Midfield Madman

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by a woman. To be honest, I didn't pay any attention to the author's ID while reading. Aside from authors like Feng Huo Xi Zhu Hou, I don't really care about other authors. It wasn't until I read the author's notes in chapter 99 that I realized, oh my god, it's a female author.

She was perfect at 17; 15 was her biggest mistake.

To be honest, only finding out that the author is a woman just shows how different men's and women's aesthetic views are. The female lead had to include Selena Gomez and Emma Watson, and I really don't know where these two are. One has obviously had double eyelid surgery, and her whole face is a typical Barbie doll look. The other grew up to be ugly.

Huh? A female author? Wow! Unbelievable! A female author writing about football? I'm in awe!

Selena Gomez is so ugly 😫

The biggest flaw of this novel is the lack of visual imagery in the matches. If it had been described using a commentary style, I think I would have continued reading.

Joining the first team at 15 is too young. The author knows readers will definitely not accept it, but you still write it this way. Don't complain about the poor results; there are reasons for everything.

For sports novels, the lack of on-site descriptions of the matches is a major weakness, making them unexciting and mostly consisting of mundane psychological portrayals. More descriptions of the matches themselves, even the commentary and audience reactions, are needed. Less focus on intrigue and power struggles would make them more engaging.

The writing is delicate, but the problem is that this book, as a sports novel, lacks exciting moments; the passion of the game is deeply embedded in the psychological descriptions of all parties involved… Football novels can be written more simply.

Even if he became famous at a young age, this pig's feet are way too small! A little over 15, do you think it's a gorilla?