Immortal Path Sword Cultivator

I watched it twice and still didn't finish it. There are advantages but they are overshadowed by the disadvantages.

This bragging was a bit exaggerated. Lianqi and Jindan fought against each other and Jindan lost. Just find the realm and forget it.

But the beginning is not exciting enough, because this book spans more than two years. The author doesn't write too fast, and the first part is like a follow-up book like Mortal. I was looking for a book with a lot of words, so I came in to read it. After watching it, especially after arriving in the fairy world, it is very good. The author believes me, I have been reading books longer than you. After you finish this book, continue writing the second one, so that it can be as good as the second half of this book. You can become a god. Really, your book becomes more and more exciting the further you go.

It was good at first, but it lacked some description of the environment, and then it changed and turned into a pretentious article. High-level people are so pitiful, and they are killed by low-level people every day.

I don't understand these novels about mortals cultivating immortals. The protagonist's poor aptitude dislikes the Taoist monks and feels that it is a drag, which affects the protagonist's pursuit of Taoism. But many people don't mind accepting apprentices. Aren't apprentices a drag? Is it possible that you just accept a disciple and just ignore it? Not giving resources to apprentices? Don't preach to your disciples? If something happens to your apprentice, won't you come forward?

Ma Baoguo didn't even dare to write that a kid under ten years old would join a gang after surviving a famine.

After watching half of the show, I was refining qi and killing the foundation, the spirit beast calls its master the modern title of "Dad", and the brainless intelligent stallion descends into the harem of women every day, every day, and every day.

No one should dare to invade the earth. Although it is very weak, there are so many time-travelers who are either true immortals or saints. There are even many transcendent ones, and they are definitely the strongest followers in all worlds.

Becoming the rhythm of God,,,🤭🤭

If you don't know how to write about feelings, don't write. You're so speechless that you're rubbish. A second-level person touches the head of a third-level person? In front of other people's brothers, he is mentally ill, a complete scumbag

It is very similar to that one (I am Xianfan). Why do the protagonists have five spiritual roots and cannot be single spiritual roots? The waste stream seems to be endless.

Let me tell you, reading the first chapter, it feels like plagiarism from "The Story of a Mortal Cultivating Immortality"

To be honest, when you write about sword cultivating, you need to describe the advantages and methods of sword cultivating more. You also need to be careful with some sword cultivating fighting scenes, and the cross-level battles are a bit exaggerated. Alas, the ordinary swordsmanship skills in the early stage of sword cultivating can defeat those of the same level, and shouldn't the sword of sword cultivating be the most important? I won't talk about it. I won't talk about it. Your sword cultivating foundation is too sloppy.

This book is not for reading, but for complaining.

After only reading the first few chapters, I don't want to read anymore. I want to say that the protagonist's chance is too much, right? One level of opportunity, can you believe it?

It was written by a primary school student, novice! Rubbish

Why. I can't stand it, the relationship progresses too fast and it's inexplicable.

Another waste material series, really rubbish

The bead of the world is like a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, a second, an invincible is as lonely as snow, the protagonist has no weaknesses, shortcomings, no brains, and an invincible novel.

The protagonist is neither reborn nor time-traveled. You write it this way. How does it sound like writing about indigenous people?

It's been a rough day today. 😵 I finished writing a chapter in the afternoon and had a fever of over 38 degrees. I took some medicine and rested for a while, then continued writing in the evening. As a result, there was a gas leak nearby and an emergency evacuation occurred. I was scared to death and I just came back. Check out the updates in the next few days!

Ha ha! Recently I discovered a good book called "Spiritual Gourd"

You will know from the introduction that the Jie Pearl is the protagonist's biggest secret.

I watched it several years ago and I miss it 🙂

The intention of this book is very good, but it deliberately shows contradictions, such as greatly reducing the strength of the protagonist described in the book when attacking, and greatly increasing the strength of high-level enemies.

Give it up, I don't recommend it, the intention is not good, the framework structure is not good, the cultivation of immortality is not as good as that of ordinary people playing house, what kind of immortality is it?

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The writing idea is still good, but I can't see the overall situation well and can't grasp it. The treasures in the front are left by the God King of the God Realm, and the result is just like that. Moreover, it talks about how strong the people with great supernatural powers are, and divides them into top-level, ordinary and so on. Later, they classify the top-level ones, and they are everywhere, just like this realm. Realm, there are as many people as dogs in this realm, and many people can even catch up with the progress of the protagonist, and they can't catch up with people of the same generation as Taoist Taixuan. It's really outrageous. The same is true for the Immortal Realm chapter. The emperors are as numerous as dogs, everywhere, and they are a bunch of brainless ones who break through the limits. Then there is the God Realm chapter, where the God Kings are everywhere. Forget about the earth, there are as many peerless god-kings as dogs, especially that old turtle who is so strong, survived for so long, and stayed in the lower world for so long. He was very respectful to the god-king in the past, but he has such a big background in the later period. I am really speechless. There are also reincarnation emperors in the immortal world. No one can understand reincarnation. Ascension to the God Realm, or being unknown, is too ridiculous. In the end, there are so many peerless God Kings in an Immortal Realm, most of them are even younger generations, and so many people have become Gods. You know, there were only 9 Gods before. Once the Gods Mountain appeared, there were so many like dogs, and their combat power was completely destroyed.

Why are there so few comments? There are already three million words.

Suddenly I discovered that I had already voted for the year-end best. . . Now I'll give you 1 vote 😚