E-Sports? No, This Is a Real Secret

There are several twists and turns in the first volume, and most of the unreasonable parts of the previous plot can be explained. Overall, the first volume of this novel is probably above average. After all, 70 to 80 percent of novels nowadays may not be as good as studio novels. I don't know if it's because of poor performance or the author's insistence on not putting it on the shelves. Without the twist at the end of the first volume, the plot of this novel would have been scored at most 6 out of 10. There would have been fewer readers subscribing. With the twist, it would have attracted a lot more readers. The score could be With a score of about 8, I think there is no problem with the plot. At least the first volume has an outline and it has never strayed from the main line. The score will depend on the later chapters. The plot needs to be exciting. But after all, there is a big twist in the first volume. It is difficult to do one big twist in each volume. Without spoiling anything, let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. It cannot be said to be shortcomings, but should be said to be shortcomings. After all, this is a new author. First of all, the introduction. In order not to spoil the story, the protagonist is not a fun person, so he did not write it in the tone of the protagonist as in many novels nowadays. Instead, he chose to write the introduction in the old way. This will cause some readers to leave after seeing the introduction. However, there is really no way to avoid spoilers. After all, he is not a famous author. Writing an introduction to the Riddler, or being brief, can attract people. The advice I can give here is not particularly good. Write a new introduction after each volume is written, or add an introduction to each volume. Then in the novel, the first three chapters at the beginning explain the world view and explain the background of the protagonist. Chapters 4 to 7, and 8 to 13 are when the protagonist plays the game based on memory. After all, the beginning can only be said to be quite satisfactory. From here on, there are some combat problems. The protagonist's powerful fighting method means that the opponent is very strong and has a high level, and then uses the advanced moves in memory to defeat the enemy immediately. The most important main plot begins later, and there is a transfer phenomenon. The subsequent battles with the enemies are also the biggest shortcomings in my opinion. The enemies are all high-level and powerful. During the battle, I just read the name of the skills, and then the protagonist uses the advanced moves in memory to defeat him. In the battle, the opponent is basically eliminated in two rounds. The time for important battles in the plot can be very short, but the time for readers to watch cannot be short. In an important battle, the opponent uses a move, the protagonist uses an evasive skill, the opponent uses another move, and the protagonist uses a big move to fight and win. The result of not having a specific process is that each battle lasts for one chapter, and it is finished in one chapter. It also explains the reactions of the people before the battle, the surprise in the middle, and the exclamation after the battle. One chapter is calculated as 3,000 words. Does the battle have 2,000 words? This does not mean that using two skills to defeat the opponent is not possible. The important thing is to write about the specific battle, rather than just the skill name and gorgeous appearance, and then the skills are bombarded. You can completely write about how the opponent resisted and evaded during the release process. If blocked with a shield, whether the shield was damaged, whether it will not be able to hold up the next time it is used, whether the shield was thrown out when it cannot hold up, or whether it was hit by a sword due to a crack in the shield. These are all detailed descriptions. There is no need to write down such details every time. A new skill must be described in detail, right? To defeat a BOSS, you need to have the details to defeat the BOSS, right? Otherwise, if you replace martial arts with superpowers, it's the same as thinking of a skill name and then adding power.

This is the plot? Renaissance

I want to laugh when I see it. I won't say whether it's good or not. It's "really" "Renaissance", hahahahaha. More than ten years ago I was willing to give it 7.5 Points, but now I can only give it 6 points because it is watchable. But there was a time when the stars were shining and the gods were everywhere. There were too many good books at that time, and the author probably couldn't get ahead. Now it's the short guy who wins the battle. It's not about how good your writing is, but the studio or the AI ​​writing lady. It seems to be readable. I'll give you one more point, 7 points. Keep writing, author. I don't know about others. Anyway, I'm a little interested hhh

Okay, okay, unlimited layer cakes.

This kind of thing is no longer popular these days. If you have the strength, just pretend to be like this with a serious injury debuff. It's okay to be a modern absolute safe zone. It doesn't matter if there is a transfer phenomenon that is so dangerous. You are not invincible.

I've exhausted my talent as a talent, and I can't even feel what I wrote after the underworld.

The content is pretty good. I suggest you change the introduction. This introduction should have dissuaded many people.

Personally, I think it's quite interesting, and there's a twist at the end, which is the foreshadowing of the first volume.

Chapter 106: Why did I subscribe to two of the same 🤔

Wow, an idea flashed in my mind and I suddenly remembered the Sharingan book. When I was a junior high school student, I really liked the Sharingan. I read many books related to the Sharingan. More than ten years later, this is the only one that left a slight impression on me. Considering that Dian Niang has strengthened the seal so much over the years, I thought it was gone. I searched with the intention of giving it a try, but I didn't expect to find this book. It's really touching that the author has been able to keep writing for so many years despite having average grades. Writing these words is a tribute to my youth and the books I loved. I wish Danqi can create better words in the new year, and I also wish all friends who read this comment a happy new year.

Before and after the cross-border and after the cross-border are two completely different contents. I prefer the before and after the cross-border.