Heaven Seeks Destiny

First, a routine welcome, and then go straight to the topic. Because the world view of this cat is set relatively large, the story unfolds slowly. Those who are impatient can start with the second "Celestine Arc" or the third "Sakura Arc". If you find it interesting, you might want to watch the first one again. Reason: The first part can be said to be purely "The Way of Heaven?" The initial introductory chapter of "Seeking Destiny" is mainly used to introduce the world view, the main characters and the relationships between them. However, as mentioned in the title, too many things need to be explained, which makes the story unfold very slowly (of course, I feel that every little story in the first part is still very interesting to tell, and every story can be regarded as foreshadowing for the future) The second and third parts have officially begun. The following is an introduction and brief introduction to each part. Friends who are impatient can click the "X" in the upper right corner. This cat's "The Way of Heaven?" "Searching" is a two-protagonist, two-line plot, which was already obvious in the first "Searching". The stories of the male and female protagonists alternate and intersperse with each other. Introduction to the first part Male protagonist: Celestine's journey to find a maid begins. On the way, he meets the princess Ragsis and the vampire girl Lusiya, accepts the teachings of the oriental white boss, and finally ends up in the arena and so on - in short, it is an adventure story in which the protagonist gradually becomes stronger. For the first time, this article's unique "Tao" and Eastern worldview are unfolded. The heroine's line: Sakura's journey to seek to lift Celestine's curse begins. On the way, she meets the second male lead Asa and the young priest Luka, learns Taoism from the Orientals, and finally meets Celestine in the arena. This is also an adventure story, which explains the principle of "Tao" and the formation and learning process. Introduction to Part 2 The second part is about the male protagonist Celestine. An unexpected war disrupted his schedule. It mainly tells the series of performances of this somewhat clever but not very strong male protagonist in the war. In the end, the male protagonist died - purely a personal display stage for the male protagonist (probably) the entire "The Way of Heaven?" The story of "Seeking Destiny" officially unfolds. Introduction to Part 3 The third part is the heroine Sakura's chapter, which mainly tells the journey of Sakura, a new Taoist, one year after the death of the male protagonist (it still seems to be an adventure story, ha) - the foreshadowing of the first two parts is gradually revealed in the third part, further improving "The Way of Heaven?" The world stage of "Seeking Life". Introduction to the fourth part and beyond... I'll talk about it after the fourth part is updated. Thank you for your patience in reading this. If you don't want to press "X" yet, please continue. Character profile: The male protagonist Celestine: A boy with a certain level of strength and a relatively smart mind - he is by no means the kind of boy who has superior skills and is often defeated by others. His brain is not so smart that no one can match him. Even if he detects traps or makes plans, there will be certain loopholes - of course he is still better than the average person. He has a serious personality and a strong desire to protect himself, and he can go to the extent of going berserk for everything he values. Not caring about other things, although the purpose is clear, but as Nabar said, "childish" I never thought about the plan after finding the maid, and just drifted with fate. The heroine Sakura: She exists like the hero's sister. She is the only girl who can control the hero. Her personality is similar to that of the hero. She is a serious and gentle type. She has been silently protecting and supporting the hero. In order to solve the male protagonist's curse, he learns Taoism from the East. Later he became a Taoist. (Her mother is an Oriental, and Sakura was exposed to Oriental culture and customs in advance under her mother's guidance when she was young.) I often reflect on myself because of the words and deeds of those around me. I envy Ragsis's frank character. Vampire Ji Lusiya: A demon hybrid. She has low self-esteem because of her blood. She is cowardly, shy, and afraid of people. She is the favorite of the male protagonist. When she is emotional, her eyes and hair will change color, she will grow demon wings, and her personality will also change. The holder of the Twelve Sacred Artifacts Earth Scythe*Juka. His cowardly character makes it difficult to get along with others, and he has many hesitant sentence patterns in language. Princess Ragsis: The hero's past engagement, she is arrogant and persistent, and will do anything for her beloved. He likes to bully the male protagonist and often makes him irritated and angry. The language is straightforward and the momentum is strong. At the same time, she also has a certain degree of self-consciousness because of her status as a princess. Little Priest Luca: The protagonist's sister-in-law, Loli, is also a foodie, a fool priest who was tamed by the protagonist with candy. I have an innocent and simple personality. I don't know much about men and women, but I don't like them.

In terms of writing style - grass jelly - From the perspective of commercial online writing - failing Advantages: Light novels, magic and sword adventures, coupled with the author's creativity: adding Tao's Shijie view, there are many characters, but surprisingly, each one has a deep impression and distinct personality: Protagonist Reis: A noble boy from Rocktar City Female protagonists: Maid Ogi, Wind Rider leader's daughter Sakura, Demon Swordsman Princess Lagsis, Demon hybrid vampire girl Lusiya Supporting characters: Sironi, leader of the Wind Cavalry, Nabal, the blue blood sword, Saint Wolf, the great sage, Asa, the genius ice master, Loli Luca, the white boss To be able to read the first 100,000 words in one breath is enough to show the power of writing. The psychology and personality of the characters are described in a delicate and touching way, with a sense of animation. Although the plot develops in two lines, it is very clear. The mystery surrounding three years ago makes people curious. Ping theory: 1. Book title and introduction The classification is Western Fantasy, the title is "The Way of Heaven Seeking Destiny", and the introduction also includes a preface, which is more than 300 words long. It cannot attract readers who will really like this book: fans of Japanese sword and magic light novels and ACG fans. On the contrary, both sides are displeased. If you click on the title of the book, why is it Sword and Magic? If you click on the category, how can it be about miscellaneous cultivation. If you look at the long introduction again, how many of them will you click on? Suggestion: Since the writing and concept are so powerful, change the title and introduction to highlight the light novel style, and the introduction should not exceed 140 words. 2. Divide into papers Don't use it in the title, it's not clear: just use the volume dividing function and add a sentence or two of introduction. 3. Number of words per chapter The beginning of a chapter should be at least 8,000 words, or even as high as 15,000? There is a reason for each chapter to be 3,000 words: too short and too long to be read, and too long to be too lazy to read. This is common sense. 4. First person, dual protagonist narration The author uses it very well, but telling the story this way throughout the article has limitations and is a mixed bag of good and bad. The problem of dual protagonists has changed in the second part. 5. Character language Personal impression: Female characters end with "...'S la", especially the priest, every sentence is "...'S said". What's going on with this kind of lip service? I don't think it's cute, I just think it's awkward and cute. Above.