Biography of Body-Breaking and Self-Cultivation

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The author has great skill in controlling his works, not to mention he is still a newcomer. We are blessed (the less the public recommends the more), but we must follow our own ideas and do not change because of the requirements of some readers. Finally, I wish this book a great success. By the way, finish voting for today's recommendations.

Qingqingzi chants, lingering in my heart. Your figure lingers deeply in my heart. I am grateful for your support, grateful for your messages, and grateful for the precious insights you give me every time. Before dawn, the morning mist fills the eyes with longing, but it will always disperse, just like your works and your character, one day the clouds will clear and the moon will shine!

Don't pay too much attention to the details | This book is like a bad perfume... The language is gorgeous and the descriptions are very sufficient, but these express some small things... It's like "Buying Cigarettes (Cologne Edition)", using gorgeous language to describe a joke...

The story is very twists and turns, quite touching, overall it's good.

From turning around as a loser to accidentally saving Cang Xue, and then missing "Leng Yue" in Wanjian Sect. It can be seen that Feng Zui's writing style is becoming more and more sophisticated. The writing of characters and battle scenes are both commendable. In terms of overall plot development, there isn't much to suggest. According to the current development of the story, it is still relatively compact. After all, this is the author's first book, so it is good to continue writing it according to the current progress. So next, it's time to make some suggestions. After all, I am not the kind of person who likes to flatter others when I write book reviews. I mainly hope that Feng Zui's books will get better and better. First of all, from the beginning of the article, it is not until Chapter 9 that the protagonist completes his comeback. In other words, the foreshadowing for the protagonist in the early stage was too long and seemed too slow. A good novel, whether it has a turning point or a shocking point at the beginning, is critical to attracting readers. Originally, the protagonist's transformation into a useless person was a turning point in itself, and it was not arranged until the ninth chapter. If it takes so long, readers may not be able to wait. A common mistake for newcomers is to make the beginning very literary and add whatever they think is good to the beginning. In fact, the beginning should be written more compactly. Generally speaking, the turnaround should be completed in three chapters, especially for Red Book and The Great God. Basically, the turning point has already occurred at the end of the first chapter. Secondly, when dealing with Cang Xue's emotional scene, the beginning was written a little too early, and the rejection was blunt, which made the plot seem blunt. But with the recent plot, it is recommended not to focus too much on emotional drama. It is obvious that the author is still too good at this aspect. The main focus should be on the upgrading of the protagonist. Recently, the protagonist's situation has suddenly become smoother, and the pressure and tension of upgrading seem to have been lost. In future plots, we should try to prepare for the next stage of the protagonist's crazy upgrade. Of course, the above are just suggestions.

I read it every day, these two words are beautiful. Although it was a bit slow in the early days, the writing got better and better later on. And it seems that the setting is very large, and the plot is slowly unfolding, but there is a little bit of foreshadowing. Anyway, it is good to watch... The emotional description is very detailed and feels 🤭🤭🤭🤭