Entering Another World with Sharingan

I read part of it and it was a bit jerky to read. There were a lot of plot arrangements that were very unreasonable. Anyway, it didn't leave a good impression on my senses. The plot was pretty average, but books from ten years ago weren't that picky.

This book has a lot of bugs about the Sharingan. I suggest the author read it carefully in the hope that there will be fewer bugs in the future. Needless to say, the evolution setting of the Sharingan (Sharingan > Kaleidoscope > Eternal Kaleidoscope > Rinnegan Eye > Nine Magatama Rinnegan Eye) About Itachi's Amaterasu and Tsukiyuki: Amaterasu didn't add the earth life and the attack range was very poor, but the 5M damage was considerable. Sasuke VS Raikage's fist was ignited by Amaterasu and beat Sasuke for so long. Amaterasu's power was completely inspired by Itachi fans. Monthly: The reason why Itachi calls it the ultimate illusion is that it has something to do with time. Reality lasts only one second for 72 hours in the consciousness space, and the damage suffered during the 72 hours will all become real when the illusion is released. For details, see Itachi vs. Kakashi. As for the weakening of the divine power, it is too severe and there are also problems with the setting: the left eye of the divine power is used for virtualization and spatial movement, and the right eye is used for spatial distortion, which means that space attacks can be used to attack and break through space. Together, the two eyes can greatly reduce the casting time and spatial ability. The virtualization of the left eye can be broken. The six spots of Amaterasu can be broken. If the virtualization is not broken, the virtualization is forgotten. The black spots are broken. Even if the six spots are broken, it can only be broken by the power of God. And the power of his eyes is even more impressive. Even when he was half dead, he could even break through the eight different dimensions of the Six Paths Sage and his mother. After death, the soul can break through the underworld space and pass the Sharingan to Kakashi in this world. It's so cool that he has no friends. . . Susan's BUG is also quite serious. Susan is not invincible. Even the ultimate Susan and the difficulty of the beast were forcibly overcome by the first generation. The defense of the eight-foot mirror is so strong that it is not bad. Author, the bug in your setting that a strong person can even break through space but cannot break through bones Susan is too big. . . Obito is a person who stands at the pinnacle of the ninja world with just one Sharingan. . . There are arguments for Obito's three-magatama Sharingan's ability to blur. 1. It's because of the cells of the first generation. 2. Obito's Sharingan is very special. The blurring ability is just an incidental ability. The real thing to use the kaleidoscope is space movement and space release. The space release is the super powerful fire escape formed by combining the fire escape with the space release. The kaleidoscope is only used when releasing the shuriken from the space 🌹🌹🌹 Personally prefer the second one

On the first day of life in a big city, after passing the interview, and then preparing to officially report to work, no one knows what life will be like next. We can only hope that everything will be good and everything will go well. 😚

I've read hundreds of them. Overall, the story is very fresh, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. It feels like he's forcing the story to start. It's written too deliberately. I can't understand the heroine's story, and I don't know how the author arranged it.

All I can say is, author, have you never seen a woman? Are you still confused with a woman who has been cruel to you several times? Make the protagonist the same as ***.

It's so embarrassing, what kind of electric light x shadow step, Yazhi, etc., I'm really convinced (; 1_1) I have to force myself to name a name, the author is in his late middle school years?

I The writing is unsatisfactory. First of all, most people read it after seeing the Sharingan. Since it starts like this, it must express the strength of the Sharingan and deter all those who are looking for trouble. The pig's feet are kept open so that others don't know. It's a fart to see, let alone hide the strength. I also had a fart mentality back then. I can only get perfect attendance.

