Amber Sword

No matter how many shortcomings "The Amber Sword" has, no matter how much Brando's later harem ruined the image he established in the early stage, this is the only novel I have read that is unique and shines with classical idealism. Different from Western-style fantasies such as "Blasphemy" and "Dust of History" that have a heavy sense of fate, or the novice novels that started from a bad street, or the popular Greek novels, Amber Sword has the style of Japanese light novels but is not limited to this. It is a unique game-style fantasy masterpiece. The protagonist Brando fights for his ideals from beginning to end, runs for his emotions, and overcomes obstacles for his unchanged original intention. This is also the charm of his person and the novel. And all of this is inseparable from Pneumonia's excellent writing. Only such writing can hold up a rich and colorful fantasy world, showing the charming style and distinctive characters of another world, and the huge and wonderful setting. I have not seen such descriptive skills that are suitable for writing fantasy in other novels. For example, "The Saint" is too obscure. It pursues gorgeous writing and loses the integrity and logic of the world view. It is overshadowed by too long and cumbersome descriptions. Of course, it is still an excellent fantasy. Getting back to the topic, I have only seen idealism in the protagonist Brando. Probably only Cohen in "The Stranger" has a similar temperament, but he is a different character. It is a pity that if Brando had not included the eldest princess and the Valkyrie, his love for Eruin and his desire to save the tragic fate of the two ladies would have been more convincing, and the image would have been more glorious and majestic. This is a pity for female readers. Of course, I understand that if Pneumonia does not write about the harem, a considerable number of male readers may be lost. However, it is also an undeniable fact that the characters are separated from the front and the image is shattered, especially the plot of being pushed down by the prime minister's daughter. Is it the limitations of otakus or the bad nature of men? As long as she's a beautiful woman, she doesn't care if she's dirty or smelly? Too picky. However, even though there are some shortcomings, such as Root Cut, Eunuch (Heart of Canaan), unclear main line, bloated copies, haremization, which has caused the originally brilliant female characters to become dull or even collapse (a very pity for Akane), etc., The Amber Sword is still excellent. His works, his idealistic color, or the romantic spirit of game addicts, are so cute and touching. Probably only those who are deeply involved in the second dimension or those who are serious gamers can understand this feeling. However, there is only one "Amber Sword" in the fantasy and game categories that can write such feelings. Salute.

The book is really good as written in the front, but Delphine becoming the heroine is too bad. Damn it, it feels like eating shit. I don't want to spoil it, but I am really speechless. Roman, princess, Freya, there are so many you can't choose. Why do you choose this one? Why on earth? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?

The idea and plot of the book are good, but it's a pity that the author doesn't cherish them. First, there are too many typos and many sentences are not smooth. Two, repeating chapters is also intoxicating. On these two points, we can see that the author has an indifferent attitude towards his work. He did not check or modify it, and he was completely perfunctory. Third, there are long paragraphs of white text description, and there is pitifully little description between the characters. The highlights of Madala's breakout are in the front, but those who don't know later think that the substitution is writing history! No wonder when I read the previous article, I also wondered why this book was not popular and there were so few reviews. The author sets the protagonist as a character who regains glory and faith for Eruin. The previous article makes people excited and full of sense of responsibility. Unexpectedly, the author's perfunctory behavior has already deviated from the original intention of setting up the protagonist. I am no longer interested in when this book started and when it ended. But for a book that has been completed, I am afraid that the author has never reviewed it again. This is disrespectful to the readers and a great insult to the work itself. To sum up the full text, it is not that readers have abandoned this book. But just like the oath made by the late Lord Eruin under the Lion Heart Sword in the article, when the Eruin people forget their original oath, the Lion Heart Sword will no longer protect the empire.

