The Road to Immortality

Goodbye, Yunhe, thank you for writing this book, which made me see the vastness and infinite possibilities of the universe.

The writing of this novel is really not good. I really can't stand it anymore.

This is the first time I have seen someone say that a disciple's loyalty to the sect is determined by what kind of skills he practices. Why can't Shui Ling Sect accept disciples with earth spirit roots? If there are very few earth spirit skills and only the earth spirit sect has them, I admit it, but there are earth spirit skills in a damn small market. Your setting is worse than the loserliu on the bad street.

The protagonist's IQ is too low, I really can't stand it

Nowadays, people who write novels still write such mentally retarded plots, what kind of cowards are they looking down on others? God, that's so retarded.

I advise you not to fall into the trap. A lot of settings in the book are so unreasonable

This is a very old book. I read the pirated version many years ago and it was pretty good. But now that I read it, there are indeed many logical illogicalities.

When Pigfoot encounters a high-level monster and wants to fight, his muscles all over his body tighten and contract! Or just grit your teeth! Ha

Just casually, an elder in the Tu Ling Sect has 50,000 spirit stones, and a mining disciple has thousands of spirit stones. The dignified inner disciples sacrificed their lives for a few spiritual stones. The elder personally reported that there was a serious shortage of spiritual stones. What kind of logic is this?

There are too many loopholes, and he still jumps in places where his life is in danger at any time, for fear that others will not know that he has a secret, and which of these villains has an online IQ? They are all fools who give resources to the protagonist!

When it comes to building the pig's foot foundation, it's completely useless. With an empty frame structure, the second-generation foundation-building disciples are even more of a messy bunch of punks! The more I look at it, the more I look like a girl coding! As long as a female cultivator comes out, there will be two scoundrels pursuing her!

Those whose strength and cultivation are not as good as pig's feet are worshiped and feared in all kinds of ways. Whenever a female says something to a pig's feet, those sperm on the brain will become jealous! The Nascent Soul is not born. Golden eggs occasionally pop up. The psychological quality of Nima Kindergarten has reached the peak of foundation building!

Such a small sect is still selective, based on the size of the territory and the number of people with spiritual roots. If it weren't for the author's protection, the sect would have been wiped out long ago.

The male protagonist is relatively incompetent, and some of the power system and weapon system settings are not very reasonable. It is no wonder that so many early chapters are not available.

The writing style is a bit immature. I recommend everyone to read "The Road to Seeking Immortals". The Road to Seeking Immortals is far better than this book.

The beginning is really abusive. This novel from a few years ago has so many poisonous points that I can't stand it at all.

I don't like the old man who carries me around. Although Goldfinger is a fairy house, there is an old man in the fairy house.

Master Yunhe, why don't you continue writing? This book has a very good idea. There are some plots that I haven't seen in other works. Although it has flaws, it can't hide the light. I have been reading books for 8 or 9 years. This is the only book I have read three times. I will read it again in the future. Although some people don't like it, it is impossible for everyone to like it.

Revisit the classics and support Han Li!

I'm also speechless. It's too complicated. I've seen a thousand, but there's no comprehensive main skill and weapon? Your family doesn't take drugs to cultivate immortality, but relies on drinking wine to replenish spiritual power? A wine written as invincible returns! The characters in it all seem to have no brains. They hate people and want to kill people for no reason.

A book that makes you want to read the protagonist's name

There are indeed many unreasonable things in this book, but the plot and scenes really make people have endless aftertaste after reading it. When will I continue writing?

As soon as I read the first chapter I knew this book was not going to work. Why, a sect is divided into five elements, each doing its own thing, but does not accept other spiritual roots when it encounters them? Is this still considered a sect?

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

To what realm does the protagonist rise to, the people he meets will immediately become the same as the protagonist. What's good to see

Recommended book: Mortals: Living in space seeking immortality

At the Nascent Soul stage, I still don't know the art of disguise. I just act openly and get discovered, and then I run away or fight. It's the same routine every time. There is no such thing as the art of disguise in this world.

I read a pirated book when I was in elementary school. Now I think about it and laugh a little. I saw all the bad reviews in the comment section. I had hardly read any books at that time, so I didn't have the ability to distinguish between good and bad books. I don't care what the book is like. I only know that this book made me fall in love with novels, fairy houses and farming.

I read the novel very early on, and I felt that although the writing style was relatively immature, it was already very good, and the world depicted was very ideal.

Why didn't the origin of the Immortal Mansion be explained at the end? Where did the blood spirit in the Mustard Seed Space come from? What happened to the corpses of the two ancient gods? What about orange clams? Is it useless to spend such a long time writing? What about the fraternal egg? There is also the inheritance of the spiritual rodent, what is its function, even if you delete the setting of the spiritual rodent, it will not affect the progress of the work. There are eighteen heavens in the setting, but even the first heaven is not clearly written. How the Emperor Tianyuan died was not explained clearly, and the writing was the same as in the history. Inexplicably, catastrophe has come, and a new world has emerged? Chicken!