Huashan Fairy Gate

The author's setting is fresh and interesting even now. For example, Sword Intent, such as the Ten Iron Rules.

After reading the Book of Endo, the Huashan Immortal Gate is always like an empty mountain orchid, which makes people linger. I watched it for the first time without spending any money, and now I have replenished my subscription. Watched it several times.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I won't go into it because the sentences don't make sense. It introduces the four levels of swordsmanship. But what I don't understand is that the author said that the protagonist has reached the level of sword intention, but when describing it, he still stays at the level of sword moves. Why Shura can only use half a move? Is this sword intention? Don't lie to me. Sword intention is literally The important thing is, what is meaning? Is it an ordinary sword move, a half-move, a random move, is sword intention? No, meaning, from the meaning of the word itself, we can know that it is spiritual. Sword skills have gods and souls, which is sword intention. Just like people, those without consciousness are vegetative, and those with consciousness are normal people. If I were to write it, I would probably write like this: "This Shura only felt that there were layers of clouds coming inexplicably around him, and it seemed like a strong wind was roaring. All kinds of real and illusory feelings caused great mental oppression to him. In addition, Lu Yuan was very skilled in swordsmanship and cultivation. Every time Luo Mi can only use half a move, he has to change his move, and he is so sad that he vomits blood..." That's probably it. I feel that the author still needs to practice a lot. The writing style is not required to be beautiful. The main thing is that the settings you set must be basically consistent with the description.

I have read dozens of chapters for now, and the characters are clearly drawn. The outline and concept of the book can be regarded as a refreshing trend in online novels, but the writing style does not match it at all. This is not a criticism, but a pity. "Lazy boy" is a definite noun that the author loves to use. At its peak, he used it three times in a short paragraph of 36 words. As for "lazy" and "lazy", it is even more annoying. Although the vocabulary of online article authors is generally not high, the large number of overlapping chapters and repeated sentences is still disappointing, and the problem of typos is also quite prominent. Although the author has been emphasizing that the pace of the book is slow, on closer inspection, the proportion is just unbalanced. Four or five chapters are used to describe the character and background of the protagonist, and less than one chapter of text is used to make the protagonist "achieve enlightenment in one fell swoop." Moreover, the strength is gained through hard work. Such efforts make people feel even more disdainful than Qi Yu Liu. The large number of "sword fighting" clips that the author is proud of and that I expected did not actually exist. Basically, the protagonist defeated the enemy with one move or used his powerful strength to tease the enemy, but it did not reflect the arrogant style of a person with outstanding strength. It seems that many years ago, online novels were experiencing the pain of transitioning from fierce fighting to one-punch invincibility. Overall, although it is a good book, it makes people feel uncomfortable while reading it, and it really feels like a useless book. If you have read commercial novels with a mature process for a long time, reviewing this work will make you feel like tasting tea, but you need to endure the tea leaves and tea foam that often appear in it. PS. My personal opinion is that I have read dozens of chapters and have not read the later stories.

As for the author, I like his three books the most, Black Wind Old Demon, Tomb of Witches, and this Huashan Immortal Sect, which reveals my age 😌

I read this book in my second year of high school. I didn't really read many novels at that time, so I read it right away. I still remember the plot. I read it again later. To be honest, I couldn't stand it after reading it for so many years. However, at that time, this book gave me a swordsman with invincible talent!

I read a novel in the fifth grade of elementary school. I didn't understand anything at that time, and I read it on an old man's computer reader. I suddenly remembered it again today. It has been at least ten years, and I am working now. I don't know what the author is doing now, and I suddenly wanted to find it hahaha

This was the first online novel I read. I thought it was very exciting at the time and it left a deep impression in my memory.

I read it in elementary school and junior high school, and suddenly I remembered this book 😰

The front is okay, but the back is just a show-off, just one after another. Even the routines and methods have the same pattern. They all suddenly have insights in major competitions or competitions and start to think about life. When the game is almost over, it starts to explode. Once or twice is okay, but if it happens like this every time, it makes people want to vomit...

Taoist friends who can read Chapter 80 of this book are mentally determined and will surely attain the Great Way.

The book is an old one from many years ago, and I can see that it has a sense of the times. Some Internet terms that were very popular at that time, such as tears, tragedy, etc., Are used a lot.

I actually finished reading this book ten years ago😰

I remember this book was quite good. Why did the author write so many bad chapters?

I miss the first novel I read with an e-reader.

I read a novel before, which didn't have much pretentiousness and gave me a sense of clarity, tranquility and melancholy.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the writing is not very good.

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I read this book when I was in primary school. The first thing I did when I came home from boarding school on weekends was to catch up on the book. I miss it so much. It has been three years since I graduated from college and started working.

This book was the first one I read. I miss it. I read it very well back then, but I have almost forgotten it now 😢

I watched it in middle and high school at that time, so many years have passed.

The author likes to collect various settings and routines. The downside is that there are too many to digest with an interesting story.

I feel like I'm a little silly, I can see down the mountain

I read this book when I was in middle school, and I just remember that I got a big win towards the end, and one battle lasted for a week.

The more I read, the more outrageous it became. Halfway through I only looked at the table of contents.