I came here to replenish my ticket. I read it once a long time ago, and later it became a must-have for archeology whenever I ran out of books to read. Along with Silent Crown, Demon King's Dad, and League of Legends, I read these books in rotation throughout the night, and I read them in rotation from the time I graduated from junior high school to college. It's a very good story, but after all, many parts have been interrupted for a long time, and there may be some problems with the rhythm and logic. But this is indeed the most epic novel I have ever read (Zhu Xian is actually quite epic) This was the first time I saw such a group portrait novel, and I was immediately attracted to it. But because it is a group portrait, the perspective keeps turning around, and there is often a long part of the protagonist that cannot be seen. Although this does make people feel that the world is moving, it is also because of this that the protagonist cannot save people, and it is difficult to wrap up everyone. If not, it will feel regretful. After all, so much ink has been spent on shaping these less important characters. All I can say is that a book cannot tell everyone's stories. In order to allow more people to express themselves, the roles of many people in front of me have to be given out. (You can't always be around the protagonist, right? Ciel hasn't done it yet.) But it's much better than some reincarnation streamers who always like to build a collection of geniuses from previous lives, but it ends up being of no use. Speaking of which, it seems that many people think that the protagonist should vigorously develop the army and so on, which feels a bit problematic. After all, the final war belongs to everyone. If the protagonist's army is completely destroyed at dusk, it will be much less powerful. Conquering the world is not as epic as the Ancient Covenant. (But why does Antitina's steam engine seem to have such an impact on the development of the territory) In addition, the layout is indeed quite subtle, and the iconic Roman numeral title () sometimes makes it difficult to find the climax based on the title. Speaking of the plot, the card playing in the Extremis Trojans is quite interesting, but after the protagonist assigned the deck to the planeswalker creatures, we rarely saw that kind of scene. The cards basically did not affect the protagonist's battle situation, and there were no cards to intervene in the supporting characters' battles. Except for Char's pretense once, it was only mentioned occasionally. Although it is well known that Not Lazy is a princess hunter, the content related to the eldest princess's marriage and the prime minister's daughter is also a bit confusing. Maybe it's because of the author's xp? By the way, I still don't understand how she survived. How many people can Bai's Gaia authority survive? Although the lobbyist plot of the prime minister's daughter in the end is indeed her highlight. In many places, it can be seen that the author writes with great enthusiasm, but sometimes it always feels like there are too many repetitions, just like the repeated themes in the writing to force the topic. Well, Eta has been chasing me anyway, and it can be seen that the author is trying to stop it. Although some parts feel a bit boring, just follow it slowly. After all, I have endured such a long break. It is a blessing to see updates ()

Even in the middle and later stages of the story that have been criticized, the quality is not bad. What really makes readers feel bad is that as time goes on, the story becomes larger and larger, and there are more and more interactions and connections between characters. The protagonist is certainly the protagonist, but the various forces are by no means NPCs. They do not have influence and interaction until they interact with the protagonist. This can refer to A Song of Ice and Fire. When Dragon Mother or Snow is taking action, other forces and other characters are also taking action. The collision of various forces and characters in their development and actions is very interesting. Another example is the early and middle stages of Amber, from the single line of the protagonist escaping, to the protagonist line, the princess line, and the other nobles' line of causing trouble. The three lines develop and collide at the same time. This section is very beautiful. I believe everyone should have a very deep impression on this section. As Amber's story develops, theoretically there should be many, many such lines. At least but not limited to: one for the alliance between the protagonist and the princess, four for the four empires, one for the undead, one for the silver wizard, one for the villain, and one for the dusk. And each force has varying degrees of complexity within it. At the same time, as the story develops, the content of the story also develops from adventure to a game between forces, so the strategy, diplomacy, and strategic game between various forces should also become one of the main objects of description. This is even more difficult to think about and write about. Moreover, the author's favorite emotions and adventures cannot be left behind. I guess the author had to summon the heroic spirits of Luo Guanzhong and Tolkien to write everything well. Therefore, the author can only turn the characters and forces outside the protagonist's side into NPCs and make the story one-line, that is, "only when they interact with the protagonist will they have influence and interaction." This leads to the reader feeling "shrunk" in the middle and late stages of the story. The core reason why I personally like Amber is that I can feel the protagonist's sincerity and the author's sincerity, and sincerity is the most touching. As Celibidak said, "Music does not equal beauty, but truth." The same is true for literature. Literature does not mean beauty, but truth. Finally, I hope the author can continue his efforts and write better works.

