Turtle Book

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The story has twists and turns and is fascinating. It can be seen that Xiaofeng is a very dedicated and talented newcomer. Over time, if you persist, you will definitely gain something. Make some small comments. The text is a bit fat. For example, the first paragraph you wrote: "Old Wu, Old Wu, wake up quickly." I lay on the ground in a daze, with an unexpected pain in the back of my head. I heard Fatty Sun's voice calling me next to me. I shook my head and touched the back of my head with my hands and asked Fatty Sun: "Where am I? Why does my head hurt so much? Who am I? Why am I here." It is described in the first person. He is lying on the ground in a daze, and the protagonist has forgotten himself. How would he know that it was Fatty Sun calling him? Some words are repeated too much, which makes us readers a little tired. "Old Wu, Old Wu, wake up quickly." Where is this? Why am I lying on the ground? Before I could figure it out, a lightning-like sharp pain came from the back of my head, interrupting my memory. I grinned, rubbed my head, looked at the person who just kept shouting at me, and asked with a confused look on his face: "What the hell is this place? Who are you?" Do you think this is better? (Pain is external pain and internal pain. For example, stomach pain and wounds are very painful.)