Naruto's Black Wings

This was probably written by a primary school student. It's so embarrassing to read. Don't call it a white novel, call it a poisonous novel. Friends who come to read this book all know something about Naruto. It would be fine to say that the author has a deep understanding of Naruto, but it seems silly to just randomly add plots and characters without knowing anything about it. The article has an extremely low word count and a lot of typos, and the explanations are so idiotic that you might as well copy them from Baidu. The protagonist is given the past life background of an orphan, but after traveling through time, he looks at the problem like a child. The life experience in the past life has not brought about the improvement of IQ and EQ at all, so it is better not to travel through time.

The Naruto part of this book is a little bit toxic, and after reading more than a dozen chapters I still couldn't stand it anymore. The characters appear at different times and ages, and the origin of ninjutsu is taken for granted. It feels like the author just watched the animation once and started writing without reading the manga. Many settings are explained clearly in comics.

War Orphans Begins The Fourth Generation is 6 Years Old No Golden Finger Rational Planning Realistic Flow In terms of settings, I hit hard, but in terms of plot, I was a coward. I wrote too many originals and dramas, which resulted in a serious downgrade in the second half. There is no top-notch cool writing ideas in Golden Finger (unfortunately, it was a bit stretched in the later period) Disadvantage b: There are too many words, but it is also more realistic. The timeline is a bit messy (actually it is the author's setting), but the settings are all fictitious, and the story is king. It is very interesting! Reading Essay: Isn't the first line indented? In addition, the segmentation is too weak to complain I see this genre again - write dialogue first and then write time transitions or actions It improves the status of Hei Ze, and at the same time indirectly improves the protagonist's ability, which is cool in disguise Loulan's settings are very imaginative, and again: the settings are all fictitious, the story is the essence The author's settings are really bold! Water stop tools are very popular. The setting is very bold, the plot is awkward, and you copied too much from the original work. You have to skip writing and only write the parts related to the protagonist. In summary, this is a novel with a huge world view that maintains the original work. The Naruto part is good in the early stage, but it is poor in the later stage. It includes all the theatrical versions and some original animations. There are too many plots that are not related to the protagonist, giving people the feeling of watching a pirated original work once, and the experience is poor. It is recommended to leave after watching it for free. In the ending, none of the main characters died (including Huiyue). 🤐 Personal opinion please don't spray 🤐

The animation is text-based, and the protagonist is a secondary character.

It's really too wordy. . . .

Did you read the One Piece chapter today? The Black Dragon King was actually punched away by Garp, and the Qiu Dao Jade was actually blocked by the armed color. Seeing this is like asking the author. Is the Black Dragon King who can swallow ten thousand dragons and time rifts so weak? He was actually knocked away by Garp. The Qiu Dao Jade is created by combining the seven energies of yin, yang, water, fire, wind, thunder, and earth. The only high-level energy that can resist the high-level energy of destruction is the Yin-Yang Shield and natural energy, such as aura. The armed color is just the power produced by the human body. It can actually block the power of nirvana of the Qiu Dao Jade. Are you kidding? This is too much. The pirate chapter is too powerful. The protagonist and Imuda are actually tied. , After three worlds of strong men, they ended up in a tie instead of finishing off a native. This is too much.