There is another volume that I really can't stand anymore, so I'm going to write a post-reading review in advance. Of course, I don't think anyone will see this post if I write it now, but I still write it to give an explanation to each character in the novel. Until the Frost Forest and before, the quality of this book cannot be said to be good, especially before the Battle of Ampelsel, it is the best of the best. Some books have become very popular in recent years, but only because of their complete world view and smooth plot. This type of novel is already very good as an online novel, but this book gave me an epic feeling like reading "The Lord of the Rings", and it is also very game-like and has a strong sense of satisfaction. It has both. I thought this was rare in online writing. There are no problems in the early plot, and the characters are even more complete. I especially like Valkyrie and Griffin, the latter even more. I was often angry because of her marriage to Anlek, and sad because she was ruthlessly killed after being worthless. I often remember a sentence in the article, "No one knows that these weak shoulders will bear the entire future of Eruin." This sentence describes Eruin's precarious status quo, Griffin's responsibility, and her inner weakness but tenacity. At the age of 16, I have to deal with old people, and I am forced to be strong, which is heartbreaking. Brando helped the building to collapse, saved every person in danger, and changed every story that was destined to end in tragedy. Whether it's the battle between old and new white lions or the army of silver elves, the vast epic feeling is overwhelming, and it's hard not to bring tears to your eyes. It's a pity that those who have a good beginning will become more successful, and those who can overcome the end will be overwhelmed. In the middle period, Valkyrie, Griffin, and Antitina were left in Eruin in order to send envoys to the empire. These three characters were the most written in the early stage, but they were left behind here. I felt very uncomfortable reading it. There are a lot of bad points in the ending, I just want to talk about the emotional line here. The author previously laid out a lot of lines about various characters, but in the end the story ended with an embrace with Delphine. The shogunate lady, the merchant lady, Griffin... All became the background, especially this day was the wedding of Griffin and Brando, not to mention Freya, who didn't even appear. This is really unpleasant. In the future, I may replay the early stages, for the quirky business lady, the blushing Freya, the weak and strong Griffin, the epic battle, the heroic Brando, and this unforgettable journey I experienced with them. Even though amber has so many shortcomings, I am still willing to applaud the early stage of this book. As the author said, "Being able to meet each other is people's best hope"!

I think this book can be considered a masterpiece up to Deathfrost Forest. In terms of creating an epic feel, it is still considered excellent even now. On this basis, some small flaws are not so conspicuous. The only thing that really bothered me during this episode was the pneumonia habit. I called everyone xx. , Maybe this was a characteristic of the Japanese otaku culture back then, but putting it in a fantasy epic novel would have too much of an impact on the atmosphere. This is especially true for the two characters. As we all know, most people would not call me "sama" when addressing senior... Imagine calling my president in FF14 "sama"... A chill came to my heart, okay, but I could at least tolerate this at the time, just treat it as a Japanese cuteness, but in the plot of the protagonist's grandfather In it, there are two paragraphs where the protagonist has changed from a stern sword-training teacher to a caring grandfather. When the atmosphere of family affection is also the main focus, the word "grandfather" is enough. It is really unbearable to bring an adult who emphasizes class differences. But after all, this paragraph is very epic. If the demon invasion is solved at that port and Eruin's fate is different, then it ends directly, then I can say that this is definitely a masterpiece of short stories. Then we come to the Empire chapter, which I think has big problems. First of all, the hidden clues are buried, that is, the exploration of the mystery of the secret of the Second Holy War is average. There are basically no clues for readers to participate in discussion and thinking. It is completely necessary to squeeze out a little information when the time comes, but this small problem is not a big deal in the face of the collapsed character creation. First of all, there is Akane. She was a senior mercenary when she first joined the team, but in the Death Frost Forest, she completely turned into an eight-year-old child with golden upper-level strength. Oh, the lord is missing, what should I do, she is too mentally retarded... Especially when she was captured, I remember that the Sky Spear gave her a passive, and those with lower levels than her could not cause damage to her. As a result, she faced a group of enemies who couldn't break her defenses. It happened that there was a weapon that could break through her defenses. It happened that the weapon could sneak attacks. It happened that the weapon had a debuff that could not be dispelled after breaking the defenses. It happened that a senior mercenary had the intelligence of a child. He didn't pay attention to others' sneak attacks in a group of enemies who couldn't break their defenses, so he was caught. This was such a fate. Then there is the granddaughter of the prime minister, who suddenly evolved from a brainless resentful woman to a genius think tank. The foreshadowing was only one sentence, and the reasons for making up for it later made no sense to the naked eye. You said she was the protagonist who expressed anger, so why are you, the tree shepherd, the subject of the anger, not angry at all? You are the Prime Minister of the Empire's Shadow, and you have never seen the Empire's response. What action did the tree herder take? At the same time, a prime minister was running around, and he personally attacked the protagonist with four unfamiliar mercenaries. You told me that this was something a smart and powerful person would do, not to mention the mentally retarded behavior when he came as an envoy. There was no sign of a smart person at all. After talking about the issue of individual character creation, let's talk about the overall character creation. I personally think that in group dramas, not all characters should be written as main supporting roles. There are too many people added in the empire chapter (well, mainly the granddaughter of the prime minister), which leads to the description of main supporting roles. It's not enough. For example, Freya, Sugar Bowl, Kiana who suddenly lost her voice in the second half of the Empire Chapter (making way for the Prime Minister's granddaughter?), Pasimir (that's the name, it's the planeswalker creature, basically a pure tool), and even Charr has no role in the Empire Chapter, which is really bad. We'll talk about it later after I finish it. The last time I watched it, I remembered that I just finished the Empire chapter because it wasn't finished.

