Cultivation Shop

After reading Chapter 60, the revised preface and follow-up between the chapters of this book have become a mess. A good book has been ruined by a bunch of editors from Qidian. Abandon books.

I hope that fantasy novels will rarely describe the relationship between men and women, and even if they do write about it, they will just pass it by. I just like to read books written by Er Gen, and there aren't many descriptions of this kind.

When I saw Chapter 24, the author's book title was Cultivation Shop, Chapter 24 I ran to work as an alchemist for another shop. After looking at the table of contents at the back, there was no chapter opening a store for one or two hundred chapters, but there was a bloody fight all the way, which was completely inconsistent with the title of the book. He said he was decisive in killing but let go of the woman who ordered others to kill him. Just because he was violent and violent for no reason, he molested that woman. ... Before I can speak, I saw that the title of the book is all about themes that I like, and the writing is not bad. Unfortunately, the plot setting is too poisonous. . . It's hard to calm down, what a pity!

When I saw Chapter 81, I was thinking about writing one less paragraph in this book. Why not write about Ye Changsheng being brutally raped by Qin Luoshuang in Wuding Palace? Why? 🤔🤔

This was the first online novel I read, and it was also the first novel I finished reading. At that time, I just entered junior high school and lived on campus, so I would go home and read it on my computer every weekend, saving more than a dozen chapters a week. I am now in my fourth year of college graduation. This novel is White Moonlight to me. I have even replayed the plot countless times as various characters in my mind. The fanfics I imagine in my mind are no less than the Zhetian fanfics I have read. Now that my job is stable, I watched it again and watched the original version for the first time.

Orthodox cultivation style, pretty good.

I read this a long time ago, and I thought it was pretty good at the time, but I don't know what the book has been changed to at Qidian. I have a little understanding of some people's shortcomings, and here I will share my personal feelings about some of them. First of all, killing people across realms is very common no matter it is fantasy or fantasy, Eastern or Western. There are very few novels in mythological settings where realms are almost absolute, and I don't remember any that cross realms too far. It's a bit hard to accept the practice of practicing qi, sacrificing all oneself and then killing people. Secondly, if you can live to be 300 years old by practicing Qi, and you can't fly by building a foundation, these things are just settings. You can't use the settings of other novels to complain about this. Unless this setting slaps yourself in the face or conflicts with the plot, otherwise it cannot be considered a drawback. If this is a drawback, then cultivating immortality itself will become the biggest drawback. Finally, in terms of emotional scenes, my personal memory is about the love between men and women. I only remember the protagonist and his two weapon spirits, and then there is Kunpeng and another female demon. I personally don't remember much else, and about this game I think the descriptions of Yi'er are very ordinary, and it's hard to even describe the relationship between men and women. On the contrary, the lack of descriptions of Ergen is absolutely outrageous. Originally, the setting of cultivating immortals generally involves the evolution of life levels and so on. After evolution, human emotions are also evolved. So how advanced are the humans in this setting? This is a drawback in itself, but if it is not there, no one will read it. It cannot be written as a science fiction high-dimensional world. So it's best to control the degree to make people want to watch it. In this book, I personally feel that the emotional drama is not too much (I don't know where it is from now) As for the protagonist's development route, killing people and still opening a shop there, I think even if the beholder has a different opinion, I personally think it's okay, but some people may not be able to stand it.

The most poisonous point in this book: Pig's feet are the Holy Mother Bitch. If others want to kill him, he will be let go after winning the battle. A casual cultivator came to the store to rob him, and after winning the fight, he let him go, and even gave him his things back. His liver hurt when he saw it. Is he such a holy bitch?

I used to like a book very much and read it twice.

People there often practice Qi to defeat the Yuanying, and they can still win by building foundations against Yuanying. I asked them if Yuanying doesn't want to lose face. "Some people may say that Qi training and foundation building have an extraordinary origin. No matter how powerful the previous life is, no matter how powerful the techniques are, can the Yuanying's defense be broken once it is activated? How much spiritual power does one have to use a spell to build a Qi to build a foundation?"

There be no rules in the world of immortality. You can kill people if you want to in the city. If you notice, the protagonist is basically either killed or killed directly in the town of cultivating immortals. No one stops him, there are no rules, and the cultivating sects don't do anything to stop him. Secondly, the problem of cultivating immortality in this novel is not big. Many times, Qi training kills golden elixirs, foundation building kills golden elixirs, and Yuanying is like killing dogs. Realm only serves lifespan. Look at that Xie Feiyan who is obviously just trying to refine his Qi and kill the golden elixir. The ordinary mortal flow is not as powerful as crossing the realm. This novel is more like a traditional immortal novel, that is, it has the halo of the protagonist, several main supporting characters also have the aura of supporting characters, and the others are all side players, and they will die if they deserve it.

I think this novel is a classic. I read it in junior high school.

It's pretty good, but why do you want to lick it🐶? I was happy and happy, but I insist on doing dog licking. I'm convinced.

Just four words in the table of contents are enough, but I feel disgusted by the way you ramble on.

I was embarrassed just looking at the catalog.

I read this novel a long time ago, and it was a pirated version. It can be regarded as my introduction to the genre of cultivation novels. The overall plot, setting, etc., I think are okay and remarkable. However, the emotional scenes have some people's faults. I felt stomachache when I read it. I don't care about the rhythm in the later period. I just felt a little anxious. Many people couldn't deal with the protagonist, one wave after another. As for the ending, it was okay.

This book can be considered a third-rate book. It is not rigorous at all. A person who traveled through time was almost fooled around by several women. If it were not for pig feet, he would have died hundreds of times. It is too bad to say that he is a mortal. He is not as smart as Han Paopao. Han Paopao is still a native.

Five-color divine light, I like it very much. I remembered it and signed it.

The writing is not good, the subject matter is good, the idea is good, but the writing style is a bit poor.

The name Changsheng is recognized as the best among immortals.

After reading the introduction, you know you don't need to read this book.

Isn't it a wasteto charge for this kind of book

Chapters 27 to 30 are so poisonous that I slipped away.

I don't want to read it anymore, the writing is so messed up, and the various settings are not taken care of at all.

Speechless, Kong Xuan had the innate energy of the five elements and was able to practice the five-color divine light. You can do it with just one technique? I'm really sorry, I can't understand