Full of Blood

I've read the first few chapters. The opening chapter is thrilling. Keep paying attention.

After reading the first three chapters, I feel that the writing style and prose are pretty good. However, one thing needs to be said. The concept of your story is too big. There is a lot of information in the first chapter. The readers feel confused when they first read it. You can leave some things that don't need to be written in the front until later. , Speed up the progress of the plot first at the beginning, otherwise it will be difficult to retain readers if the work is slow. You must prioritize the information well, and you can't just want to shove it all at the beginning of the article. This is my ball, 264..407..6244..., And I am a writer. If you don't understand, just ask me.

I hope you don't care about your grades, but just express the world in your heart. When it is finished, it will definitely be a top-notch work. If you can persist in writing millions of words, you will definitely become a god. ----Friends, cherish them. 🌹

🤫🤫🤫Also, can the pig's feet stop being like "I did it. I did it..." Fantasy pairing Now, if you curse people, it can only be said to be nondescript. Come on.