Immortal Forging

The plot, ideas, and ideas are all okay, but the writing and dialogue are terrible, very awkward, not smooth at all, not coherent at all, dry, and not mellow at all. You can tell he's a newbie at a glance.

It's still a mortal stream at first, so you plan to be high-profile as soon as it goes on the shelves? After leaving, Xianxia only loves mortals, and Xuanhuan only looks at me, Chen Dong.

😵Better Black Widow

I saw it many years ago, and I remember a more outstanding monk named Yi Nengjing.

When I was in the first grade of junior high school, I read an e-book for the first time. The first novel I read on MP5 was, oh, I miss you so much. I still remember many plots of this novel. I have been writing online for more than ten years, and I read novels for more than ten hours a day.

Talking about the wheel. One sentence. Can coo 10 times.

Of course it's all this, of course that, it's heart-wrenching to watch.

Does your flying sword super control have no distance and can always follow people? , A level 4 Qi practitioner, can you tell the state of other immortal cultivators at a glance? I couldn't stand it after watching the previous ones.

I have to say that you know how to use weapons, and you still exchange materials for dressings.

I love martial arts and will fully support martial arts as long as it is martial arts!