Cultivation in a Pocket World

But the details need to be improved! For example, the protagonist's sudden appearance of spiritual consciousness and level of cultivation. The protagonist is too new at this foundation-building stage. He has no innate talent, but his physical strength and physique are not as good as those of ordinary warriors! Perhaps these guards are at the level of top martial arts masters, but without clear explanations, they will inevitably be speechless at the sudden rise of the protagonist in reality. I like the setting of cultivation levels, and the design of the cave is also novel, which eliminates the embarrassment of the earth having nowhere to use force, and also solves the basic source of adventure and adventure. Of course, I think the earth also has places to explore, such as those unsolved mysteries! As for the supporting characters, I think the creation is average and requires more delicate writing skills, so the author might as well spend more time improving the depth and structure of the plot. If the supporting characters are not necessary, just try your best! In addition, as for the armed forces and countries on the real earth, it is better to use low force and ignore the country. Otherwise, unless you have the strength to guarantee that you will not be controlled, involving this kind of plot will only make the novel bad. This is the summary of many unfinished novels. Involving these is really not worth the gain, because it involves humanities, military, institutions, national conditions and other aspects, which is really difficult to write well. So far, no book that can write about this aspect has appeared, not even the masterpiece The Best Young Master! (Forget about those who specialize in writing about civil servants and war. Those are professionals, otherwise they wouldn't be able to write!)

The author writes really well, please keep updating! Looking forward to the follow-up plot! "Taibai Heavens" is the most popular two-dimensional unlimited stream in 2019! Tianya Mingyue Knife Game, Taibai Golden Finger! Faith in the Heavenly Sword is white, and the anime is coming to sweep across the world! Whether you are strong or not is a matter of version, whether you are handsome or not is a lifelong belief! There is no enemy that a set of skills cannot defeat! If there is, then refresh the sky with haze and get another set! ! Written anime, Heaven and Earth - Weapon Race Legend - Killing City.

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