by a cultivator, which just lays a hidden clue. If the plot arrangement of this hidden line is qualified, then the subsequent plot section of the baby cultivating immortality is the second highlight of "Hundred Meridians Cultivating Immortality". The author explains very well how a baby can become an immortal, because he is a time traveler. Therefore, he has the IQ of a mature person, and at the same time has a harmless appearance like a baby to hide it, and then secretly learns the basic skills of Huayun Sect to cultivate immortality. Everything seems very natural, and the entire plot arrangement is coherent and goes with the flow. The third highlight of "Cultivation of Immortality with One Hundred Meridians" is that the person who failed to win the prize was killed instead. Although this sentence is rather rude, I have to say that this plot arrangement is another highlight. Li Jinyuan is more than seventy years old. As he grows older, his desire for survival becomes stronger, so he hopes that Yuanjing will break through, but he hasn't! He risked his life to pick the green fruit, but failed to achieve a breakthrough! In the end, we had no choice but to seize the body of Zhou Tian, ​​our protagonist. In the context of a world of cultivation where the world is unkind and everything is a fool, everything seemed very reasonable. I originally thought that the seizing of the body would be successful, but in the end, Zhou Tian turned against him. Everyone who has seen it knows the reason. Zhou Tian is a time traveler. The protagonist took this opportunity to not only increase his connections, but also obtain a secret book and a treasure, which can be said to have many benefits. Then everything went out naturally to experience, fight monsters and upgrades, and encounters a series of adventures. The reason was that he could not return to the mountain gate because his cultivation level had increased. At the same time, Pig's Foot also wanted to find a cheap mother in this life, which just met the hidden clue at the beginning of the chapter. On the whole, "Cultivation of Immortality by Hundred Meridians" has a clear context and a brilliant plot arrangement that is not abrupt and has no flaws. The early foreshadowing is relatively small for a cultivation novel. The introduction of the exercises is not blunt. It is a good work that is expected to become a god. However, there are some slight deficiencies. The author chose the model of infant cultivation, and did not control the growth of age. It was first three months, then a year and a half, and then six years old. During this period, the person who took the body came and went, as little as three to five days, as long as a few months. The arrangement of this time and time is confusing. If not carefully distinguished, it can easily lead to misunderstandings. I hope it can be helpful to the author.

Well, I tried to write something. Although the main text is only 110,000 words, it is not very long as a web article. The review starts from two aspects, one is the highlights, and the other is the "shortcomings" of the author in my opinion. Sentences are extracted from the original text, and the number of chapters is indicated. (The format is the number of the chapter--) Highlight 1: (Wedge as Chapter 0) 0--It is very accurate to compare life to the slow passing of bits and pieces. Indeed, the most profound goal of cultivation is to live forever. Mortals only have a dream for a hundred years. Birth is the beginning of dripping. When you stare at it, it seems that the dripping is very slow and there is still a lot of time. However, a pessimistic reality is that the slow but constant passage will naturally end with the water empty, the lights extinguished, and everything becoming empty. Highlight 2: 0--At the beginning, there were very loyal supporting characters, a very deep ambush, and the conversation between the three people in the whirlpool revealed a corner of the grand world. In addition, the title is "One Hundred Meridians to Cultivation to Immortality", and it is said that the original meridians are fourteen, and the difficulty of opening one meridian increases exponentially. If the author can grasp the subsequent trend and continue to be high-spirited, it will become a classic, which is called becoming a god step by step. It feels not ordinary difficult. Exponentially increasing! Highlight 3: From Chapter 4 to Chapter 30, the plot, description, etc. Gradually become better, the behavior and things are more harmonious, and it looks more comfortable. With the potential of some masterpieces, the label "Xianxia Classic" set by the author himself is not so far away and unattainable. Disadvantage 1: 1--The sharp sword pierces the air. It can be seen how fast it is, and it is close in just one breath. A sharp sword can pierce the air. Ordinary people can do it. Because they made a chi chi sound, they said how fast the speed was. I didn't think it was that fast. At least I should reverse the order and highlight the chi chi sound to describe how fast it is. And It's not about piercing the air to highlight; in addition, the time between breaths is not enough to explain how short the time is. It is better to use the time between blinks. Breathing is rarely completed within one second, while blinking can be about one-third of a second. . Disadvantage 2: Some sentences are poorly written. 1--Perhaps she was stabbed with a sword to protect herself. Can't you add "and"? Who was stabbed by the sword? The original text obviously meant her, but looking at this sentence alone, there is an ambiguity that she protected Zhou Tian and allowed Zhou Tian to be stabbed. Should it be changed to (she was killed in order to protect herself) Sword thrust), this is rigorous. 2-- Along the path up the mountain, the vegetation is lush and the air is fresh, smelling like drinking from a sweet spring. "Yan" should be "along"; in addition, the freshness of the air is just a little smell, a very slight feeling of force. It is refreshing to smell it, but how can it become a relatively heavy force like drinking water? The scouring effect is like drinking from a sweet spring? 2--"Creak" for a moment, the door of the wooden house slowly opened. Let's not talk about whether the sound of slowly opening the door is a squeak or whether it is a squeak if it is quickly opened. The sound of slowly opening the door is another continuous sound. The main reason is that the squeaking sound has started, and it will take a while for the door to open. The door must open before this, and the slowest thing is that it happens at the same time. However, light travels faster than sound. Adding a "moment" is weird, isn't it? Disadvantage 3: What Lu Tianming gave Li Jinyuan was preceded by a Yuan Jing (should be something like a spiritual stone or a crystal core), and only a few lines later it became an elixir bottle (a bottle of elixir). Obviously this should not be the same thing. This memory, the author's work of digging and filling pits, seems to be very dangerous.