After reading more than 90% of this book, I couldn't bear it anymore and had to give up. . . The greater the expectation, the greater the disappointment. This is clearly demonstrated in this book. To be honest, this book adaptively overcomes the somewhat uncomfortable reading experience caused by frequent transitions and a bunch of small "old book" highlights. It is a very good work. The writing is excellent and has a strong epic feel. In my mind, it deserves at least four and a half stars. It is one step away from being a masterpiece. But once I lost the filter, I felt uncomfortable watching every part of it, and now I don't want to watch the rest of it.        ，，，，，， Moreover, at this time, the strength is already sage, and the top level strength in the world is still doing such childish things. Your entire territory is just a part of a small, remote country. There is no one in the entire country whose strength is three levels lower than yours. It is not an exaggeration to say that a max-level boss returns to Novice Village. Anyone who you touch will not be an instant kill?       ，，，？ But in fact, in addition to reducing the trust of the people, it has the effect of promoting trade. You leave this real and fake Monkey King to a bunch of common people to judge. You might as well use the flying ability you have at this level to fly to the capital in a few seconds to put down the rebellion and save your wife. You are still looking for a reason to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger in this small town to hang up the mastermind. I put it bluntly, what kind of big fish can you catch in this small place? Why don't you fly to the center of the rebellion and directly hang up the mastermind?        ，，，，，， If you don't treat a bunch of good women well, you will be sincere to a bad woman. This protagonist is definitely one of those who like Makima now. I can only say that I will read book reviews carefully before reading a book in the future. I will never read a poisonous book again. It's so uncomfortable that it ends in an anticlimax.

The viewing experience this novel gave me: listening to other people telling stories The viewing experience of other novels: reading the story myself The former is highly subjective and leaves little space for readers to freely use their imagination The latter is more suitable for readers to freely use their imagination and is more scalable

I saw half of it before but stopped watching it. I forgot why. I'll give it a second try this time.

It has been read 40% of the time on the recommended book list. Since many people said it fell apart at the end, and even the excellent parts at the beginning have a lot of bad points, I can't stand it anymore. This is just a personal review. First of all advantages: 1. The background setting is very grand   2. The game settings/skills are novel.             3.，              4.，40%， This may be limited by factors such as time/update interval, etc., But in the end it comes down to the quality of the work. For readers, it means whether the writing is good or not. It cannot be said that "the author is a primary school student, and it is already great if it is written like this" 1. Serious reading 2. There are many places where the character's behavior before and after does not match the setting (the difference between before and after setting is large) 3 . The drama/light novel flavor is too strong (limited to the fact that the background of the novel is not very relaxing, I personally don't like it) 4. The pace is slow and the emotional line is very confusing 5. Sometimes there are unreasonable intellectual behaviors Non-content problems 6. There are many spoilers in the comments + just leave if you don't like it In summary, it is a work with obvious advantages and disadvantages.

To be honest, the writing is very good, but the timeline is a bit hard to follow. It jumps to the next chapter and then jumps back to the next chapter. I know this is foreshadowing, but it is really uncomfortable to watch, you know?

