Fu Dao Tongtian

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Hehe, Lin Lin read all of Wenwen, and then found that it was not empty and interrupted the update! ~Come on! I want to talk about some minor problems I saw! ~I hope Fu Kong doesn't mind, maybe Lin Lin is a more picky person 😥 Let's talk about Scar San first. I didn't like him very much at first, but I didn't expect that Fu Kong would make him change his ways later. . . Because how to say, there is very little description of Scar San, and then I think that Scar San is an insignificant person. However, judging from the following text, it is obviously not the case. . Then. . There are two duplicate descriptions of Scar III's hands in Chapters 1 and 7... When he was refining the divine seal, Long Tu seemed a little surprised that the golden dragon was like a living creature. Didn't he have done it before? I'm surprised because it's different from before or something, I haven't explained it properly, so I feel it's a little bit inconsistent... Then the names Long Tu and Yan Jingyun were used incorrectly several times in many dialogues starting from Chapter 9 of Volume 2... In the dialogue, it was said that Long Tu should be Yan Jingyun... Then, I felt that Long Tu's character was not mature enough. I don't know if it was because he had not fully integrated Yan Jingyun's soul... Having said so much, I feel like I am always finding faults T^T... Overall... Actually! Very nice! Brother Zhen Bao's name is really unique. Hehe, it looks like the two of them will have great development in the future? ~ The writing style in the following chapters has matured a lot, the plot gradually unfolds, and it feels like it has just reached the critical moment, and then... It's a bit unkind to stop and stop. Keep up the good work, I wish Bu Kong it will be available soon~ Remember to mention it when it is released! ~🥺 Huhu~

Naicang Meng: 14.7.3 I've only read two chapters before writing a review. Don't blame me... Actually, I'm just here for fun (*∩_∩*)~ A long time ago, I read two chapters and stopped reading because I felt the plot was a bit awkward. When I re-watched it, I found it had been overhauled. The awkward feeling is gone, it looks much better! Hehe, just say a few words and continue reading the article~

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