A Reborn Couple's Leisurely Life in the Red Chamber

The biggest reason why I can't read this book is that it's not divided into sections. One paragraph can take up the entire screen, which is really dizzying and oppressive.

I don't know why everyone is scolding Baoyu and Daiyu. It is clear that Baoyu in the article is a pure and good child, filial to his parents, friendly to his brothers, caring for his sisters, and very measured towards his maids. He just fell in love with Daiyu. Let's not talk about the destined fate of the two. Such a beautiful relationship does not need to be criticized like this, right? It's not wrong to fight for the one you love in front of your parents, right? This is also a man's responsibility. If you think about it from another person's perspective, if someone's boyfriend's parents don't like him and he breaks up without saying a word, what else will he do with his life? Just be a yes man and put your parents first in everything. Who dares to touch such a man? It is also said in the "Disciple Regulations": If a relative has a fault, he should be remonstrated with me, my appearance should be pleasant, and my voice should be gentle. Here Baoyu didn't completely ignore his parents' feelings because of love? In reality, I don't know how many people refuse to listen to their parents' advice and insist on marrying for love. If they can't do it themselves, who have the right to ask others? Speaking of Daiyu, when I was watching Dream of Red Mansions when I was little, I thought that Daiyu was petty and careless, looking for trouble. But when I grow up, I understand more. Daiyu lost her mother when she was young. She left home at a young age and went to a completely unfamiliar place. She is still a big family that worships those who are superior and those who are inferior. , We have to consider not to be looked down upon and embarrass our parents and relatives, but also to please the elders, not to make mistakes at every step, the evil people whisper, words are like sharp blades, a little girl of six or seven years old, still has a sensitive and thoughtful temperament, how good can she do? Rumors in ancient times and online violence today. I wonder how well everyone in real life can do if they encounter the same situation? I really hope that Daiyu can have a good ending. There is no doubt that the heroine and his wife in the article consider their children. After all, people are selfish, and no one wants their children to be hurt in the future. This is every parent's expectation, but judging from the ending of the article, this is for Daiyu. This is the best ending for Jade. Not to mention the trivial life of food, rice, oil and salt in the future, at least now she has elders who love her and a husband who loves her. Even if it becomes dull in the future and there is no love, there will still be family affection, and she will always be able to live a safe life. It is also far away from the ending of the original novel where the swords and winds are forcing each other. If there really is such a time and space, and such a story happened, I hope Daiyu can have such an ending. The old saying goes that young people don't read Red Mansions and old people don't read Three Kingdoms. It's really not unreasonable. In short, regardless of the writing style or details, the author's story is well written!

This book is very good, but it's a pity that it was published too early

It's hard to describe the male and female protagonists in one word. . . If you don't have enough experience and writing skills, don't set the character to be anything. The seventy or eighty-year-old protagonist can't control the time travel and rebirth at all What's more, the identity settings of the heroine and the hero are very good. As a result, the thoughts and ideas in the article are more ancient than those of the ancients. They have no personality charm and are simply both upright and established. ? It feels like the heroine, besides dealing with her mother-in-law, missing her husband, taking care of her children, and trying to change her destiny by referring to the plot of the original work, what she thinks about every day is that her mother-in-law has given her husband a concubine, her husband has been tricked into giving her a concubine, and the maid next to her is the concubine of her husband in the original work, and so on. . . There is even a rift between Jia Min and the heroine. Is it because Jia Min feels that the heroine is not virtuous and jealous if she does not take the initiative to help her brother take concubines? ? ? What the hell is the setting? And the male protagonist doesn't look like a soldier at all. . . The male protagonist is written to love the female protagonist very much, but you can't feel it at all. I just feel that the male protagonist is an authentic ancient male I feel that the male and female protagonists in the author's writing just follow the context of the original work and make some changes, but not much anyway. They are all trivial matters in the family, and the parts involving house fighting and power schemes are not very clever. It is a waste of the theme and setting Although there are many bad people in the original work of Red Mansions, there are still many shining characters, and the girls are even more beautiful, beautiful, and beautiful. The whole result is written here. A woman came out just to seduce someone and become a concubine. All kinds of calculations. Just a maid. Even the young lady wanted to be a concubine. The young lady from the Xue family plotted against the heroine's brother. The second young lady from the Xing family plotted against the heroine's husband... But they also accepted it. On the contrary, It's the bad people in the original work, such as Wang Ren, who were cleansed and turned into outstanding young men. Jia She is no longer a dandy. The problem is that they don't focus on how to educate them. Is it because of the existence of the male and female protagonists that God favors them and all the people related to the male and female protagonists ascend to heaven? Hey, the author's writing power and thoughts can't keep up with the rhythm. The writing is stinky and long. . . (Personal feelings: Gang means you are right)

I don't read any stories about Jia Baoyu who are whitewashed or disguised as Jia Baoyu. Red Mansion hates Jia Baoyu the most, then Jia Mu and Mrs. Wang. Because the diaphragm responds very well

The heroine's character was fine before, but once she entered V, her character was really awkward.

Regardless of the writing style, just what you wrote, those who know it are you writing a novel, but those who don't know it think you are writing an essay.

This. . . The red envelope didn't come out very quickly. Here is my sincere blessing: I hope the era of Dream of Red Mansions will never leave, and I hope the atmosphere when the Dream of Red Mansions became popular will not be forgotten.

Chapter 72: Was it swallowed? What is it about?

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