As a reader of The Amber Sword, I have some regrets about this book. I first read this book in the second year of junior high school. At that time, The Amber Sword was about 1.5 Million words. I read it in two or three days. I thought it was so good. I went to the website to see if there were any other novels with this theme. I only found two that were relatively readable. One was The Summoning Holy Sword of Xibei Mao, and the other was The God of War Lord of Muniu Rumao. But to be honest, there is a big gap between these two books and The Amber Sword. Far, it can't help but because Amber Sword created a new genre, the game Alien World, and the world view of Amber Sword is more grand. Even when you first read it, you can feel the author's ambition. He wants to show us a grand world through the novel, instead of the ordinary online novel that just revolves around the protagonist's team adventure. The author seems not to create a novel like Douluo Continent, but wants to create a world like The Lord of the Rings. Therefore, there are a lot of scenes in The Amber Sword. , The description of the internal background and setting of the game, this description did not make me feel that the word count was low, but made me more interested in the book. The early content of the article made me more and more satisfied with the novel. After reading the first big chapter, leading the fellow villagers to escape from their hometown, it really gave me an amazing feeling. This was the first time I saw a work that was not Xiao Baiwen's work. It made me feel a new thing when Xiao Baiwen, who was still addicted to Tang San Tudou, could not extricate himself. The subsequent journey with the princess to revive the country is also very good, but the quality has begun to decline since the journey to the empire. It can be seen from the author's update speed that this is a turning point for the protagonist. At the beginning, the protagonist started his journey with an ideal of reviving the country. At this time, he began to come into contact with more things. The author wanted him to change from saving the country to saving the world. The author also began to release more ambitious settings and more inside stories, but there were too many The setting obviously made the author's writing power a bit uncontrollable. Why are so many online articles mainly focused on the protagonist, with very little description of other characters, and even less description of the grand world view? Because it is simple to write, it can be clearly seen that the author's update speed began to decline from this time on. In the later stage, many previous settings were even abandoned one by one in order to finish quickly. The power system collapsed. The amazing planeswalker system in the early stage was useless in the later stage. Various career systems are amazing in the early stage, and the job transfer system is useless in the later stage. You can directly become the strongest with a golden finger, and then sacrifice yourself to save the world. The amazing beginning, the struggling middle stage, and the clichéd ending. You can see the author's struggle in it, wanting to write a grand system. However, as the writing power becomes more and more difficult to control the grand system, writing becomes more and more difficult. With the pressure of eating, the final product of the compromise is today's Amber Sword, but I don't want to criticize the author, because this is actually not her fault. This is because the limitations of online articles make it difficult to produce grand works. A book of three million words is written in one year. As long as the update speed slows down, the results begin to decline, and the author begins to face the pressure of eating. The book Lord of the Rings took the author almost a lifetime to write, and it is impossible for all online article authors to write in this way, so it is naturally difficult to produce classics. In fact, if the author is willing to spend It takes a lifetime to complete The Amber Sword. Maybe it really can become a classic like The Lord of the Rings. Maybe 100 years later, many people will read The Amber Sword, but it is obviously impossible. The regret of The Amber Sword is actually the regret of the Internet. I I had also longed for the possibility that web articles might win Nobel Prizes in the future, but now I understand that as long as the writing method of web articles remains the same as it is today, even if it takes ten thousand years to write, there will be no Nobel Prizes or classics that can withstand the test of time.

It is said that the first half is a masterpiece, but I personally feel that it is just food. There are two places that are quite awkward. One is the cards that are incompatible with the world, and the other is the feelings of players in previous lives towards the country. As a modern person, we definitely can't deal with the decadent aristocracy (the ruling class), and we don't seem to have a common language with the ignorant and simple lower-class civilians (the subject). I don't know why there was such a strong sense of belonging that tens of thousands of people fought for it at all costs. Anyway, I don't see anything worth remembering. As for the large map in the early stage of the protagonist's game, those who didn't know it thought it was the motherland. It would be acceptable if it were the influence of the other half of the soul, but obviously not. The constant sensationalism is really annoying, and every few chapters there is a paragraph about love for the country, which is a bit unbearable.

