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Why don't you write new books now that you're done? What a shame.

Some people deceived me that there was no one in the book review section. They posted advertisements as if they were massacres. They posted advertisements every day, with a record of five consecutive advertisements, and they had no new ideas. They hung in that long list and took up the page. They left yesterday and came back today, and they were as neat and uniform as running water. They were not the sons of men. As a last resort, we set up an advertising building, do our best, and obey fate. 🤝

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When I was watching "The Immortal of the Side", the most touching thing was the deep love between the protagonist's teachers and students and the deep friendship between friends. It made people feel that among the cold and ruthless fairy tales on the Internet today, the protagonists are rare and kind-hearted people, but now this protagonist is a bit unsentimental. The first is that in his heart and verbally, he directly calls his senior brother the contemptuous old According to "The Swordsman", which is the most skillful in terms of brotherly love, then even if the other party is expelled from the school, or even turns against each other, it still cannot change the relationship between the two brothers. No matter what the psychology is, this layer of "surface skills" is indispensable. The second problem lies in the protagonist's attitude towards Lu Yun. First of all, he does not trust his master. If Linghu Chong encounters the same thing, he will definitely have a completely different reaction. Moreover, he does not call Lu Yun "master" in his heart, but calls him by his first name. On the contrary, his master wife, who has no relationship with him, always calls him "master wife". It's proportionate, no matter how you look at it, you may find it weird. Let's not talk about his psychological activities related to Lu Yun. At least the title should be changed to "Master" to make it reasonable. Otherwise, the teachings in the past ten years will produce another white-eyed wolf in "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". Then it would be too sorry for this protagonist who is quite successful in shaping his image. In my opinion, a sentimental and righteous protagonist, even if he has many shortcomings and shortcomings, or often suffers from it, is still more acceptable and looks more comfortable than a ruthless and righteous person. No matter what achievements Baishi achieved in the end, or how incredible his origins were, since Lu Yun had been kind to him for ten years in cultivating the church, and those brothers and sisters had at least been getting along day and night for seven or eight years, then at least he should not lose too much points in terms of being a human being.

Come on, drop water. . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Damn, what are you doing? ! I said in the last chapter that I was back, but after more than two weeks, I didn't even give a damn. Dad, are you taking the college entrance examination again? ? Oh no, it was supposed to be the high school entrance exam last year. You are so awesome. 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤

I wonder when the author will be able to update every day...

Rare two chapters in two days, +5 recommendation votes

This book looks tired, just like the previous one. His thoughts are uncertain, his words are half spoken, and his emotions are abrupt.

Even if he encountered difficulties, the author did not show that kind of desperate situation, but instead took care of things hastily. The key is that the story is too straightforward and lacks detailed descriptions! Of course, the author's writing style is still very good, and I look forward to the author's new breakthroughs. .

The writing is fresh and I read it all the way through. It's very well written, keep up the good work! The plot unfolds little by little and becomes more and more exciting🤭🤭 One illusion, one reality. Very interesting! It is recommended that you write a good introduction to the content, and it will hopefully become a masterpiece. 😊

It's quite a lot, haha ​​🌹🌹🌹

It has the flavor of Shushan swordsman. It's well written, and it would be even better if the details were more elaborated. It is certainly good to use conspiracy as a guide to draw out the story of love and hatred, but some places are too obscure, and some places do not have more thoughts about human nature. No matter how smart Shiraishi is, he is just a young man who has just come out of the world. He is not deeply involved in the world. Facing conspiracy, facing corruption, and facing the truth, selfishness and justice are all normal. Just like seeing a woman, he will blush and his heart will beat. This is what he should experience. At the starting point, it is more necessary to speed up the main line of the story and dig more pits. It is best to dig a few big pits and then let the readers jump into small pits, one pit after another, constantly putting the readers in a position of complaining.

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Damn, I personally think that your recent writings about pig's feet are a bit too hypocritical, not as good as before. Just kill whoever deserves to be killed. Why make any excuses? On the contrary, I feel like I am deceiving myself. Are pig feet evil? ! ! By the way, it may be a bit early to ask a question. I wonder how to integrate pig's feet? ? The Confucian one is used to complement his sword sect, so how to integrate the sword and the talisman into one Taoist base (golden elixir)? It won't be two, and the final result will have to be reincarnated, rebuilt, etc... Just tell me one or two. 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

I hope I won't stop updating easily again.

Side Door Sanxian is very exciting, it doesn't look like it's the first time I write a book. Since I don't have any rewards or subscriptions, I come to Dangmo to recommend it every day. I don't know if the recommendation ticket is useful 🌹🌹🌹

Isn't it just a bald donkey's job to make a divine horse become a soul, abandoning the body like a bare skin? Almost all the novels on the Internet have failed 🥺

I hope that this time the protagonist can finally get along with his senior sister.

In the episode where Shiraishi comes out of the mountain, both the supporting cast and the protagonist are all junior high school students, and their behavior is unsightly. . . .