Legend Museum

There is too much text in the fighting plot. There are 200,000 words describing fighting out of more than 300,000 words. This is not how the text is written.

Forget it, the devil will ignore you. If the devil doesn't deal with it for a few days, he will apply for another application.

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When I read Chapter 25, I realized that the author doesn't know how to count. If one thousandth of two billion people are gifted, that's 2 million people. If one thousandth of a thousand people become a mage, that's 2,000 people. One thousandth multiplied by one thousandth is one millionth. There's a difference of one digit from your calculation of one hundred thousandth. Please revise it~

Whether it is the personalities of each character or the rhythm of the plot development, they are all maintained at a level that makes me feel very comfortable. Even if I watch it all the way, I will not feel tired. This is rare. Today's books are either too fast-paced for beginners to read directly, and one event follows another, or even several events are intertwined together. The protagonist is as busy as a mad dog. He has just fought a villain, has to deal with an internal traitor, and has sex with several female characters. I almost vomited Maybe it's just my personal preference for slow-paced books. Even so, the pace of this book is not really slow and slow, and it is not like writing hundreds of thousands of words without seeing the protagonist's strength. Personally I really like it Finally, I would like to praise the writing style. Although it is not a particularly gorgeous or concise writing style, the flavor between the lines is really suitable for this Western fantasy background, and it is very comfortable to read. Recommended

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