Heroes of Might and Magic: The End of the Road

I thought I saw it wrong, but luckily there was a notice at the starting point. I don't know if it's time to start updating normally?

Actually, your writing is quite good. You don't need to deny yourself too much. The biggest reason is because you are not well-known. I don't think Dou Po Cang Qiao is good at all, but others are so popular. There are so many people writing books now. Your writing is good. Others can't find it, this is a dead certificate, some commentators' words are no longer human, they are crazy, they only dare to say unpleasant things on the Internet, life is like this, it is always full of difficulties, your most important thing is to persevere, although perseverance may not necessarily lead to success, but if you don't persevere you will definitely not succeed, and you must resolutely resist piracy, it must be certain. , You can lower the charges, but you must kill piracy.

Halfway through the book, I felt there were several problems. First, the title had nothing to do with it. The title had little to do with the content. The main plot was unclear. I had no idea what it was about. Second, the protagonist's sense of presence was too low. There were not many supporting roles in the middle period. Third, it was difficult to distinguish between reality and fantasy. In terms of time, reality flows slower than in the third world. The information people receive every day is limited. The protagonists often stay up late to play games and so on. It feels very fake, and the truth is only information. Explosion, fourth, the protagonist treats his subordinates as partners, gives them names, and trades troops without treating them as human beings. In addition, others in Novice Village still have Tier 2 and Tier 3 troops, and the protagonist is Tier 5 and Tier 6, and all the top super-tier people later are like cannon fodder, leaving no room for writing. There is a conflict between the company and the Snowflake Sword Master Guild, which shows that the protagonist no longer intervenes, and sells the troops to the company again, and he is also drunk. This book only has the background of Invincible Heroes, highlighting a multi-race and multi-unit military structure. It is not like a strategy game. There is no cooperation or confrontation. The game is all based on the imagination of both parties. Instead, it is like a turn-based game. You can win in one bold move. It is just like the protagonist leading his younger brother to play games.

I just want to know the reason for the divorce. My ex-wife is still working for that boss. I have come back and forth to see her several times. Because of this reason, I have not been able to read anymore. I feel so aggrieved.

The prologue of this book is really... I skipped ten lines at a glance and didn't finish it... I suggest the author read the online game Judgment. I think it is an eternal classic of Invincible Heroes. He does not write about the real world. Generally, who reads reality when reading Invincible Heroes? Those who write about Invincible Heroes also like to play with real-life interactions, such as the ashtray, and this early chapter of your book has fully exploited the weaknesses of the realistic plot. For example, if I read other Invincible Heroes novels, the picture in my mind will be colorful. In other words, the reality in your early stage is all black and white, bland and tasteless. This is not boring, this is wanting to sleep. I can see that the author wants to integrate the setting into the plot so that readers can understand the setting in the early stage. However, who can continue to read it? You might as well make a special setting list for readers to look up in the dictionary. In a word, I suggest the author delete the company and divorce in the previous chapter and directly enter the game. I came to read the game article, not to see you being slapped in the face, and you didn't slap me in the face, so I feel aggrieved.

The main plot is unclear, the front and back are confusing, the characterization is not exciting enough, and it is not grounded.

This is an underrated novel,

I think this book is very good, but some of the women were too damned to persuade me to leave. I read it several times, but I couldn't bear to read it.

In the previous one hundred chapters, I don't know why I described a confused protagonist. He was just a person lying on the ground eating and waiting to die. There is absolutely no desire to watch anymore.

There is no introduction to the attributes of game characters and monsters, and they are entangled in real life. The protagonist is too depressing, and readers have no sense of involvement at all. Invincible Heroes mainly focuses on unit magic and character attributes. This is the cool part. After reading Chapter 137, I just didn't see it. Also, there is no such feeling in collecting resources, accumulating troops and upgrading buildings. It's been more than a hundred chapters, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. I only know that the protagonist is playing a game, which seems to be quite powerful. The story is called Invincible Heroes, and few honest fans of Invincible Heroes can read it. I have read your book five or six times, and only today did I read more than 100 chapters. In the past, I didn't want to read it after reading more than 10 or 20 chapters. I don't know what happens next. I posted this after seeing the author wanted readers to comment at the end of each chapter. After I finished writing it, I read it and felt that I was criticizing the author. If the author feels uncomfortable, delete it! I still wish the author better and better as he writes more.