Superman in the Marvel Universe

The total number of the second generation is almost forty, right? Can you please stop being so childish?

What makes this book discourage people is that the people next to them constantly persuade the protagonist, the Holy Mother, not to say bad things. But people who read this kind of books are all looking for comfort, or to say it's unpleasant or fun. Just do it once or twice. Anyone can do it. The protagonist's parents, Tony, and later Braised Eggman can also persuade, and Hill can also persuade. It's so boring. If you really want to write it like this, don't write about the protagonist traveling through time, just let the locals get the Superman inheritance. The prophecy or the adult's character from time travel are of no use at all.

The author's writing style is so poor that he makes the protagonist's IQ and EQ look like that of a three-year-old child. And there is no main line, no main line, no main line.

Having lived two lives in vain, do you need someone to teach you whether to be a superhero or not? The protagonist's parents didn't live as long as him, so we had to set up a childish ghost who is always suspicious and has no confidence at all. He can't compare to Clark. Go away, you'll be so pissed off, you've ruined my idea of ​​Superman.

I don't know what science fiction is about right now. It's just like a talent show. If the pig's trotters are not cold-blooded or */*, or have no electricity, are mentally ill or whatever, they are not suitable for being pig's trotters. Your fifth chapter makes people feel comfortable and warm.

Why is the protagonist always shocked and moved? . . Alas, she is really more of a woman than a woman. The protagonist's heart was touched as soon as we had a disagreement, and the protagonist had an attack before I even understood what the situation was. . .

I can't stand it, it's too poisonous, are the ether particles the power gems? Could it be that my understanding is wrong? I would like to ask the author to check it when he writes the book. This is a subject with a setting. You can't change it if you want. There are only 4 gems on the earth. There are no power gems and soul gems. Aether particles are reality gems. I abandoned the book. It was okay in the beginning, but I couldn't help but change the setting. Farewell.

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The first few chapters persuade me to quit. I didn't realize it was Marvel until I saw Spider-Man. Marvel is most famous for Iron Man Stark and Captain America. I haven't heard of the Stark Group and the Captain America Memorial Hall in ten years?

I must have read dozens of chapters. I feel like my IQ is more useful than Mr. Superman's. So I decided, I retreated. Come on, I sincerely wish the author a speedy recovery and great success.

The protagonist has no opinion at all and no worldview of his own values! His will is even more fragile. He needs guidance from others and is persuaded by other people's opinions.

The 14-year-old protagonist, 1.9 Meters tall, successfully scared me away 🙂

I have just read a few chapters and there are a lot of bugs. First of all, I have lived in the city for ten years and I don't know about Osborn Tower. I have been classmates with Peter Parker for so long and I have never doubted that this is the world of Spider-Man. Also, at the beginning, I was said to be a top student, but in the library, I said that I fell asleep while reading and couldn't read the book? And no matter which version of Spider-Man it is, isn't the police chief Gwen's father? Why did he become the adoptive father of the protagonist inexplicably? This is except for the fact that Spider-Man is not linked to the Marvel world. If the Marvel world view is added later, there will be more bugs. This is the first few chapters. Although I am not a party person, the protagonist's IQ is really not very good. Super brain can't write it at all.

Sorry, the superhuman abilities in this book are too weak.

This was my first Marvel fanfic

To be honest, is this protagonist really a time traveler or is he an adult? Didn't know this was the Marvel Universe for ten years? At the beginning, the protagonist's bargaining shows that he is a shrewd person, and the rebirth also says that he has a high IQ and a good memory. How do you show your high IQ and high memory? Besides, you should be reborn in a superman's body. It's okay for you, a foreigner, to have a Chinese name, but wouldn't the person who adopted you be surprised? All kinds of bugs keep popping up. Either the writing was not done seriously or the author couldn't control it. So why should the protagonist have a high IQ? You can't control it. So I think it makes sense to stop updating for 3 years. After all, the first few chapters are like this, and you don't know what kind of chaos it will be in the future. You said you have to ask your parents to save Uncle Ben, and if you want to save the earth, do you have to ask your grandpa? Since time travel and the adult protagonist should have his own values ​​​​and the ability to see and deal with things, the result is that a child is still a child in his 30s. Really now, Marvel only has a few steps that can be seen as logical and smooth without too much Chinese flavor.

Superhero becomes super nanny. So what does it mean to be a hero, to be a nanny?

I didn't want to watch it from the beginning. You wrote the movie version of Marvel. Then can you understand the Spider-Man in Marvel? You wrote a generation of Spider-Man? (; 1_1)

The protagonist has no use for the memory of his previous life. With such a strong learning ability, there are so many opportunities to make money in more than ten years? Ways to make money? You seem to have no connection to the Marvel world at all. You haven't read the comics, haven't you even seen the movies? I still don't have the ability to solve the palladium poisoning in Iron Man. I'm also drunk. Whoever watched Iron Man doesn't know the solution?

Why do authors like to make the protagonists or superheroes in Marvel seem so great and upright, and not human at all? Is it really good to be so deified? People are always a combination of light and darkness. It's nothing more than a matter of proportion. Discussing deeds, one does not care about one's heart, and no one is perfect when considering one's heart. It's okay to brag about your actions, but you really can't accept it in your heart. Other people's original works are not so divine. Let's briefly give some examples of some uncomfortable places in this book (maybe this is the difference between an old fritter and a kid. You can have different opinions and accept communication but not quarrels. Also, don't be a person who dares to do something but dare not admit it). The first point: the second half of Chapter 7, the original text "Because they are kind, they always help the weak, because they are just, so they Always using your own abilities to fight criminals, this is the heart, a heart that only superheroes have. If Sora has strong power, then they will eventually go to crime and destruction." When I saw this paragraph, my first reaction was that I always help the weak because of my kindness. Why should I always help the weak? Isn't it the right person to help? Why do you always help the weak? Is it because you are weak? In the second paragraph, "Because they are righteous..." Who defined justice for them, and somehow you became a representative? It's nothing more than the violence of the majority against the minority, which is determined by the buttocks. It's so high-sounding. Moral kidnapping is like this 6. There is also the sentence "Always use your own ability to fight criminals" which is also very interesting. What is a criminal? The first reaction of ordinary people is that criminals are those who violate the law. If you use your own abilities to fight criminals, it is not against the law, because the law does not give you the right to fight criminals. While you are upholding the rules and not allowing others to violate them, you are trampling on the rules yourself. Doesn't it just tell us that when we are powerful, we can trample on the rules? Then it can also be understood that because I am powerful, it is just for me to break the law. The third paragraph, what does it mean to have great power in vain, will eventually lead to sin and destruction. Combining the above two paragraphs, it is not difficult to see that the meaning is that if you do not do things according to our wishes, you are sinful and will be destroyed. What a disgusting thought.

No wonder it looks so awkward. The book was written ten years ago. A modern person with an unsound mind would still be unsound after traveling to Marvel for more than ten years. Could it be that this is the kind of book I read ten years ago?

It was updated 9 years ago, which means it is an old book from more than ten years ago.