A Joyful Journey to Immortality

Have you ever seen the movie Orphans? Suddenly, I felt that the heroine, with the body of a 5-year-old child and the mind of an adult, had the idea of ​​​​soying up the adult senior brother. It was so disgusting! It's really disgusting!

The writing is quite good, but the heroine has never thought about bringing her family to live in Zongmenfang City, or working hard to practice and go home to see her parents and brothers as soon as possible. It feels like the heroine in these chapters just wants to eat.

Isn't it the world of immortality? Cultivation of immortality should be done first! Why is it written directly as the Immortal World? Since it is written about the Immortal World, the cultivation should be Immortal Qi instead of Spiritual Qi, right? Of course, maybe you want to arrange it this way.

A lot of people have died in these chapters recently. Is this really a good thing for the author?

The female protagonist wastes such good qualifications by not practicing hard, and she is tired of refining elixirs and asks the male protagonist to practice double cultivation. 😅😅🤔🤔

Why can't you bring your family together to cultivate immortality? 555 The previous article makes me feel so uncomfortable when I'm separated. I'm only five years old.

Such a cheerful article. I enjoy reading it sometimes. I like it!

They are all short-sighted, unlike those who cultivate immortality.

I have read a lot of articles on cultivating immortals, and I am a little tired of the traditional cultivation of immortals. The setting of this article is directly in the immortal world, and it is not a setting of Qi training and foundation building, and the writing at the beginning is relatively simple and joyful. The heroine went home many times in the middle, which made me almost unreadable. I threw it away for a long time, and then picked it up and read it again. It got better after the seventy or eighty chapter. The author's imagination is clear and his writing is fluent. It often makes people laugh when I read it. I highly recommend it to everyone. Don't be affected by some comments. The female protagonist has a very good personality. She was a top student in her previous life and was smart. She has a male protagonist, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very warm and unconventional. It's just that some of the treatment of people who make mistakes is rather blunt. The ending is a bit rushed too

It's quite interesting, the first part is a little dull, but the second half is very well written! I would like to give you a reward to encourage you. It is not easy to write a story about a female protagonist cultivating immortality!