Night Talks of the Red Chamber

The story is not bad, but there are many bugs. For example, going from Jinling to Youzhou, you will pass by Yellow Crane Tower along the way, and the last stop in Youzhou is Jingzhou... I feel like I'm going to laugh out loud. Does the author know where Jinling, Jingzhou, and Youzhou are?

The comment section said that this article cannot withstand scrutiny, which is indeed true. I just saw Chapter 2 and there are all kinds of bugs. Since Lin Ruhai knew that the Jia family had killed her unborn child, she still sent this one alive. You don't know what your daughter's character is? Sending an innocent little rabbit to a wolf den with a group of old wolves inside, a fool can predict the outcome. Is this because he is afraid that Lin Daiyu will not die quickly enough? Is there something wrong with Lin Ruhai's brain? Furthermore, even if Mrs. Wang has a grudge with Jia Min, it is not a mortal enemy. Jia Min is already married. If you reach out so far to harm the child in Jia Min's belly, what will you get if you succeed? For the Lin family property? Don't be ridiculous, how likely is this? Although it seems that the Jia family embezzled a lot of Lin family property in Dream of Red Mansions, how much is it? Lin Ruhai is not a fool! Mrs. Wang never thought about what if she failed? There must be a hole in this head.

I would like to ask if there are any novels about traveling through time or being reborn in the Red Mansion to fight for world hegemony?

This is a female channel novel, my words are really poisonous

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw that Xiangyun and Baochai, whom I like, were described in such a bad way. This is all nonsense, it has changed the character's personality beyond all recognition!

This Lin Daiyu is really too cute and annoying to watch. She doesn't have any intelligence at all.

When it comes to writing about Dream of Red Mansions, this is my favorite book. I feel that the angle it touches on Dream of Red Mansions is very good, and it has less impact on the original feeling of Dream of Red Mansions.

I've been so poisoned that it makes sense to forcefully change the character's personality for the sake of the plot? What do you mean this is fan fiction after all? Author Do you know what fan fiction is? Fan fiction usually follows the settings and worldview of the original characters, and real fans have higher requirements. If you look at Japanese works, the FATE series or the side stories of the JOJO series, they are all required to follow the original settings - FA and others are called scumbags by many fans because their plots and worldviews are inconsistent with the original settings. For the sake of the plot, various forcible cheats or forced intelligence are required. On the other hand, works like Mo Yi perfectly restore the world view of the original work, and also add their own settings, which makes them popular and continues to produce comics and animations.

After reading more than forty chapters, let me share my thoughts: I feel that the author's writing style is pretty good. There are no big mistakes except for some typos, but there are also some problems. First, there are too many inexplicable characters, such as domestic slaves, maids, relatives and children created out of thin air, unknown scholars, officials, and nobles... I don't see any actual effect of these people on the plot. How can a passerby know the word count? Second, the protagonist has too few scenes and too many side descriptions. Immediately following the first question, the insignificant supporting characters are much less important than the protagonist. It is not impossible to write supporting characters or profile descriptions, but the premise is that your protagonist and the main plot must be prominent. Otherwise, it is putting the cart before the horse and traveling through the Red Mansions. What you are looking at is development and hegemony or love stories, rather than three aunts and six wives. Which servant was punished? What happened to so-and-so's relative? Is it related to the main plot?

Why are there so many negative reviews? The writing is obviously very good! A novel with a strong Red Mansion flavor. It's just that this work doesn't cater to the audience, and it's not a good read. If you are tired of reading the "Beautiful House" fanfic, you can read this one. Although it is not a perfect novel, it is indeed worth reading!