Midfield Madman

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by a woman. To be honest, I didn't pay attention to the author ID at all when reading this book. I don't pay much attention to other books except "The Beacon Fire" and "The Princes". When I saw the author's words in Chapter 99, I discovered that my God, she is a female author.

17 Years old is perfect, 15 years old is the biggest failure

To be honest, I only found out that the author is a woman. I can only say that the aesthetics of men and women are very different. The heroine has to be Selena Gomez, interspersed with Emma Watson. I don't know where these two are. One looks like she has plastic surgery on her double eyelids, and her whole face is typical of a Barbie doll. The other has grown up and become disabled.

Ha? Female author, wow! It's unimaginable that there is a female author writing about football, I admire her! ! !

Selena Gomez is too ugly😫

The biggest failure of this novel is that the game has no visual sense. If it were described in a commentary way, I think I would continue to follow it.

Entering the first team at the age of 15 is too young. The author knows that readers will definitely not accept it, but you still write like this. Don't complain if your results are not ideal. There are reasons for this.

For sports and competitive novels, there are too few descriptions of the game scene, almost none, and there is no passion in reading. Most of them are psychological profiles like running accounts. This is a failure. Write more about game scenes, even live commentary and audience reactions. Write less intrigue, so it will look better.

The writing style is delicate, but the problem is that as a sports novel, this book lacks explosive points. The passion of the game is deeply embedded in the descriptions of the hearts of all parties... Football novels can be written simpler.

Even if you become famous at a young age, these pig's feet are too small. After 15, you will be a gorilla.