Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Doing Handyman Work

I read that most of the reviews are positive, but I really feel that this novel has too much literary material. It feels like the protagonist can easily recite a poem. It is a good thing that the author's writing style is good, but I don't think it is necessary to use the writing style specifically in these places when writing a novel. Too much content makes the novel unsmooth to read. And the most important thing is that the protagonist first appears, he is only fifteen years old, and he can quote classics at his fingertips. The protagonist also has to work, so does he spend so much time reading? It's not like our lady has a special teacher. Even if she reads the book a hundred times and realizes that the protagonist is naturally smart, she still hasn't gotten to the point where she excels in homework and exams, let alone composes impromptu poems at every turn... Also, the plot is a bit slow, and the world of immortality is also written as a bit utopian... The setting at the beginning is not very reasonable... Forget it, let's stop here, I give up.

Compared to the previous two works, this one is really weird. First of all, whether it is the writing style, narrative, or character design, there is always a sense of "nondescript", an inappropriate metaphor, just like the mixture of "Red Mansions", "Journey to the West" and "Water Margin". Han Han made a joke in "Three Gates", which is called "Women at night are running wildly". The three images of "night", "woman" and "running wildly", no matter how weird they look together, are really "unknown". What's more, the indiscriminate indoctrination of all members (including the protagonist) and the forcible intrusion of various private goods (such as poems) completely deviate from the narrative logic of popular literary creation. In addition, in terms of world view and theme, the author seems to be trying his best to create a sense of metaphysical high-level, but it also seems artificial and broken, just like the narrative of the Virgin Mary who saves the world while rolling in bed from the perspective of an American movie. I can't help but wonder, is this still the experienced writer from before? It's really too much of a contrast. It's hard to say it all, it's hard to say it...

I read the author's first book. Judging from the early performance, there is no doubt that there is a lot of progress. The first book has many flaws and hidden cheats in the early stage. This book uses the heroine to be very smart, and to be appreciated for living to death to improve the early combat effectiveness. The logic is smooth. I see some people have been complaining about the kindness of the heroine. On the contrary, I like this kind-hearted heroine. Of course, the writing is good. So far, the heroine's performance is okay. I want to read a lot of fairy tales with protagonists who only care about themselves. In the final analysis, it is difficult to write a protagonist who cares about the common people. But in ancient times, people's yearning for gods was not to expect gods to do things that mortals can't do and to save mortals. What's wrong with a kind-hearted protagonist? Good luck to the author.

The writing is very good. I like the zoo genre at the end, but I feel that the protagonist is so miserable. Then I hope that the next part will be the bloodbath of Taixuanzong (what), and the writing at the end actually has a hint of lesbian hatred 😏

The author wrote it very carefully, but it didn't quite fit my taste. Maybe I have a low sense of morality. I have a bottom line but not much. I just want to kill people and create opportunities. Maybe Meng Wan is my cup of tea! My belief is: Anyone who stands in my way will be killed! Fighting with people, fighting with the sky, blood is my favorite romance! But unfortunately, the so-called "small talent and small kindness" in "Dream of Red Mansions" seems to be the mainstream of female videos, while "Emperor Wu" is just an abandoned historical legend. I appreciate the cunning and cunning Liu Bang, I admire Li Shimin who bloodied the Xuanwu Sect, and I am even more fascinated by Zhu Yuanzhang who opened up a bowl of territory. But why can't female fans produce a Wu Mei Niang? Why... In the world of cultivating immortals where the jungle prevails, female fans still can't escape from the ethical labels and moral shackles? ? ? Lamentable: There are all classic "Han Lao Mo" in the Internet literature world, but none of them are female! ! !

The writing is very good. I have been reading novels for such a long time. I hate the novels that are all over the place with no brain upgrades and no sense of morality. However, they are everywhere. People who don't like to read them should avoid it. The articles you want are all over the street. Please be conscious.

I hope it will be a full-length novel without cp. 🙂

There are several points that need to be explained about this book 1. This article is purely fictitious and you cannot practice according to the content in the book 2. The author wants to try his best to describe a real Taoist world. There may be places where the skills have not been reached, or where opinions differ. Wang Haihan. 3. In reality, Taoism is divided into Qian Tao and Kun Tao. They call each other brothers, and the elders call them master, uncle, and uncle. There is no such term as sister, sister, or aunt. (The titles of senior sisters will be used in the novel to allow everyone to read better) 4. One chapter will be updated every day, and two chapters will be added every day after it is put on the shelves These will be the first, and I will add more when I think of it later.

Well, I like to read non-CP articles, so I specifically researched the non-CP traffic of female channels, um, I looked at the non-CP articles. Then comparing the male channels, I found that the traffic of male channels is a lot, and the number of people is larger. The second work in the male channel novel list seems to have 13 million book friend images and has been published in movies and TV shows, and may also be followed by animations. I especially hope that this non-CP theme can become popular or something like that. I don't know why, but I really hate having male protagonists, or maybe I don't know if I hate men or something. Apologize! I think pursuing a career is more important than pure love or love. Well, so it means that there is less traffic for female channels. After all, the starting point is that there are relatively few female users in the mecca of male channels. You can delete it yourself if it touches the mine, and I hope this novel becomes popular.

