Immortal Forging

It's still a mortal stream at first, so you plan to be high-profile as soon as it goes on the shelves? After leaving, Xianxia only loves mortals, and Xuanhuan only looks at me, Chen Dong.

The plot, ideas, and ideas are all okay, but the writing and dialogue are terrible, very awkward, not smooth at all, not coherent at all, dry, and not mellow at all. You can tell he's a newbie at a glance.

😵Better Black Widow

Does your flying sword super control have no distance and can always follow people? , A level 4 Qi practitioner, can you tell the state of other immortal cultivators at a glance? I couldn't stand it after watching the previous ones.

When I was in the first grade of junior high school, I read an e-book for the first time. The first novel I read on MP5 was, oh, I miss you so much. I still remember many plots of this novel. I have been writing online for more than ten years, and I read novels for more than ten hours a day.

Talking about the wheel. One sentence. Can coo 10 times.

I have to say that you know how to use weapons, and you still exchange materials for dressings.

I saw it many years ago, and I remember a more outstanding monk named Yi Nengjing.

Of course it's all this, of course that, it's heart-wrenching to watch.

Hahahaha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Also, there is a second-level Qi training stage man who can spit out flying swords. If you kill him, will you forget about flying swords? Looking for a place to practice? It's not the right place for you to kill people. Why are you running into the mountains? The protagonist has amnesia

I can't stand it anymore. There are comments from the author at the end of each chapter. I'm not used to it, so I'll withdraw it.

I love martial arts and will fully support martial arts as long as it is martial arts!

Real water, annoying to death, can't stand it anymore

It's so uncomfortable to read. I really can't stand it anymore. The article has no ups and downs, the narrative is straightforward, and the logic is not that complete.

Will no one recognize the fish intestine sword when I take it out?

I have been a book fan for more than thirty years and have read The Mortal's Journey to Immortality three times. Hey, what does this book say? I just can't continue reading. It's already fifty chapters. Let's leave.

Is it so easy to set up an immortal array? Are you from the cultivating sect? Is it okay to write a book and go through your brain? Full of loopholes

Can you please stop writing how to say it all the time? This sentence is very annoying.