Time and Space Rift in Fantasy World

1. Cover, this cannot be left out and must be done well. The quality of the free covers provided by Qidian is worrying. It is recommended that you find the pictures yourself and use PS to add artistic titles. 2. There is a sentence in the first chapter "Collect data of this time and space". This is an imperative sentence, which is something that requires others to do, rather than what the system says it is doing. It would be much better if it was "Collecting this space-time data information...". 3. There is a problem with Zhou Yu's data layout in the first chapter. It is recommended that the information and name be aligned. There is a typo in the constitution. 4. "Like a seasoned butler" is missing "like a voice". 5. Like stuttering "like", typo. 6. "Asked in a rhetorical tone" lacks a subject, so "that voice" should be added. Also, the period is gone. 7. When the speaker comes first, remember to add a colon, such as... I said: "You actually wrote well." 8. "After a few exhalations", "time" is missing. Posting these first, I'm still reading the rest. In short, my suggestion is that you take a break for an hour or two after coding, and then read it carefully yourself. This can reduce 80% of errors. You know, I revise a chapter an average of seven times. Those great masters still have to revise it twice before publishing it, so don't set too low expectations of yourself. Okay, I need 200 starting coins urgently today, remember to give it to me in the reward.