Cultivation Chef

I woke up early in the morning and was casually browsing, and came across this novel. After reading two chapters, I felt it was quite innovative and the storyline was quite immersive. Please support it~! (Small suggestion: Pay more attention to the characterization and it will be even better. It is very important to let the readers feel for the protagonist. I believe you will write better. Come on!) (A shameless little advertisement O(∩_∩)O~~ My new book, please support it if you have time) [url=ABrUzu]

If Yan Yunyan is the protagonist, then is this a female protagonist novel?

It's not a masterpiece, it's a masterpiece. The subject matter is very novel. It combines ancient martial arts, immortality, and chivalry in the city. Especially the various martial arts secrets and tricks. It feels like an urban martial arts novel. But what's even more amazing is that it's not just martial arts. The more popular urban cultivation is also included. Anyway, it's all kinds of monsters, immortals, chivalrous people, etc. , The elements are very rich, but I think there are some parts that the author did not write well. The title is called Xiuzhen Little Chef, right, but you didn't spit out the kitchen. Cooking for others, you didn't describe it in detail. Enter the kitchen, bring it out, it's delicious, you can't stop, that's it. Don't you think your balls hurt? It is recommended to look for more information on the chef, and then combine various exaggerated and fantasy techniques to describe the food, flavor, shape, etc., So that it will not appear overwhelming. And I feel that the description is not very detailed, the plot needs to be more detailed, and more passerby characters and side plots should be added to make the main plot fuller.

Don't completely follow the line of cultivation. Cooking must be written to make it a better book, and there are more subjects when writing about cooking. For example, you can write about the eight major Chinese cuisines of Shandong, Sichuan, Guangdong, Fujian, Huaiyang, Zhejiang, Hunan, and Anhui. You can also write about famous recipes such as the Manchu-Han Banquet. You can also write about cooking competitions. Although the protagonist's cooking skills depend on a knife, I think it is best to give some restrictions (but see It seems that the author did not intend to work on the cooking aspect of the main character's magical skill with the kitchen knife, and the kitchen seems to be just a shadow in this article). I feel that if the author did not use the kitchen to write it, it would be a simple urban cultivation at most. It just has more elements such as classical mythological characters than other novels. However, these elements also need to test the ability to control them, and cannot be simply introduced into the text. If cooking can be integrated into the text, and the kitchen knife BUFF can be corrected (the kitchen knife can be described as simply invincible at all), for example, cooking skills also have grades, one to nine, or various realms of heaven, earth, humans, gods, or other things, the kitchen knife also needs a protagonist Only by improving your cooking skills can you unblock it. This solves the previous big bug, the theory that kitchen knives are invincible. Because for ordinary people, kitchen knives are definitely the best in the world for cooking, so it is normal to feel that they are invincible. Of course, the above are assumptions and suggestions), as long as the kitchen spit Come out and read more information about cooking, describe the protagonist's magical skills in cooking or various rare ingredients from the world, and then control the multi-element mythology well, then it will be a good book. These things are all rich themes for novels, and ingredients can all be capitalized Close-up ones, such as traveling across mountains and rivers to find ingredients in order to learn skills from a great master, running all the way, and encountering constant adventures. A lot of words can be written about these, and it is not a simple urban novel about spiritual cultivation at all. Who wouldn't love such a rich novel?