Reborn: The Road to Immortality

To be honest, I think there are some logical issues with the story. The female protagonist, only at the Qi Refining stage, can earn so much money selling magical artifacts, which is quite satisfying. Also, doesn't artifact refining require a certain level of cultivation? Doesn't it require a lot of materials? The levels of the magical artifacts aren't clearly stated.

Her stepmother wanted to kill her. Then her adoptive father arrived but failed. The stepmother pretended to apologize, and the protagonist, conflicted about not forgiving her stepmother, felt she was in the wrong and forgave her. This thought process is really hard for me to follow.

Wasn't it the woman who left a ring in the first chapter?

Many details are illogical, yet upon closer examination, they're not entirely unacceptable, just unsettlingly forced. For example, before even having her spiritual root tested, and after only a brief encounter with a brat from a powerful family, the female lead is already seen as a rival by this prodigy, the reason given being—"Judging by her aura!"

I thought the ring was a storage ring? Grandma said they came from a family of cultivators, so they should have some common sense, right? The swaddling clothes must have been something special too. Why not give it to her...?

Doing menial tasks as a rogue cultivator is low-paying and high-risk. I don't know what she's doing it for. Then she helps strangers craft swords, only earning a mid-grade spirit stone in return. She's not exactly wealthy; it's truly baffling that she does this.

It looks really good. 🤭

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