Thank you Feiyan Although you like eunuchs, and you are still a fat man, and you are not a girl with big eyes, white skin, beautiful skin and wearing black stockings, but I still thank you I read The Amber Sword for the first time in high school. At first, I thought it was just an online game novel with an incomprehensible title and a complicated introduction. I took my MP3 player and originally planned to kill some time in the toilet and get through the biology class. I never thought that I would actually read this pirated novel that I accidentally downloaded. As a result, I made it through the math class and the Chinese class. After that, my classmates almost thought I died in the toilet. You guys, how come every heroine you write about can touch my heart, including the silver-haired elf, the curly-haired princess, and my favorite Freya, and of course little Roman. I watched Brando go from the small mountain village of Butchi, to his own territory, to the empire, to the outside of the world, to the final mirror lake. What does the Amber Sword look like? Is the King of Fire's flag still flying? Is Roman still Roman? I'd love to know, but I don't know. Some people say that this novel has collapsed in the later period. Indeed, the reading is obvious, the setting collapses, and the rhythm is disordered. But it is still one of the best online articles in my heart. What is Amber Flow? A novel like The Amber Sword. This question is still on my mind now. Confessions of a pirated reader who paid for his tickets.

The settings are complex, with various seams and piles of settings, but the logic between the settings is not clear The plot relies entirely on accidents, and the goal can never be achieved. There must be accidents on the road, and accidents follow accidents, a bunch of inexplicable copies The plot is not prioritized, small things are written in capital letters, big things are written in random, and every major event You must start to randomly switch perspectives and destroy your own rhythm Eating books on a daily basis, the logic cannot withstand scrutiny, and there are too many inconsistencies The character design is pretty good in the early stages, and it was also the shining point that attracted me to watch it at the beginning, but... It started to get confusing after the middle period. The male protagonist in the first two volumes really has an ancient feel. The feeling of being a classic knight becomes difficult to describe later on, the dialogue is often awkward and mindless, a bunch of mysterious operations, and there are so many plug-ins, but none of them work well... Even though there are scripts and plug-ins, every time it has to be deus ex machina to end Not to mention the inexplicable emotional scene, I shouldn't write it, don't write it. Fantastic female supporting characters are recommended randomly. The ones I want to see are either hidden or have explosive characters. Alas Looking at the whole story, the most praiseworthy thing is probably the epic feeling that sometimes existed at that time. It is understandable that it is called a classic, but it is better to keep the classics on the bookshelf. After all, the era is different. I really don't recommend getting into it (the most important words are too many and watery)

Yes, that's what I think! Fei Yan was born in the wrong fetus. With his character, he should be reincarnated as a lazy short-tailed rabbit in the ancient West! You guys, follow me to start an interesting rabbit hunting party and let the fat rabbits in the manor move! Our fun should be chasing prey... Otherwise this fat rabbit will die in peace🤭

There are so many things that are embarrassing... Not just a bunch of repeated chapters, but the first half is very good, very, very good. When it reaches 50%, it starts to eat the previous settings. Not only the settings, but also the gifts given out and the cause of death of the enemy. Then it reaches 51%. , The plot arrangement of Akane was forcibly taken away by the enemy nobles. Many people think that the ending of this incident is well arranged, and you can just let it go if you think it is good. However, a special character did not appear until halfway through the book. A woman who was a vicious supporting actress when she first appeared turned out to be one of the most important heroines! ! Roman and the Valkyrie are just short of being invisible. This vicious woman even took the male protagonist's first blood (I almost couldn't stand it when I rescued Akane and started this vicious female supporting plot again, so I just watched the finale), and on the last page of the last chapter, the one hugging the male protagonist is not Xiao Xiao. Little Roman is not the Valkyrie, not the silver elf princess, not the mountain girl Akane, not the aristocratic lady of the staff, not the eldest princess, not the senior sister, not the golden dragon lolita (this harem is really big), but this vicious female supporting character who only appears in the middle of the story, and she and the male protagonist happily embrace each other.

Looking back, the quality of "Amber" is not inferior to the popular "Secret" at all. The only thing that makes me a little resentful is saving the world. This makes the story a bit cliché and the openness is reduced. But on the other hand, who is not an online novel? It's really open-minded to write about a baboon. Isn't this another lifetime series? Fortunately, I have finished the book, thank you.