🌹I like this beginning, especially the sentence "The motherland needs you." Oops, I almost laughed. But to be honest, I really like this kind of writing. Capable, concise and rich in imagination. It gives me a feeling that this book should be a book with more insights on life. I don't know why, but I felt like this after reading the first three paragraphs. I prefer realistic things, not too floating, not too far from the ground, not down to earth. I think the beginning of this character, especially the design of this girl, makes people feel that this character is pitiful and pity. Really, hey, I just want to say, this is life, really, life is often like this, what you want to pursue, what you desperately want to get, when you run forward, it is always pulling you from a distance ahead. When you turn around and leave, it's often when fate turns around. Unfortunately, by that time, it's too late. I decided to pursue it. Let's not look at the book in our hands. Let's look at yours first. Ha ha. I'm done, just reading. If my classmates find out, they will hate me. Okay, I'm still fine, hehe. I promised that after reading the long review, the two of them would do it together. Haha😄 Big cheers. You are awesome!

What a great book (in fact, I was attracted to it by the wife's instruction manual) I just read the first chapter, it was pretty good...

It is: 2753 divided ***** (the child is angry five three and the death child is five one).

If it cannot be updated stably, can you save the draft first?

In today's impetuous Internet literature world, this book is like a clear stream in the woods on the outskirts of the city. It makes people feel refreshed and refreshing. The words are full of fairy spirit, which reminds me of the first time I read Zhu Xian. Today's fantasy works lack too much. Killing on the pretext of survival and plundering on the pretext of becoming stronger make fantasy works no longer necessary because they completely deviate from the way of heaven. When rules do not exist, people's behavior will be unconstrained, let alone humane. Reluctantly writing a book can only be done for a short time. Only by carrying the Tao through writing can we go further and further away. Most of the fairy tales are about going from weak to strong, or carrying some emotions until the end. Such plots are never cliché, especially the author's descriptions are obviously very moving, which increases his own chips! I have read a lot of articles about fairy tales, but very few have read the whole book, just because there are either too many killings or too many roughly the same plots! Generally speaking, the book "Cultivation of Immortality with Hundred Meridians" is more popular for ordinary people. Why can't the Immortal stream compare to the Mortal stream? It's not because immortals are not awesome, it's just because mortals are more down-to-earth. What's the point of cultivating immortals? Immortality? Free? Or is it detachment? I don't think so! Just because of being alive! Cultivation of immortality is just a profession. What else can you do besides cultivating immortality? In order to live, to live better, one has to innovate in cultivating immortals. The protagonist Zhou Tian is such a person, constantly struggling just to live, and in the struggle he got such luck, so he created "Cultivation of Immortality with Hundred Meridians", which is a history of blood and tears of the growth of an immortal! It is also a history of ordinary people's upward struggle! Nowadays, the protagonists in many novels are full of indifference, viciousness, selfishness, and pretentiousness, which makes people have no desire to read. When I read a novel, I have to read the protagonist first. If I don't like the protagonist, no matter how good the plot is, I don't want to read it. I like the protagonist of "Baimai Xiu Xian" very much at the moment. I hope he will not become indifferent as he grows up, always maintain an innocent heart, and not fall into the cliché! Some suggestions, that is, don't limit yourself to past thinking, don't seek a bigger picture, and seek travel between planets! The biggest advantage of such a result is to become a great god. The disadvantage is that the author's emotional description at the beginning will slowly fade away until it finally disappears in people's minds! I believe that the author's careful thought will make the relationship between the characters more attractive, interesting and interesting. Don't limit it to two or three characters, and don't put everything on the protagonist! That would get very boring! To make the conflict more vivid, an ideal conflict is the best! Don't just write about bad guys in a simple sense! Needless to say, the author's ability is very strong. However, whether it is because each chapter is too particular about perfection or because the number of words is too few, it always feels like the author has not tried his best! In the beginning, writing is like this, but it will be better if you keep it above a certain word count! In the future, when charging for chapters, it will be very troublesome if there are not enough words in each chapter! Everything has a process of getting used to! After reading the introduction of "Cultivation of Immortality with Hundred Meridians", I felt deeply moved. The introduction is clear in purpose and thoughtful, and can be read and understood. After reading the first chapter, the description is excellent in every aspect, whether it is the detailed scenery, description of actions, or the psychological activities that appear just right, which brings a strong interest in reading - not only in the writing style, but also in the emotion. If you just read the introduction, you only feel a coldness and rigidity, but there is no bright and touching color revealed in the article. Whether it is the son's reluctance to let go of his mother, the protagonist's attachment to life, Su Yue's habit of pursuing the protagonist for four years, and the protagonist's struggle between life and death, they are all beautiful. It is not only the beauty of the description, but also the beauty of the emotion. Especially the design of the girl Su Yue makes people feel that this character is both pitiful and pity. This is life, this is how life is, and this is also the trick of fate. When you want to pursue and desperately want to get it, it will always pull you far ahead. When you turn around and leave, it's often when fate turns around. Unfortunately, by that time, it was already too late. I like this beginning very much, and I also like the author's writing style, which is capable, concise and full of imagination. The middle part for mortals and cultivators

