The Song Dynasty's Illegitimate Son

It was okay at the beginning, some flaws were not a big problem, and I could tolerate some poisonous points, but when I read Chapter 90, the moment an emperor who was kind to you was critically ill, you fell in love with his most beloved woman in grief and anger just because that woman wanted to have a child to save yourself? This is the first time you've met her. Are you a breeding pig? Farewell, I can tolerate three wives and four concubines. In ancient times, they were not as particular as in modern times. Besides, it is not incomprehensible to men's bad things. However, the male protagonist depicted in the author's writing is a rookie regardless of his mind, heart, mind, means, and courage. The number of women he has slept with from Chapter 1 to Chapter 90 is almost double digits, right? Where does the confidence come from? None of the people with the surname Yun from Qidian dare to be as outrageous as you, right? If you still want to get involved in politics with your little EQ and IQ, bring it down quickly. The Song Dynasty is indeed a weakling in the historical dynasty, but it depends on who you compare with. If your writing style is good, it will be recognized by people, and it will be lifelike and wonderful. A protagonist like you who is only for the top has been as low as death eight years ago, like pissing, you know? As an author, do you read your works carefully when you are writing? Don't you blush when you see it yourself? Or do you think that the users of Qidian are all teddy spirits with brains above sperm?

The advantages and disadvantages of the illegitimate children of the Song Dynasty are very obvious. The author is full of talent, excellent writing style and profound knowledge. But the author's flaws are also very obvious. But the biggest and biggest shortcoming is that the author's narrative is too fragmented. Countless readers can feel this. The author can say that this is his style, but if he wants to achieve good results, he must naturally follow the style that readers like. For example, when the ordnance was inspected, Yang Yi's soldiers happened to get the stolen goods. Yang Yi laughed, and the reader was about to read the rest, but it suddenly stopped and switched to the princess of Liao. Luo Liba talked about it for dozens of chapters. For example, in "If Life Is Only Like the First Meeting", the suspense of the Oiran Competition is still there. After Yang Yi finished writing this poem, just as the reader was about to read it, the author suddenly stopped, and it was not until dozens of chapters later that he learned that he had won the championship.

I watched the ending first because I wanted to see if I had the goddess in my heart at the end. Didn't you go to Song Dynasty without Qingzhao? I just said one thing and that was it. Dear brothers, I'm going to start reading a book. I'll flash it first.

This is the only book I call a divine book! ! The character descriptions are detailed and detailed, with flesh and blood. The language is light, elegant and vivid. The plots are intertwined and can be unfolded freely. The quotations from poems are also just right! ! Thumbs up! ! !

There are too many missing chapters, ugh

The Renaissance, the usurpation and constitutional monarchy of more than ten years ago came out.

It's like child's play! The wisdom of the ancients is like that of a child! Hahahaha, the plot is a bit like that

Are you posting so many fragments to defraud money?

This introduction makes me feel like I have to read this book. If I don't read it, I will scratch my head and rub it on the brick floor.

The over-description of the female characters (Li Qingzhao and Li Qingzhao) made me feel a little obscene, so I abandoned it.