I came back to make up my vote. I didn't expect the comment area to be like this. I couldn't help but want to say a few words... The Amber Sword does have problems and shortcomings. It is different from the setting of orthodox western fantasy and online game novels, the emotional line that favors Japanese light novels, the flaws and routines of the novel more than ten years ago, as well as the author's pitfalls in some plot arrangements and later problems caused by long-term updates. These are all things that may make new readers unhappy, but this book is definitely not as bad as the comments section... Now that I think about it, Amber Sword can be summarized as a story about a technical nerd who travels to a different world where he is obsessed with the game worldview. With the wonderful use of game information and technology in his previous life (plus a little plug-in), he saves the game world, makes up for the regrets of his previous life, and changes the tragic fate of those kind and righteous people (by the way, he falls in love). Among them, what attracted me most at the time was the thrill of strategizing and predicting the enemy's opportunities, the grand epic feeling of another world created by Feiyan's meticulous description, and the sense of redemption of changing an unfair fate into a righteous one who defies heaven and changes his destiny... Thinking about it today, I still think this book is one of the first in the Western fantasy genre... Maybe it's my fan filter. I feel that the criticism in the comment area is too much. The advantages are not mentioned at all, and the shortcomings are magnified, and some are pure nonsense... So, if there are new people who want to get into the trap, please read it and try it yourself. It is indeed impossible for him to remain popular for more than ten years, but he can pull out the "amber flow" and attract people who come after him, and can be pulled out of the comment area after more than ten years to "touch" with the current top people. It is still worth a try, right?

I frowned the whole time I read it. The plot was too poisonous. Or because it is an old book, the plot is cliche. I don't recommend old book friends to come back and read it. The first part was fine. When I saw that the Dark Forest was inherited, it really made me vomit.

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Fans of The Amber Sword want to teach me how to read, so I have to give up this book. Such an elegant work is not suitable for me to read 😒

It's rare to talk about which character is the Virgin... Now that I see the male protagonist starting the plot of Valhalla, my blood pressure is really high. If after Roman forced the protagonist and his group into a life-and-death decision-making situation, the male protagonist still admitted that his sweetheart was the author's official palace, and the reason why the original owner's soul was causing trouble, let's ignore the rationality of the plot; then what kind of thing is Miss Faina of this empire? His words and actions from beginning to end were all about trying to kill the male protagonist, and even after being rescued many times, he kept mocking her. Perhaps from a God's perspective, we can see that the author wanted to write a tsundere image who has a crush but refuses to admit it, but what can we see from the male protagonist's perspective? A noble lady from an enemy country who is full of contempt for her own country and has no respect for herself who has saved her life many times. She only mocks and even drags her feet when facing a powerful enemy to expose herself and put her life in crisis? When she first appeared, she was taunting Eruin, making the male protagonist want to kill her with a sword, and then she was chased. If she was saved in order to avoid being retaliated by the Wind Sword Master, it would make sense; but after opening the gate of Valhalla, is there any need to bring such a thing that will only cause trouble? With all due respect, this kind of treatment can only be understood if I look at it from a God's perspective and speculate on the inner activities of this young lady; and then add that the male protagonist's sperm is reluctant to say a harsh word when he sees a beautiful girl, and then put it aside in the sun. This kind of love world view where everything is for the love of the male and female protagonists can be understood. I think a normal person, when being chased by an enemy who can easily kill him, and surrounded by a vase full of hostility towards him (from the perspective of the male protagonist), must choose to solve the problems around him first, so as not to be dragged down to death (there has been an example in the previous article where the young lady was exposed and paid a heavy price to escape temporarily), instead of giving her a few words indifferently, and then protecting her more tightly than himself.

Why are so many people suddenly criticizing me after so many years? This is outrageous.

"Oh, so why are they both the originators of the same type of novels? Fighting to Break the Sky and Douluo Continent can confer gods, and anime and TV series are constantly being remade, but Amber Sword can only be famous in a small circle. On the one hand, the plot is not coherent enough and part of the content is always omitted. On the other hand, the characters are too well-shaped and too literary and will not be accepted by the majority of readers. To put it simply, it is not relaxed enough and too heavy. It is really not advisable to arrange a large number of sadistic plots in order to let the supporting characters grow up, let alone "suppress first and then promote". No matter how perfect the final result is, at least you will make people unhappy in the first place. This is a fact. The technique of "depress first and then advance" is useful in many novels, but they will reveal some information in advance so that readers know in advance that the result must be perfect. The protagonists in it are either old silver coins, or they hide their strength, their potential, and their wisdom, so readers won't have that heart-wrenching feeling when reading it.