After reading Chapter 80, I couldn't stand it anymore. It's not that the writing is bad, but it's tasteless. It is completely unable to mobilize any emotion. Every time I describe the Sharingan, it is forced into a drama, which means it feels weird and not smooth. The protagonist and supporting characters described by the author have no sense of pictures at all, and they feel like they are just dead objects between the lines. Therefore, the stories and fights between them made me feel dead, without characteristics, and difficult to remember. After reading chapter 80, I can't even remember the names of the male and female protagonists, what their characteristics are, and what they look like, let alone the other characters. The above reason is that when the author writes a book, he has writing skills but no emotion. Even the author is a dead thing to write about, and the readers even more so. When an author writes a book and wants readers to read it, he or she must at least put passion into it and enrich the characteristics of the characters. When the characters have characteristics, the story will also have memorable points. For example, when I think of a little bit of Inch Mang, I will think of Li Yang, the protagonist of "Inch Mang". You must know that the book was written ten years ago. When I think of Li Yang, I naturally think of many plots. For example: Wukong, I think of Havoc in Heaven, Journey to the West, and The Legend of Wukong. Especially the arrogant back, the scene where Wukong looks up at the sunset and has a domineering cloak and armor, holding an iron rod, roaring at the sky, and the wind and clouds change color. These are the memory points that the character characteristics give to the plot scenes. No matter how long it has been, if you think of it by chance, it will naturally appear in your mind. Pictures and scenes, sad, surging, soul-stirring, and as plain as water can all be called online classics. Fan Xian in "Qing Yu Nian", Chen Nan in "Tomb of the Gods", Qin Yu in "The Change of Stars", Han Li in "Mortal", Hong Yi in "Yangshen", etc. Are still fresh in my memory. Each book, each protagonist, and each classic plot is the result of the author's passionate writing all night long. Only in this way can readers remember it.

Revisit the Sharingan, support Danqi, and remember the days when I used to chase books in the early morning. It was a bit poisonous in the early stage, but very comfortable in the later stage! No matter what other people say about this book, Naruto and this fanfic are the portrayal of my youth.

Once you see the protagonist giving up on the three princesses, you can leave! Does the protagonist think he is a good person?

In the past few days, the update time may gradually become evening, and the number of updated chapters may also be unstable. Please forgive me. 😭

Except for Lilia, the other women's writing is too idiotic. I feel jealous as often as drinking water. . I was also drunk when I saw it. Writing emotional scenes is so disgusting. The male protagonist's emotional intelligence is enough. Women are like that, but they don't say a few words and let the situation develop. Especially Liu'er, who writes like an idiot. She has low strength and always invites troubles, as if no one can kill her. The male protagonist just defends her blindly. It's so disgusting to watch!

The plot is too forced. There is not enough emotional foreshadowing to forcefully develop the plot. Will be poisonous

It feels very inconsistent to use the Sharingan in an Eastern setting, but think about it, this is a book written a long time ago.

Compared with the date when the author wrote this book, I think this book written by the author is better. The mid-term combat power part is handled better, and it is much better than some books now.

Danqi, there are more than ten chapters missing in Chapter 10 about Earth, and there are also a few scattered chapters in front of it. Are they swallowed up by Qidian? Although it's an old book, don't ignore it {"NickName":"Danqi Tianxia","UserId":178015175}

Wearing the skin of another world, Hokage Bun, almost all his power settings and techniques are copied from Hokage. I read hundreds of chapters and couldn't stand it any longer. The female characters were all too witty and jealous and angry at every turn. The protagonist is like RMB.

Since it's the Sharingan, and since it's not the Sharingan Eye Technique, such as Tenki, everyone thinks it's necessary to use the Shuriken Kamui Eye in the left eye? Danqi has been yearning for the Amaterasu Eye since she wrote this article, but a friend has always suggested the Kamui Eye because he prefers the Kamui Eye 😭 Today I want to ask for your opinions on what kind of eye should be opened for the left eye! ?

The Naruto manga version ended on November 10, 2014. The anime version of Shippuden ended on March 23, 2017. Did the author read the comic version? But the writing is actually quite good. The works in 2014 are still better than most in 2021. I checked the Sharingan before and was lucky enough to find this book. Thank you.

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Trash, trash, that sounds really uncomfortable.

Why does it feel like the whole world is the protagonist's enemy?

Chapter 51 of Danqi, your Eternal Emperor's fight against the Ice Sword Master is gone!

What's going on with Danqi? Chapter 5 of Return to Earth is also missing... What's going on? I'm so short of subscription money for these two books.

The Sharingan awakened too quickly. It was only about ten chapters and then I rented it.

This novel is also a Naruto system text, Douba no Rinnegan. Everyone is welcome to read it.

I have read more than a hundred chapters of Toxic. What is the name of the protagonist after time travel? He is Qin Dan and Nan Jiangli. It is so confusing. There is no mention at the end why the protagonist becomes Qin Dan. The national master directly calls Qin Dan. Is this digging a hole for himself?