Kakashi's Era

Don't scold me, it's not easy to write so many words with such poor writing. Author.

After reading the first chapter, I was shocked. . Such a bad first chapter is very rare. . Author, look down. . 1. Bad attitude. The basic writing and sentence fragmentation are not up to standard, and there are a lot of typos. Author, didn't you even check the first chapter? 2. The characters are infantilized. . For example, when Kakashi saw Minato, his first reaction was to blurt out and ask, instead of silently observing whether he was under a genjutsu. Of course, the author's description is possible, but it makes people feel that Kakashi's reaction is not that of a senior jounin. 3. The inexplicable narration in brackets, author, are you showing off your presence? Didn't you realize that this kind of narration is very annoying and ruins the atmosphere? 4. When did White Fang become famous for his endless chakra and five elements chakra? Isn't this way of obtaining blood inheritance a bit too magical? . 5. When all your wishes come true, there must be a limit, right? If you want to enhance chakra, you can enhance it. If you want a sword, you can have a blood sword. Is this the Great Wishing Technique? 6. The so-called practice of swordsmanship alarmed the people of Konoha. Not to mention, the Hatake clan is famous for assassinations, how can a sword practice make such a big splash? And what the villagers said, is it funny to do that? Author, do you think this is funny? I can't even read the next chapter. . So many poisonous points. .

What a trap! Lin was not dead, so how could Obito attack Konoha? And in the end, Rin died, killed by the Nine-Tailed Hand 5 released by Obito. Would Obito do this to Rin? Don't be ridiculous, Lin is Obito's favorite person, she is not dead, there is no way Obito will turn black

Because this book is too confusing and the changes are too big, the author decided to reopen the book and try his best to write a high-quality Kakashi fan novel to show to everyone. After subscribing and clicking to collect, the opinions of readers, and the author carefully reading the entire novel, he found that there are indeed many loopholes and very bad parts. In addition, this month's update was 3 seconds late and Quanqin was canceled. The author decided to open a new book and start writing it again. Of course, the protagonist is still our Kakashi-sensei! ! The author of the new book title and link will be published in the book review area in a few days. I hope that all readers who love Naruto and Kakashi-sensei will continue to pay attention...[Fn=2_7]

The author has benefited a lot from the opinions put forward by many senior book friends, so he specially opened this page as an opinion collection column. The author will also further improve the previous chapters. I hope everyone can provide more useful opinions. Thank you all!