Nearly 6 million words were written in one week. I have long heard that Kohaku is the foundational classic of online game novels. After reading it, I also feel that many of the settings are really amazing. I originally had more to say, but someone in the discussion forum has already expressed a lot of what I want to say. So aside from the many flaws in Kohaku's later logic that made it difficult to reconcile or even collapse, I want to talk about Kohaku's emotional drama. The male protagonist is actually in a hurry. His belief in saving the country is so strong that he was called here. He non-stop uses his time-travel bonus to constantly try to change the long-destined future. Therefore, the daily parts in the work are extremely rare, even only a few chapters. Therefore, most of the emotional dramas are born and developed on the battlefield, between life and death. Miss Businessman should have had more opportunities to appear. The position given in the book is similar to that of spiritual friend and eternal fiancée. However, in fact, the relationship between Roman and Brando did not develop much from the beginning to the end (the first kiss and the first night are not yours) because the starting point is high enough (childhood sweethearts). In the later stages, the scenes were squeezed to nothing. It can be said that Roman's status in the book is more like a symbol, representing Brando's connection and obsession with the world. Freya, my favorite heroine, the future Miss Valkyrie. Medissa, Akane and Antitina have nothing to say. Companionship is the most affectionate confession. I like the little prince more than the princess. I have always had a bad impression of people married to politicians since Zhang Xiaomeng in Jianke, but I have to say that the author's final work on Princess Fusha was beautiful. Little female dragon Aloz, I know that you dragons are loyal to your partners. Is this the reason why you packed up you and your wife and sent them away? The two little female wolves were completely confused as to why they were also in the harem. Senior sister, the goddess I had a crush on in my previous life is traveling around the world. Andrrig, I like the vampire lady very much. Unfortunately, her later scenes were also squeezed, and she is not even as good as her younger brother. Delphine, the subtle daughter of the prime minister, gave me the impression that she was stupid and bad in the early stage. You damn, instead of taking revenge on the tree shepherd, you angered the male protagonist, and it showed that you overestimated your capabilities. However, in the later period, he transformed into the supreme wisdom. The sense of fragmentation of this image really made me uncomfortable. Then he slowly opened his heart to the male protagonist, died for him, just to be his queen, and finally returned like a miracle. I was indeed moved, but the inexplicable emotions affected how moved I was. This was just a change of personal profile. The author feels that he is unusually interested in fighting for love. Akane originally liked Eco, but they have not had any interaction since that day; Delphine also had a fiancé, but he was just a despicable villain who died in betrayal; the nun princess also had a sweetheart, and it was this sweetheart who finally pushed her to death; in Brando's guess, the princess also opened her heart to the knight (it should not be the case later in the reaction), but was betrayed at the most critical moment. In general, there is a big difference between the early Amber and the later Amber, not only in the plot but also in the emotional scenes. Akane had the most scenes in the early stage, and ended up being sent to Cruz for a whole volume. Although it ended up being the hero's winning blow to her heart, I always felt that it was because the author had written the text for other female protagonists. I also complained about Delphine's problems in the later period, but it was still very different from my original imagination. In the previous Internet writing environment, I might not expect too much, but it did leave a lot of regrets. Thank you for the reading enjoyment you bring me.

Every time I see the scene where the princess is forcibly kissed, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like the character is completely ruined. Why on earth was such a plot designed? Even if it's more of a foreshadowing, that's fine.

Amber has a unique temperament, maybe it should be called heroic? It is difficult for me to see this kind of temperament in other online articles, which is why I still like Amber very much to this day. I can only say that it is a pity that it failed in the later stage.

The book written ten years ago, even if viewed from today's perspective, is a true masterpiece, with an epic feel and gorgeous rhetoric without any pretense. The cleansing spirit in it makes everyone impressed. Although some of the descriptions are too passionate, the flaws cannot be concealed.