The tenacious Jiang Youling

It is a rare female channel with a heroine who is serious about cultivating immortals without CP. Nowadays, Shuangwen Golden Finger is very popular, but few people watch this kind of returning to nature and cultivating immortals. The writing is excellent, and the plot is not brainless so far. I laughed when I criticized the heroine. If I can think of the plot of Wukong seeking enlightenment under the seat of the Bodhi Patriarch, these people will go up and criticize Brother Monkey. They may only think of black and white in their minds, and have no idea what the "character" in the story is, and they have no idea of ​​the protagonist's experience and state of mind. When they read novels, they only think of themselves, and whether they are happy or not is the criterion for judging whether the story is good or bad. The author should not be affected by the messy voices, especially in the previous section. The author's excellent writing skills can be felt by quoting scriptures and talking about it. Especially when arguing with Master Hong, only those who have extraordinary life experiences can write such a plot. I hope the author will not forget his original intention and write this book. I will keep pursuing it.

The female channel's "Orthodox Cultivation of Immortality" is the most interesting one. The writing is beautiful and focuses on the heroine's character. The shortcoming is that the plot is flat and has no ups and downs. All the fairy tales I have read lack the grandeur and grandeur of the immortal world of Dao Zheng Zheng and Xuan Hun Daozhang. The heroine's character and plot are compact at the moment. If the world can be expanded later and written into a long novel, it will definitely become a fairy grass. I hope the author can work hard!

The author doesn't want to finish it so quickly this time. I hope that like Xu Chunniang, he won't be too hasty 😍

To be honest, this cheap master is really not a good thing. Although he has taught the heroine how to use talismans for several months, his eldest disciple picked up female disciples, and several of his female disciples were brutally attacked. He didn't care at all, and he did not protect his own disciples. Look at how another female foundation-building monk protected her female disciples. She severely injured the scumbag who harassed her female disciples, and she never dared to harass her disciples again for the rest of her life! This is a good master! The benefits this cheap master brings to the heroine are not worth the disadvantages. Although the heroine has a chance in southern Xinjiang later, it is only because of the heroine's hard work and there is no end to the road. It has nothing to do with this cheap master! You must kill that scumbag when you go back!

I really like the beginning of the chapter when the heroine recites a poem or two from time to time, especially a poem she wrote when she was crossing the horizontal rope, which particularly reflects the changes in the heroine's state of mind after starting from a handyman and starting to practice Taoism. This is also part of the power of the writing. The author doesn't need to care too much about some people's comments. I won't write poems and focus on the plot later, but I feel that it is not interesting to begin with. However, from the side, it can also be seen that the heroine's mood is dusty in the cage. Breaking and then standing, it would be great if there could be such a turning point in the mood later. The Great Way is also very good, but the starting point of the heroine's talent is too high to encounter any setbacks, and it is not possible to write about such a turning point in the state of mind.

I stayed up all night to finish it... I feel that the heroine is 40% talent and 60% hard work, but in the later part of the plot, when the heroine is targeted, it is very heart-wrenching. It is difficult to build the foundation and become a saint physically. Although she can do soul cultivation, it is very sad to watch. I have watched the heroine grow up all the way. Alas, I really want to know how Master Hong will react? Anger? Disappointment? Still believe it? But the heroine seems to be a bit of a lily behind, hahaha. The heroine is possessed by demons but her heart is kind. I don't deny that Tai Xuanzong is disgusting, but there are also good people in it. At least the heroine's second chance is Master Hong!

I said how the styles are so similar, it's so beautiful, the author's writing style is so strong, it's so good

I read it a few days ago, but I couldn't stand it after reading the beginning. I felt bored as if I were reading an ancient novel, but then I saw it climbed to the top of the Qingyun list. I was really curious about how interesting a novel like this could be. I was hooked after three chapters and read the latest chapter directly. If reading other immortality novels is to build a world based on a story, this world is virtual and empty. But reading this novel is like putting a protagonist in a world and then pointing the camera at her. The world view is so solid and the details make people watch it again and again. This kind of writing technique only makes people feel that it is the antonym of hydrology in the field of online literature. It feels like a pile of materials. I don't know how much time the author spent on writing each chapter.

The writing is very good. Congratulations on being on the homepage. Why are so few people viewing it?😰

The current chapters are well written, there are no vulgar scenes, and the protagonist's changes in mood and cultivation are not like a running account. There are some reasonable depictions. I recommend it! It's just that it's still relatively short, so I look forward to the author's updates!

It's really good-looking. Anyway, I like it very much. I feel really sad when I see the female lead being abolished. I hope she can become more powerful in the future. Be happy.

Coming, coming! Finally a new pit has been opened, let's spread flowers!

Every time Mystery finally achieves some small success, a new behemoth appears in front of me. Mystery, I feel sorry for you 😭😭😭

The right way or the evil way?

How can the author be so great? I saved two chapters a day and read them with gusto. Xixi, come on! I want to see more

Didn't it say that sword energy sweeps across the Kyushu? I've read more than two hundred chapters, and I haven't seen the heroine use a sword. She is always using knives or fighting hand-to-hand.

Subscribe to the saved chapters first, and then watch them together later, hehe!

It looks good, support the author!

The rats, bees and dead souls in front have been in the gourd for a long time. Do you still remember them? 😰😰😰

I saved dozens of chapters and read them all in one go. It was so cool! I like the author's writing style! Will continue to support!