I Have a Mobile Phone in My Pubic Area

Very poisonous, lots of pitfalls, novice, lots of nonsense

I have a lot of feelings after reading the first volume. I hope the author will take some time to review the writing and logic of the previous and following chapters. The following are the poisonous points that I personally think 1. Kill the demon to take the inner elixir and completely forget to use it 2. As a time traveler, I know that the mobile phone in the elixir is a golden finger and still think that the application company The apps with fancy names in the store are small games that are not helpful in reality 3. You can choose to buy Kung Fu skills but buy sword skills. In the long run, the former is obviously more profitable. Even if you are cheated, at least you can still practice 4. Duplicity, you can't be a licker and you can't write. It's good to impose a ** emotional drama 5. He has insufficient IQ and EQ, and he doesn't take precautions against obvious abnormalities. He still prefers to blame himself for the incident to show his guilt 6. The devil's transformation is not weak or even very strong at this stage, but even if he doesn't want to kill people, If you don't take the initiative to kill monsters and strive to complete the transformation as soon as possible, you will have to think of it when something happens. Sister Meng is not miserable thanks to the Clean Network Operation When I couldn't beat 7, I said that I had obviously worked very hard. When I saw this, I almost vomited. I would be stupid if I left Golden Finger and didn't click on the ac number

Extremely poisonous, the male protagonist looks like a retard

Opening a plug-in, and still learning so much, it's uncomfortable to watch! ! Forcibly lower your IQ!

After reading forty or fifty chapters, several men and women licked each other throughout. The supporting character has a very low IQ and is seeking death just for the sake of seeking death. The protagonist is in a blood feud. He has taken a cheat and doesn't know what he is doing at home. Still happily being a dog licker? Can you avenge a bloody sea of ​​​​blood by being a dog licker? Or does it mean that in the author's mind, a person with lofty goals would stare at a beautiful woman without doing anything serious? When something happens, I regret that I am not strong enough. I wonder if you don't work hard enough when you stay at home. I suggest you be more careful when writing articles, or just copy other people's writing methods without thinking about the harem. What kind of love story amidst the blood feud? Funny? At first I thought it was an otaku author who has never been in a relationship, but when I saw it, it was a female author. I guess I have seen too many licking dogs and thought that men all over the world are animals that think with their lower bodies. It is recommended to fall in love and experience it thoroughly.

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This book is suitable for young people who have just started to read novels. It is a qualified novel, but it is not suitable for bookworms who have read for a long time. .

The internal sword energy can kill the transformed demon. Is this demon a fake? If you say that the sword energy has derived the sword intention, then there is no problem.

The IQ is not even online, how can I look at it, and the experience bonus is so obvious, there is no reason why it is not popular.

I have to say that this book is actually really good.

How can you become stronger without recharging money😜😜

Pretty good, fast paced, but not bad

Come on, I recommend two sheets a day to you.

After seeing what the protagonist did when he opened the app store for the first time, I was going to leave Is the protagonist just too smart? Now that you know that your mobile phone affects you, your martial arts and martial arts are all installed as applications that affect you You know this clearly, but look at what the protagonist did? Don't use your brain to think, and choose a space called Devil's Transformation without thinking. Is this done by someone with brains? Just like the several applications you provided yourself, Ancient Martial Arts Cheats Library, Divine Power Collection, World Map, and Yifang Farm Which one is not better than yours? Rice essence, the taste of grass and trees Anyone with some brains will choose a farm to cultivate spiritual crops or spiritual rice No matter how bad you choose the other three, they are nothing compared to you. Demon transformation, okay The protagonist of this plot is indifferent and is too for the plot.

Perhaps many people don't know how important a recommendation vote or a collection is to an author like Dan Qi who has just opened a new book and is not very popular. Specially open this post. Thank you all for your support. Your collection and recommendation are the greatest support for Danqi.

The title of the book has seven words in total and there is one typo. That's awesome.

Five monthly votes have been cast, and there are constant recommendations. The author would like to add a lot of detail! 🤔

Haha, there is something wrong with my brain. A great monk who has cultivated the Immortal Nascent Soul for most of his life has only twenty or thirty spiritual essences. One ordinary skill costs three hundred. It depends on how you collapse in the future. You are a bunch of poisonous people. In order to limit the development of the protagonist, you can't mess around like this. In the future, a random person will definitely be able to produce thousands or tens of thousands of spiritual essences. Can this book be more rigorous?

Today is the third day since I opened the book. No one has read it, but I feel that my writing is pretty good. I have written about the stirrings in my heart, the knife in my heart, and the demon in my heart. I couldn't sleep at about three o'clock in the evening, so I just wanted to write. I haven't had such an impulse in a long time. Is it true that I am not young anymore. 🌙

The absolute best person who wrote this book is a female author, otherwise the pig's feet in the book would not be so dickish and licking.

This book is about a world where immortal cultivators and warriors coexist. Immortal cultivators have a longer lifespan, which is similar to other immortal cultivating novels. Everyone envies immortal cultivators, but I feel that immortal cultivators are really damn weak. The warrior realm is warrior, martial arts master, martial master, etc. The protagonist in the martial arts realm can kill golden elixir monsters at will, and hacked to death the boss who is about to get pregnant, and martial arts master will chop down the great demon of transformation. A warrior who has practiced for five years at the first level can cut through the three realms of immortal cultivators: Qi training, foundation building, and golden elixir. However, this book also promotes that immortal cultivators are particularly powerful. I feel so lucky that the immortal cultivators in this world are not extinct. It is strange that the monsters are not extinct.

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Seeing the devil transform the space and leave, this step is really a bit poisonous. Obviously we all know that mobile phones are unusual and unique, so the mobile phone in your Dantian absorbs spiritual essence and allows you to play games? ? ? Instead of choosing the previous cheats and farms, choose the inexplicable demon transformation space.

When I read the first two chapters, I felt like it was just a fight. The protagonist and the villain were so verbose that it was terrifying (ŐдŐ๑)! It's enough to describe each move in detail. It's a bit unbearable to have to add the psychological description of the enemy to each move. They also have to have a conversation. They are both angry and talking about each other... I can't accept it at all.

How does it feel to have typos in book titles?

It feels like the author is forcibly suppressing Goldfinger's presence and restricting Goldfinger, which makes me feel heartbroken.

The protagonist's character seriously violates human psychology, and any behavior that does not contribute to human reproduction is hypocritical. The protagonist is hypocritical and blames the author for being hypocritical. Just don't read it!

One thing to say is the typo in the title of the book. Either the author likes to sensationalize or is not rigorous. Neither of these are good, so I say goodbye.

You used such a big golden finger to forcefully write the protagonist as mentally retarded. You were quite decisive at the beginning. You forced yourself to write three chapters to kill that ugly guy, but in the end, all his normal strength burst out. Either write more comfortably, or you'll be done with it if you're reckless. If you don't have that level, don't write those messy things that make you feel more uncomfortable the more you read them.

I don't want to read it when I see Chapter 25. It would be fine if you could just write about martial arts. But it's a failure if you give the whole devil space and bring a smart little devil. I don't know what you think.