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A ten-year-old boy is obviously still a child, and didn't you say that the protagonist would be sent down the mountain in ten years? If he were ten years old, then the protagonist would not have left on his own, but would have been sent down the mountain. In that case, the protagonist's cultivation would not have been discovered.

Today's fantasy works lack too much. Killing on the pretext of survival and plundering on the pretext of becoming stronger make fantasy works no longer necessary because they completely deviate from the way of heaven. When rules do not exist, people's behavior will be unconstrained, let alone humane. Reluctantly writing a book can only be done for a short time. Only by carrying the Tao through writing can we go further and further away. The unskilled scholar bowed before him and looked at "Cultivation of Immortality with One Hundred Meridians" as it faded away.

Xiao Shiyan, can you please announce the daily update time?

🤭 Well said, as an author you should be like this, have your own persistence and write the most perfect story in your heart. Support you👍

It seems like I keep changing my cover lately. Do you want to change it every day? I think the previous cover with the flute player was pretty good and very much in line with the artistic conception of your book. This cover is too bright and inappropriate!

I have read a lot of articles about fairy tales, but very few have read the whole book, just because there are either too many killings or too many roughly the same plots! Most of the fairy tales are about going from weak to strong, carrying some emotions until the end. Such a plot is never cliché, especially the author's description is obviously very touching, which increases his own chips! Some suggestions are don't limit yourself to past thinking, don't seek a bigger situation, and seek travel between planets! The biggest advantage of such a result is to become a great god. The disadvantage is that the author's emotional description at the beginning will slowly fade away until it finally disappears in people's minds! I believe that the author's careful thinking will make the relationship between the characters more attractive, interesting and interesting. Don't limit it to 2 or 3 characters, and don't put everything on the protagonist! Then it becomes boring! To make the conflict more vivid, an ideal conflict is the best! Don't just write about bad guys in a simple sense! Needless to say, the author's ability is very strong, but whether it's because each chapter is too particular about perfection or because the number of words is too few, it always feels like the author hasn't tried his best! In the beginning, writing is like this, but it will be better if you keep it above a certain word count! In the future, when charging for chapters, it will be very troublesome if there are not enough words in each chapter! Everything has a process of getting used to! Come on!

Come on! The plot is getting more and more attractive!

There are too few, and it's not enough to watch! Shi Yan is too lazy and despises one 😃

I really hope you can work hard to write. Everyone says that Xianxia is in decline now and has been completely overwhelmed by science fiction and fantasy. But I never think Xianxia books are worse than other books. Everyone has their own ideal Xianxia journey.

I was really excited when I saw this chapter. 🤭🤭🤭🤭 I didn't expect that Boss Shitou could write a mortal's moves so superbly. This chapter not only shows the protagonist's declared compassion for the innocent, but also depicts a sword fanatic who completely forgets his original intention after meeting his opponent for a long time and becomes selflessly indulged in sword fighting. Hey, I'm about to write a chapter where the protagonist fights mortals, and when I saw this, I felt a lot of pressure. After the writing is completed and released, I will notify Boss Shitou to help me correct it. PS: Boss, please update quickly, one chapter a day is a little less, a little less! !

The human body has twelve regular meridians. You are always refining qi. You are too old-fashioned. Zhou Tian was treated as a little white pig for testing. How are the hundred meridians refined? Is one pill enough? I guess the little white pig is miserable. Do you need to add some ingredients, add some fruit, maybe that will be enough, or you may need to do an operation! ! 😃A few more organs will be added, 😭 Let's wait and see, please update soon.

Are you an office worker? I can only update one chapter every day. The writing is very good. Updates will definitely be popular. I hope the author will work hard! ! Tickets are given! ! !