Rushing Through the Stars

But I didn't watch Pastoral Datang. . After thinking about it for a long time, it seemed to have the smell of an ancient magic mushroom. . Also, did you offend the editor? It's not like you only received 3,000 yuan after writing it for a year. .

The previous "Pastoral Tang Dynasty" was so well written that I kept following it, but I didn't know when the author would publish a new book. When I read it today, I was stunned. Not only had I published a new book, why was the result so poor?

The overall content is quite good, but there are too many adjectives, too many explanations about people and things, and a long list of prefixes are repeatedly used to address a person and a certain thing. I feel worried that people will not understand it, and it is relatively verbose. When a person or thing appears for the first time or on an important occasion, you can introduce it in a grand way. If you describe it or introduce it with ordinary names, it will become a long-winded and cumbersome introduction.

What is the cover? I can't understand it! I hope you continue to write history! Come on!

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RT, you are cheating. I can't vote on my mobile phone. If I switch to a computer, I can still only vote 5 cards. What the hell! After all, I am also a high V!!!

I used to particularly like Pastoral Tang Dynasty, but I never read this book because of its introduction. When I read it today, it turned out that the writing was still very good. But the monthly ticket results are not satisfactory, what went wrong. I'll buy a lottery ticket tomorrow. If I win, I'll give you a thousand votes. 😁

God is annoying, what about WeChat support, both at the beginning and at the end. Are the people who write programs idiots, mentally retarded or brain-dead? It is inevitable to insert advertisements in novels, but don't hinder readers from reading, okay? Can Tianyuan Da give some advice on the starting point? At least a few blank lines after the advertising text at the beginning and a few more blank lines at the end before it appears? Otherwise, it would be fine to use color distinction or use markers to distinguish it from the content. The planner is really...

I don't know how to put it this way, but the recent scenes depicting battles may... Leave me with a sense of incongruity that there is no room for imagination. The protagonist has always had a sense of dissonance after arriving in a new space, especially as he gets more and more confused as he goes further back. When he first arrives in the new space, the protagonist is in a cosmic scene. When he goes to capture Palparan, he has to pass through a door controlled by a temple. What is the door of the temple here? Portal? Or a teleportation array? Next, how big is it? Is there any way to send tens of millions of combat power at once? Then, is the scene after passing on a planet or similar to the universe? Is there a way to bring hundreds of millions of warships together on the planet? The explosion of millions of battleships can be explained by rule control, but is there any way to squeeze so many on the planet at once? If it is similar to space, there is another problem. It was mentioned earlier that the initial capture was abducted with food and then grilled to indicate whether it was on a planet, a dimension, or a land space. Later, it was mentioned that the damaged battleship was floating and contained items inside (space ~?)... I mentioned earlier that the universe cannot speak in the beginning. As I write this, I feel weird and read it again from Chapter 559. Now I realize that it should not be the problems written above, but rather my own understanding. I need to read it again. Some of the problems are not problems, but just... Weird... You really need to watch it again and again several times to understand it. Maybe it's because watching it every day makes you forget the previous ones, which creates some sense of dissonance...

Come on, author, when will Nalasa wake up? I miss Nalasa. Yeah, that's so cute.