Immortal King Who Guards the Realm
护界仙王
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.9M Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 12y ago
- English
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Synopsis
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1.1kChapters
16.5kRecommendations
10.1kFans
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[Comment] After reading 300 chapters and seeing the author's reflections, I'd like to offer some suggestions.
Having read 300 chapters and seen the author's reflections, I'd like to offer some suggestions. This book is quite similar to *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*, whether in its outline, cultivation process, or fortuitous encounters (perhaps the author felt they had spent a lot of time crafting the outline and various adventures, resulting in a work that is completely different from…
Actually, there was a loophole in the early stages. The Qingquan Sect had a total of over a thousand disciples, but only 32 were at the Foundation Establishment stage, while there were eight at the Golden Core stage and three at the Nascent Soul stage. Isn't that amazing?
[Comment] Some thoughts
As a bookworm with over a decade of reading experience, I'd like to share some thoughts on the work. The author's writing was quite poor at the beginning, but it's been improving. I've read over 300 chapters now, which is pretty good. However, the author is probably male; the romantic subplots feel too forced, and the inexplicable attraction to female readers is baffling.
[Review] The plot is decent, but the fight scenes need improvement.
First of all, congratulations on the book's completion! I've also reached the VIP chapters. Overall, the plot and world-building are quite good, but there are still some shortcomings. I hope the author can gradually improve them. 1. The protagonist has many adventures and has acquired many treasures. At first, they were said to be trump cards, but they never played their due role later on.
The author writes well, but I suggest writing less about faction wars/themes.
The author is talented, but all three books revolve around faction wars, which weakens the protagonist's individual strength and diminishes the thrill of web novels. I always skip around when I read about these faction wars.
Author, how is your child? I read about your child's illness in another novel. How is he now?
This is my first novel. Although there are a few minor flaws in the fox part, it's still quite good. Keep up the good work, author!
The author's persistence in writing this far is truly admirable. Great authors are always few and far between; even the male protagonists of fantasy novels start their cultivation journey as ordinary people. But the author, like the protagonist, possesses remarkable resilience and perseverance—perhaps it's a passion for the craft! I'm rooting for you!
The writing is really bad, wordy, and tries too hard to be sentimental.
[Comment] Let's keep going and encourage each other!
Brother Canyon, I've watched you slowly progress from the beginning to now. Back then, many people started writing books at the same time, but now it seems that only you have persisted in writing until now. We keep calling ourselves losers, but we're really just cowards. I'm quite envious and admire your brother, keep it up! I saw something different in you that I lack, and I will work hard and encourage you!