
Douluo Peerless: Huo Yuhao Becomes a Disciple of Xiao Yan Yaochen
斗罗绝世:霍雨浩拜师萧炎药尘
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 3d ago
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If Xiao Yan knew the following things, he would probably persuade Huo Yuhao to leave Shrek quickly. 1. The competition between Beibei and Sanshi. Although Beibei's purpose is to help Huo Yuhao, the normal competition in the academy requires the help of outsiders to cheat. This is not good. It is not a life and death game. There is really no need to worry about this or that in a life and death game. 2. Regarding Ma Xiaotao's problem, the school itself did not supervise it strictly. The original work was not Tianmeng Iceworm. Huo Yuhao was most likely stunned on the spot. Even if the school later compensated him, the nature of the problem was much more serious. In addition, Zhou Yi's outrageous teaching methods are actually accepted by Shrek. This school is full of unreliable people.
Why don't you run away? I recall that Xiao Yan had already gone out to practice with Yao Lao at this stage, why did he still stay at Shrek? A Wang Donger bomb is still burning the fuse, but Ma Xiaotao and Zhou Yi are not reliable. According to Xiao Yan and the others, they had already taken Huo Yuhao away.
Suggestions: 1. It's too white and can't be modified with AI. It starts with Huo Yuhao angrily escaping from the Duke's Mansion. Huo Yuhao now and then immediately uses the system. When he escapes, add some action descriptions and tone modifiers. This is no problem. There is a system where the upper body is the focus. Before The above description is not important and can be saved. After reading this chapter, it is said that the author has read a lot of books. You can refer to the beginning of these books. In my words, I will start with the description of Huo Yuhao leaving the Duke's Palace, his hatred and actions, and the plan to go to a safe place to think about how to become stronger in the future before the system appears. 2. In terms of communication, Huo Yuhao should be more surprised to know the origins of Xiao Yan and the others. After all, at this time, he only knew the existence of Douluo Continent. For example, a world without martial arts in the way of cultivation? There is no need for the existence of soul rings, but he must be respectful. Xiao Yan and Yao Lao are seniors in another world to him, and they are also important guides for his possible revenge. 3. Yao Lao and Xiao Yan are both people who have experienced great storms. They do have a certain degree of sympathy for Huo Yuhao's experience, but they will definitely emphasize that no matter which world, strength is the most important. Without strength, you cannot take revenge on the Duke's Palace. They will also observe Huo Yuhao's character. After all, Yao Lao was cheated by Han Feng, and they also need to know more about Douluo Continent's world view.
So who are Yuhao's girlfriends, Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Qiu'er?
It's so beautiful. It's fun to write novels. It's great. Keep writing.
Author, you wrote this novel really beautifully. Keep up the good work and don't stop updating. I believe we can sign a contract.
Douluo Dalu is over? The rest of the plot in the world?
Xiao Yan and Yao Chen of the Great Master, isn't this just a fish fry? (I just don't know if Xiao Yan has broken through to dominate)
Can there be more heroines, Gu Yuena, Snow Emperor, Qiuer, Zhang Lexuan, Ye Guyi and Meng Hongchen?
Can there be more heroines, Gu Yuena, Wang Qiuer, Snow Emperor, Ye Guyi, Zhang Lexuan. May I
Personally, I still prefer Douluo Douluo linkage, especially the protagonist is Huo Yuhao (my first online article) 🎬 Plot: When should we leave Shrek? Dou Er's environment can be said to have its own gods and men. Shrek's kind is considered lighter, but the god king may go crazy, so it's best to leave quickly. After all, a gentleman is not conducive to being under a dangerous wall.
Will Youquan appear? In the original novel, such a young Dou Wang decided to take charge of his first apprentice, but no such person was found later.