How did a bookworm become a god? Newbie: I love time travel, rebirth, plug-ins, and beautiful girls! Novice Intermediate: It's fun to be reborn through time travel, and it's good-looking if there are many cheating girls. However, if the protagonist's background is a bit miserable, it's good-looking and exciting when he counterattacks. Senior Xiaobai: It's okay if you don't have time travel and rebirth. It's good if the plug-in has new ideas, but it's better to have fewer girls. I masturbate a lot, so I need to take a rest first. Junior Lao Bai: I've read too many pretense routines, and my blood is a little boiling. If I don't want to read some plain farming stories, well, I'll just read farming stories. Senior Lao Bai: The plot routine doesn't seem to have any excitement at all. It's so annoying! After reading the master's book, it's still the same routine, but I finally feel a little excited. Bookworm Beginner: I have read too many routines, and I have lost all the passionate passion. It seems that the master's book is useless, so I'd better go back and pretend to be a novice. Well, it's not bad, but the plot is a bit cliché, but the creativity is good, but the writing is a bit poor, but it's okay. Senior Bookworm: I have the routine in my heart, but my passion is a little too hot to boil, so let's look at creativity, hey! Why did I think of the next plot halfway through watching it? Hey, it seems that the creativity is good but the routine is still the same. Forget it, I'll give up the book. Godhead is beginning to take shape: After reading thousands of books, the plots and routines can no longer impress me, but now that I am in a book shortage, I might as well look for a seedling. I have read the first few chapters and they are quite creative and have the potential to become a god. However, the subsequent plot has been made up in my head, and it is the same as the subsequent plot. Forget it, I will give up the book. Now I am in a book shortage! Godhead Has Been Completed: I'm a little tired, why don't I check out the female channel? Well, I didn't expect that the female channel still has some good books. Hey, why do I feel like I'm poisoned? I'm a little acclimatized, vomit! Let's go back to the men's video. I read the first few chapters again, and the damn idea appeared again. Now not only the feeling of excitement is gone, but also the sense of anticipation is gone. I'm so tired of reading. Ignite the Divine Fire: After watching the first half, I can't stand the rest of the plot. What's going on? The spoiler plot is getting more and more serious. It's better to go back and read the no-brainer novels. By the way, play the find-the-difference game while reading to see what the difference is between the plot and the plot, eh! The creativity is good, but the plot is a bit cliche, but the logic is not bad, but it's just starting to make up my mind again. Cheng Shen: When I read novels now, I am no longer looking for a good book. I just want to keep reading, because what I read now is no longer a novel, but a habit. In the hearts of novel fans, novels are no longer just a book but a world. This habit is not about addiction but reluctance, just like a daydream. Even though we know it is a dream, we are not willing to let it go. Sometimes we just want to find that reality in another world. The dream cannot be fulfilled in reality. Very busy, novel fans just want to find some comfort. Although they cannot learn anything from novels, every old bookworm will have a unique perspective, because although the characters in the novel are false, they all have their own shining points, otherwise they will not enter our eyes, and these shining points also exist in reality!

How miserable the author is. I firmly believe that the author wrote the book for his dream😰

Skull pain

This book is the first time I have posted and commented on online novels in ten years. In the past, I would simply delete unreadable books and not read them. But this book is no good. It is really rubbish. After reading about ten chapters, I strongly advise everyone not to read it!

This is someone who writes a fanfic without reading the original Naruto novel...🤫🤫

It's cool. What's so special about this book? Is having no characteristics your specialty? It's okay if you don't steal a supporting actress through time travel, it's okay if you don't have a stallion or a harem, but if you don't fight for power, and you don't work hard to cultivate, what's the point of writing some novels? It's still cool!

Chapter 8, the name Ye Wuji appears 64 times, what Ye Wuji does, what Ye Wuji thinks... This is a problem I had when I was writing essays in elementary school. I just want to know how old the author is...

A novel with more than 5 million words has only more than 500 comments? This author is awesome and resilient

Are you writing about Naruto or Baidu Encyclopedia? It's all just speculation and confusion. Only those who have watched Naruto will read your fanfic. Who the hell needs you to keep introducing this and that? There is no actual plot requirement.

The name Ye Wuji is really poisonous.

After reading twenty chapters, this is definitely an expository text. Most of it explains and explains points of view... This is not a novel... Flash people

I have read a hundred chapters of this novel, and I feel like: Hey, what are you writing? It all follows the plot. Do I need you to review the plot for me? Okay, follow the plot. Don't collapse in the early stage. The timeline in the early stage does not match the original work. I have written a lot of nonsense in a verbose manner. The point is that it is still not comparable to animation. Can you use some brainpower? Can you watch the animation again? No wonder not many people read it. It's only thanks to your perseverance that you can continue writing. You can't write a novel just by scratching your head.

It's so poisonous that even an eight-year-old bookworm can't handle it

The sixth level of Hokage can defeat the pirates alone...

The protagonist has to save people but also has to go through the plot. I don't understand, but all the people he saves become gangsters. Is it worth it? Uchiha Fugaku is not innocent at all. He saved him but did not save innocent Uchiha civilians. What is this! The characters of the protagonist are all broken, it's too contradictory.